Lucky Milk Group Is Four and a Half Years Old, and Her Five Brothers Are Chasing After Her.

The previous article is a bit incorrect and the latter article is wrong. Why did he become a teenager after two years when he was clearly four years old? Qibao has obviously taken the new teacher's class, but why didn't Qibao and the teacher know each other when he took Yuanbao and Zombie there? Didn't he only change teachers once? Moreover, Qibao also said that the second teacher has a very good character, but why does it not sound like he has a very good character when written in 262? I think the author can still improve. The current shortcoming is that the logic is illogical. The description of people's emotions in the article also feels very monotonous and not very rich. For example, when dad met Qibao at the beginning, he immediately recognized Qibao and immediately choked up and said that he would take Qibao home. I think this paragraph is missing. Why would he directly recognize Qibao when he has never met before? Is blood connection really so magical? Why is there so much less emotion in his process "Shocked ➡️Unbelievable ➡️Thinking ➡️Trying to accept ➡️Understand the child ➡️Accept the child ➡️Like the child" But the father likes the child directly after seeing it. I feel that this makes readers unable to empathize with the article. I only feel that I am reading an article. He cannot make me emotionally involved. I even wanted to abandon the article many times because it made me feel very boring. The writing is not advanced enough, the vocabulary is not enough, and the description is not complete enough. I hope the author can make progress and improve the shortcomings next time. The author can also refer to authors of the same type. Some authors are more emotional and some are more funny. I hope the author can find his own style and improve his shortcomings! (Yingxile?)