Battle Through the Heavens: I Am the Righteous Path

The author's writing style is the original idea of ​​writing fan fiction ten or even fifteen years ago. A simple summary is that the plot follows the original work to a large extent. The main purpose is to make up for the regrets of the original work, improve the logical deficiencies of the original work, and to a certain extent help fill in the pitfalls of the original work. Fewer additional time traveler protagonists are introduced. The impact on the world line in the early stage is only reflected in each event, paving the way for the future. In the middle and late stages, it will gradually change the direction of the plot in a form similar to the butterfly effect, leading to a better ending. The advantages and disadvantages of this writing method are obvious. The advantage is that the threshold is low. At the same time, because it closely follows the original plot, it eliminates a lot of work in outline planning and logical thinking. There is less chance of overturning in the early and mid-term. It is one of the best choices for new authors to hone their writing skills. Moreover, in the writing process, some pitfalls in the original work can be avoided, and the overall plot and text quality are guaranteed to a certain extent. But on the contrary, this kind of retro style is naturally lacking in novelty and excitement. In today's fast-paced era, it is basically difficult to gain more popularity. This can be reflected from the number of posts. On the other hand, since the plot is very close to the original work, if the article is not innovative and clever enough in plot treatment, it will easily appear boring and be criticized as criticizing the original work. So far, it seems that the author's words have been carefully crafted and it is very comfortable to read. The treatment of Yao Lao also made my eyes shine (white hair! Red pupils! Hiss!). For someone like me who can accept this style, the overall feeling is good and worth looking forward to.

One sentence to evaluate the current plot: Xiao Yan is about to gather the eldest ladies of the eight tribes.

The author's protagonist's character setting is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air among today's lowly people, but I personally feel that the problem is quite obvious. The first is the collapse of the training system. Similar to the start of the game, the younger generation of the Xiao family ignores their talent resources. Just relying on the protagonist's communication and supervising training, each person has surpassed many levels of combat. It is outrageous. And to be honest, writing like this except destroying the originally relatively solid training system, I don't see any effect. Maybe it just shocked passers-by a few more times? Secondly, the protagonist's justice becomes fragile and childish when it comes to the point where every penny counts. The protagonist feels that he can be driven to death by just a few calculations.

Everything else is okay, but the character of the protagonist is really stubborn and gives people a fake and empty feeling. It's not impossible for the protagonist to be a righteous protagonist, such as the protagonist of the Divine Seal Throne (although the three dogs are now rotten), the innocent heart, but your protagonist is really a bit awkward to watch. It can only be said that you use too much force.

People who read this book because of the harem should not read it. Except for the Little Medical Fairy, Yun Yun, Cai Lin, Feng Qing'er, Nalan, and Xun'er, the other so-called female protagonists are all just female supporting characters, and most of the characters, even if they are effeminate, are just NPCs with more roles at most. Of the six female protagonists just mentioned, two of them were persecuted by the author, one got pregnant early and raised the child by herself, one was jealous, and the other was a cuckold. The more you read, the less like a harem.

Just add Qinglin to the character page, such a cute little girl 😊

There is a lot of bad life, but when I see this Ziyun Winged Lion King returning to his ancestors and directly beating Taixu Ancient Dragon, I can't help but complain😇

Did the author have the idea to write a fool who is against the protagonist but just wants the protagonist to grow to what he needs and then achieves a goal at his own sacrifice? This is what the author wrote. It always feels like a timeline, a world that feels perfect and beautiful among thousands of world lines. Although beauty makes people feel happy, only regrets can make people remember them for a long time. After all, they are fans, and most of them are written in the hope of a perfect ending to solve the regrets in the original work. (I really look forward to the author writing his own original plot after the ending) After all, the author seems to have reached the level of strength (but I also want to see the author continue to write fan fiction to make up for the regret)

What I have seen so far, I really want to complain about the collapse of the combat power in the early stage. Everything else is fine, but this combat power... The fighting master kills the fighting spirit, the fighting spirit kills the fighting emperor... I am really numb.

As one reader said, the writing style is very relaxed and not so violent. It is unique among Dou Po fandoms (at least among the ones I read). It is very comfortable. I hope I can keep writing.