I'm a Hokage in Tokyo

I don't understand, my evaluation is a clichéd work on the assembly line. Start the system, gain strength, kill monsters, upgrade, go to school, meet by chance, hero saves beauty, short of money, want to work, but was thrown money by the blunt arrogant lady. This is where I see it. Basically equivalent to Japanese toilet paper from another world, but it can be animated. At first, I thought that the main character studied hard to get into Tokyo University for the sake of connections and research on chakra. But when I thought about the system-type ninjutsu mechanism, you don't need to study to add points, and I realized that you simply wrote it like this. This is good, because it would have been a bit more fun to write about the behind-the-scenes flow of the story, but it's a pity that it doesn't work. Then there is the classic school scene. I don't understand why a wretched character is chosen to be the protagonist. What does this ancient light novel character set off? What's the expressiveness of a supporting character without any highlight? And since you have shown the learning ability of the Sharingan, if you don't learn more, just show off your bluntness on the spot. There is also a classic club plot, does it have to include a sports one? The school motto is to prepare both civil and military students, so there is no literary club or anything like that. It wouldn't be a big deal to go to every club once to show off, but because it's too routine and bland the plot stands out, it's tiring. Then there are the flirtations during meals and the so-called eldest lady's part-time job. After the classic hero saves the beauty, the eldest lady becomes the student council president. It's nothing. What's wrong is what happened next. I want to express my gratitude and threaten him directly, right? It's okay to use your identity to make the teacher call the protagonist to the student union, but threatening to call the teacher every day when you don't want to get involved is a bit disgusting. The eldest lady you described has rubbish emotional intelligence and spends money against the will of heaven, which makes people speechless. She is otherworldly and has realized that she is the only extraordinary person in the human world. She has no dignity at all, right? Why is it that the protagonist on official wanted list is hostile, but the beautiful girl just beats him up and passes him by, right? Isn't that kind of money-splitting approach insulting? Why can't you ask your parents for food if you don't have money? The protagonist's father is not short of money, and the family is not in difficulty. What about the dignity of a time traveler? The protagonist has his memory awakened, right?

Let me share my feelings after reading about twenty chapters First of all, I have a question Chakra is needed to use ninjutsu. I don't know if I didn't read it carefully or if I didn't write how many ninjutsu the protagonist has. How many ninjutsu can he release? Or is it just like the reincarnation of the earth, with unlimited chakra? Then let me talk about a few poisonous points One: The protagonists of many types of books say they want to be low-key or vulgar after gaining abilities, and then turn around and start to steal the limelight within a few chapters. Either you don't write low-key in the first place. For example, the cooking and archery department! Some people may say that this is just daily life, but when I think of the low-key mentioned by the protagonist before, after reading it... 2: The daily plot is sparse and relatively cliché. I have been reading novels for almost 20 years, which does not mean that cliché plots are not good, but the key is to see how you write. You always write some inexplicable things. Coupled with the old routine, I basically know what is written next just by looking at the title or the first hundred words. Three: The Archery Department seems to me to be the strangest place at the moment. I know that I want to hang up a ghost department so that I can have extra time to practice skills. Then during the visit, during the first attempt, I had to ridicule a few sentences and watch the video. After copying it, I had to show myself to others. After that, I wrote to several departments to try? Do you think the preface does not match the postscript? It doesn't advance the plot, and the writing is confusing every day.

Why does every novel like this have to lick a woman? It's as if it can't be written without a woman.

To be honest, this book has already come to an end. The protagonist is already invincible, and then there is a conspiracy with the government, and the protagonist is like a holy mother who is afraid to kill everyone. (If you start killing people in 50 chapters, you can rule Japan, and in 100 chapters, you can rule the earth. The author obviously wants to write 500 chapters in the name of not killing people randomly, and then there will be another 500 chapters with an alien invasion or flying out of the earth to fight with Otsutsuki, and then it will be just right to finish a thousand chapters)

If you live a small life and are short of money, you will die if you just grab it. You still work like a dog and you laugh to death!

It is said that Gou is developing, but he directs and acts on his own.

The covers are exactly the same, so just flip them over

Second place

The monthly ticket has been given. Don't be an eunuch easily.

Nagato's Earth Blast Sky Star hollowed out more than a dozen mountains Madara's meteorite was several kilometers in diameter Madara's Susano and Hashirama's Bokuto fist punch left a crater with a diameter of dozens of mountains A certain chunin was able to carry hundreds of tons of rocks During the chuunin exam, Xiao Li ran and trampled more than ten meters of rock floor The second stage of the ten-tailed beast jade washed the continent Tsuchikage easily carried an island Dilada's self-destruction radius was 10 kilometers The Konoha that Nagato destroyed with one blow was actually a city state with a diameter of tens or hundreds of kilometers Shitora's Hiutora was bigger than Kameshima and did not kill Kikao

No matter what, the ninjas in Naruto are assassins with high attack and low defense. Except for the Susanata Buddha, even Kumogakure's Thunder Release Kai is easy to break through for modern thermal weapons. It may be able to withstand an RPG, but can it withstand a Tomahawk cruise missile? There is also the difference in air superiority, but in modern society, all types of fighter aircraft have outstanding combat capabilities. For example: a "Warthog" A-10 attack aircraft flew from the US military base in Japan carrying all weapons (18 225kg MK-82 bombs and 1350 rounds of 30mm cannon shells). I wonder how many hits the Third Generation Raikage can take? So, the protagonist must pay attention to this aspect of defense. If one day comes when it is no longer possible to hide it, not to mention nuclear weapons, conventional weapons must at least be defended in order to be feared.

