Reborn in Tokyo, the Beginning Made Me Pursue Yako Busujima

When reading fan fiction, it really hurts if the protagonist doesn't know the plot.

Nowadays, you can still see that the senior sister is really awesome. Is this a popular retro?

Poison Island Sword Princess, relatively speaking, I still like Takagi Yuriko, especially when she tears her cheongsam down to her thighs, she is so beautiful and sassy

Does Tokyo Rebirth's Gambit make readers ten years younger?

Don't blindly add heroines. Generally, 2-5 is the best. If you add more, it will inevitably lead to stereotypes. A person may read 7 or 8 novels a day. If there are too many heroines, the impression will be too shallow. It is better to have fewer heroines and repeat their names more to deepen the impression. Busushima's character is also the same as Luoti's apron incident. It can be seen that he will not show shyness after approving someone. Minami Rika is not so outrageous.

If it's weird, write zero: "The Miko of Rucrow", "Fang Xili" and "Hina Saki Fukaha" are very good-looking! !

The subject matter makes me happy, but the writing skills make me happy.

Nowadays, this kind of book can be serialized in popular series, which makes me speechless.

The name is disgusting, so just use one name. Two names are disgusting.

This introduction makes people don't want to read it. You can just set the time travel and write about how awesome you were in your previous life and what you were doing in your previous life.

Just reading the introduction, the author of this book is at least hundreds of years old.

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To be honest, the writing is not very good, but I really like the senior sister in the literary revival. She is really a rare animal. The small poison is not considered poisonous and can be tolerated. In other words, you can watch the ones with high poison resistance, but forget about the ones with low poison resistance. 😏

Isn't this a zombie fanfic? !

It feels like your book is going to explode. The following points need to be addressed. Basically, it will become cold when touched. Don't have anything about the Hua family, it looks awkward and embarrassing, this is a novel. Don't be innocent. I don't understand what position you are in. Now they are all ruthless people and minions, Prime Minister Cao. Assume that the patriarch of a cultivating family becomes the capital, and then the capital is reborn. The next life can only be the ultimate choice. Seeking the Tao is either a scumbag or a half-scumbag. There is also the positioning and appetite of readers.

That's stupid. Just go ahead and do it as a writer. You can't make this kind of money.

The most annoying thing is that one moment Li Mo, the other Ito

In the orphanage, as long as you are the protagonist Seizing Shen, even if you were an Immortal Emperor in your previous life, you have to shed your skin and fulfill the wishes of a mortal. Otherwise, you cannot level up due to cause and effect. As long as you are not the protagonist, even if you are a Qi practitioner Seizing Shen, you can do whatever you want, and you can directly reach the full level of cultivation, and there will be no hindrance in your cultivation.

The name alternates between Li Mo and Ito Sai. After reading a few chapters, I'm still confused and awkward.

I don't know why, but I always feel like I'm seeing the reincarnated Kanagawa high school student.

The latest chapter made me shake my head as I read it, most of it is off-topic.

There are too many typos. Please fix them, please.

I just read Chapter 4 and I have a question. Doesn't the author correct the typos?🤫

The sky is cold, the earth is cold, and the clear fields are cold to show their strength!

The pirates are not interested. Skip this section and watch again.

First world natives traveling through the second world? Excuse me

Try not to write about too many people, otherwise it will be difficult to write

By the way, is the author of the academy a master?