Ordinary Mountain Village, Extraordinary People

The writing is very good, the story is also very good, and the rhythm is not bad, but there are a few typos 😁 Come on

The ones picked taste better than the ones bought. Although it costs money, it's only two yuan a pound, which is quite cheap.

The first part was fine, and I could still watch it, but when I got to the video part, it became boring. Even if you wrote about pruning and styling potted plants, it would be better than writing about making a video. With the numbers like this, it's no wonder that so few people watched it. If you want to see the video shooting process, there are a lot of them online. I came to read novels and you showed us the video shooting process. Is it interesting? 😅😅😅

There are fewer sentences for self-questioning and self-answering, and can be described in a different way. The rest of the writing is quite smooth, and it is the self-questioning and self-answering that makes the show!

There is no obvious main line, and the writing is too scattered.

Come on? I'm already very motivated to use the word "water", but it's a pity that no one gives me the motivation to send more?

The writing in the book is pretty good, but why isn't it popular? Maybe it's not time to bloom yet.

After you finish writing, check to see if some of them are not read smoothly.

Life is as plain as water! Has the heroine been lost?

Where did the post come from? Do it all by yourself

Is there really no reader to catch bugs for the author? So many typos…

It's time for you kid to get up and update 🤫🤫🤫 Still celebrating the New Year