I am also a long-time reader, and I really like novels in which spiritual energy is revived and the mastermind behind the scenes reveals himself to others. This genre was popular for a while in 2018 and 2019, and then became a niche. Writing about this genre at the end of 2022 is really, a bit out of step with the trend. Although there are many good novels nowadays, I have a special liking for this genre. If I don't have a book to read, I can only read it myself. The end of the book shortage is to write it yourself. I am sincere in saying this. When you write a book by yourself, you no longer have to worry about a book shortage, because after writing a book, you won't have time to read (laughs). Newbie, new book, please forgive me for any shortcomings.

After the appraisal, the style and writing are inconsistent. It's not like you don't carry a knife after the rain. (Hope it will be helpful to some book friends) Of course the author's style is very unique, and he is very patient, and the future is promising. This is not a provocation, no malice intended, and I apologize if it offended me.

Only now have I discovered that the power of modern weapons is in fantasy works. Dora's hips One shot of an ordinary nuclear bomb will blow up a crater of two to three hundred meters The explosion power of the original Big Ivan with an equivalent of 100 million tons of TNT can probably blast a crater 400m deep + 17 meters in diameter A pit of about 00m It seems that Naruto's semi-finished Spiral Shuriken can hit the 5000W tons of TNT-equivalent Big Ivan without any pressure The total number of global weapons is probably not enough for Deidara's Patrick's Star Shoes

Did the author invite trolls? A group of people in the comment section seemed to have never read the book. Let's put this aside.

Did the author underestimate the Sharingan too much? It should be easy to control an ordinary person, right? In Naruto, there is a saying that if a ninja of the same level encounters an Uchiha with the Sharingan one-on-one, he can give up the mission.

The subject matter is good, but your talent limits it 😅

I endured my nausea and read the book for a while, but I was speechless again. The second female character the male protagonist met, Miss Qianjin, experienced life, and then she was in danger just after the pig's feet molested her. Then the pig's feet hero saved the beauty and gave her artificial respiration. The woman's face then turned red. I felt like I was reading an antique novel from 2008. I didn't expect that there are still old-fashioned novels here.

It's annoying to see the woman who was saved. I thought it was the only supernatural being, but monsters appeared, and the setting is that there are only monsters and no other supernatural beings? Does this guy have a lot of brains?

This book has a father is a failure

The introduction is very well written, but when I saw that the protagonist, the only transcendent person, easily defeated the monsters and escaped from the police siege, and actually had to ask a young lady for permission to work for food expenses, I really couldn't hold back.

The author should find a class and stop writing. It is also a skill to be able to make a book like this through a female 🐷nt. A number plate is beaten to pieces, writing behind the scenes and in front of the stage is not better than writing about the protagonist playing part-time games with the heroine? I still advise you to find a class. This writing talent is very important, and a normal brain is also very important. The heroine looked so disgusting when she came out. I haven't seen such a disgusting heroine in at least five years. On this point, the author knows how to disgust readers.

There are too many books on the defense, starting point, etc. There are several books that are quite good, but you can't even understand them if you copy them.

Why is it that every protagonist in Japanese light novels is surrounded by annoying perverts... Or fat teammates? Without these supporting characters, would the plot really not be able to unfold?

After reading more than 30 chapters, I just want to say that I am not here to do archeology. If you can't write about women, don't write about them. I am the only one who can at least ensure that only one extraordinary male protagonist can do it on the human side.

Instead of taking money from his policeman father to eat, he went to work for the eldest lady, right? As a time traveler, I have powers and many ways to make money, so I have to be a dog, right? Very happy, right? 😅

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 31. I won't mention the cliche plots, garbage routines and a bunch of just-in-time settings in the past. I can't stand it anymore in Chapter 31. A young lady wants to repay your life-saving grace with money, but you actually Ask her to help you get a work permit, and she even says in a nice way: It's better to teach a man to fish than to teach him to fish. I'll screw you. It's a piece of defense. If you look at the chapter comments, they are all criticizing the protagonist Ruozhi. The author and the book he wrote are all a piece of defense.

A third-level account should not be a studio, but the author never looks at averages or readers' opinions. The small layout is not as bold as a mouse. The outlook on life of primary school students.

The introduction is written in a solitary way, and the first chapter is like a ghost.

I have been chasing it before, but I saw that 498 gave up. I have been struggling for so long to add a review: the later part of the book is still very interesting. The problem is that the vest worn by the protagonist in the ending is too low, and he becomes a pawn under the control of the "behind-the-scenes boss, Madara", the mastermind behind the scenes. Usually the end result is to put on a vest, which is to give yourself an identity, but your identity should not be so low. The whole image shown to the world is quite a clown. At that time, I was always looking forward to the protagonist finally coming out and looking cool, and I was a little bit disgusted 😟