I Became a Witch, but I Started the Industrial Revolution

Dear author, the character names you gave me overlap so much that I can't always tell the characters apart: Mitya, Anna, Tina, and Shelia😵

It's tied. Here's a book review The general direction of this book is good, but the small details are a bit lacking. The map is drawn with so much care, why not make the time settings more detailed? There are only vague descriptions now, and it's really hard to feel the changes in time. It would be nice to have a chronology. There are relatively few descriptions on the magic side, which is a pity. It still has a sense of presence in the early stage, but later it becomes a background board. It would definitely be more distinctive if we could see a more imaginative combination of magic and technology, or compete with each other to create a unique form of confrontation.

336 Years have passed since the founding of the British Communist Party in 1688. Mao Xiong has existed for 69 years, and 33 years have passed since its disintegration. ZBism has only become popular in the early 20s. I knew it would be unrealistic to write about society from the beginning, but this is a novel, so I can idealize and relax, and so can readers. But what I didn't expect is that twenty years have made many people dare not even dream of being ideal.

If I have to talk about any emotional scenes, I might occasionally post about girls.

The book is quite good, but I was left speechless by the comments halfway through ... No matter what others say, it will not make me waver in Marxism I have been shaken a long time ago, so now I always feel ridiculous and helpless when seeing many people's comments A few of my thoughts: The correspondence between the means of production and the productivity is the most stable structure. Now the proletariat produces the greatest productivity. If it does not control the most means of production (in the form of a national collective), If it is not the most stable structure, it will inevitably tend to be the most stable (minimum loss) during operation The advancement of weapons will not solidify the class. On the contrary, the advancement of weapons will intensify the turbulence and make it quickly tend to the most stable structure (just like the higher the temperature, the faster the molecules vibrate, and they will reach the most stable faster) A traditional Chinese friend said that banning guns makes people have no power to resist I... Well, don't believe too much in Western media statements. The comments about China that I saw recently on YouTube and Even if they are deceived in the short term, power is always in the hands of the people

My post seems to have been clipped. The author has replies to almost every comment, but my long comments did not appear, which is a bit unreasonable, so I took a screenshot to try. If the author can see it, please improve it (let me know that my post is still alive), thank you. Well, the last picture is a saving picture, you can just scroll to the end to see it.

This extraordinary world of great power can never achieve equality for everyone, let alone the feudal period, and even modern society cannot achieve this. It is very simple to deal with rebels like the protagonist. There are three teams of highly qualified and highly mobile mage teams. One team restrains the protagonist, one team kidnaps family members, and one team attacks important talents in key factories. They do not fight against the organized army. You can force her to compromise.

I've read about half of it, and it's a common problem with this kind of novel. The protagonist's industrial revolution power cannot cope with the saint-level and god-level enemies. In the end, he still needs the help of local high-end forces. The protagonist herself is also a witch. Rather than saying that it is a country established by the revolution, it is better to say that the protagonist's country exists only because of the witch.

Our current technology can actually make prototypes of mechas. Why has no one done it? Because it is simply a waste to use such technology on a large mecha. Only when industry and technology develop to the point where they can be fully mechaized, and resource consumption is small enough, will this development trend be very likely. Otherwise, AI robots will not be used, and mechas will not be developed with smart machines. If there must be such an environment, it is probably because there are too many people, and mechas are the most rubbish and basic technological society, so it is possible for people to wear mechas to fight. Otherwise, only special environments, such as special operations, require mechas. Personally, every time I see a novel about mechas, I can't stand it anymore. It's really hard to force myself to read without thinking about it. Everything else is fine (except for the places where there are Dechu and Suchu)

Queen of the Alliance

Queen

I feel I can be more ideal (seriously) I am still a child, I have not graduated yet, I have not yet accepted the torture of society, I can still imagine, I am still hoping for a better future, I am still imagining the beauty of the world, I am still daydreaming, and I am still looking forward to my next birthday. I don't want to see the naked reality, which will break my dreams. I also know that I am like a blank paper, and the future will definitely be made colorful by the dye vat of life. But I still love it now, and I am still looking forward to it. I hope to see a better future, and I am looking forward to seeing the most ideal world. Thank you, my thoughts From a student who has not been stained by dirt

What I thought was a push for revolution was actually kneeling down to beg for food. At least there was the Industrial Revolution.

Queen (Picture source: Sunshine_Story, B station, if there is any infringement, please contact me to delete it)

There are no comments. Can you not write about TV series? I spent ten yuan, but you have written so many TV drama plots, isn't it just bad? Originally, I was waiting for you to talk about the sublimation of ideas, the development of philosophy, literature, art, civilization, and the story of a small country, but it turned out that there was nothing. I deleted the TV series and "Ise World" and there was not much content left. I also added a systematic plot.

The protagonist is too passive now. If he fights a war, he will have to be attacked by the goddess. As long as the other side publicizes a little, the subcontinent is already an evil party, which is not conducive to the great cause of reunification. I believe you have all heard that domestic intelligence agencies do not engage in assassination and seduction. This incident was caused by the environment of ideological export at that time. The intelligence department doesn't need to mess around at all. You can get information by just making friends with senior officials and some elites, such as the Cambridge Five. When U. S. Vice President Truman didn't even know about the Manhattan Project, Stalin knew about it. As soon as the Emperor finished his Imperial Council, the report could be handed over to the Comintern and then sent to Yan'an. During the Spanish Civil War, gc parties in various countries raised their arms, and talents began to pour in. Hemingway, Bethune, Capa and other celebrities from various countries all participated in the International Brigade. Not only the ideology of the gc party is useful, but other ideological outputs are also useful. When the anti-French alliance defeated Napoleon, the young Russian officers returned to China and launched the Decembrist revolution (although it failed). This shows that ideology is so powerful that it can cause you to collapse without defeating you on the battlefield. Personally, I suggest that when writing a book, the author can have the protagonist export movies, television, radio and other emerging things and other industrial products to the main continent, and export his own ideological views. Then let it be convinced and achieve rebalancing of the main continent. Fighting against the Holy See over and over again is a waste of financial and material resources, especially now that the Federation is expanding so much and the domestic economy and people's livelihood need to be revived. When the country recovers, just defeat the Holy See in one fell swoop.

I can give it a passing mark. The author's writing is good, but it's hard to say whether it's because of a poor foundation or a lack of imagination. The author's description of the combination of magic and technology is too shallow, and many things are mentioned in one stroke. Compared with excellent works of the same type, the gap is still a bit big. As for whether the reform theory is ideal, I can't comment. I have a personal understanding, but the technology tree is really too ideal, and it can even be said that the steps are too big. It took 5 years to get rid of the Middle Ages. Not even a literate person has completed the second industrial revolution and modernized military reforms. In chapter 30, he started to think about building internal combustion engines and dreadnoughts. It can be said that he has gone on the road of almost 500 years for mankind in 5 years. Many technological breakthroughs in the middle have no development process. Just say how it is, and then develop it, and that's it. There is no understanding of the principles and no thinking and description of the technological development process. But in general, it is really a fun article to read without thinking.

Isn't it wrong that pig's feet promote equality of status? ? It's impossible to do it in modern times, let alone in that extraordinary world.

I didn't expect the author to dare to write about such a dangerous topic in reality. So how to deal with the relationship with China after defeating the United States? ? ?

It's a miracle that I can write so much before sending it.

Is the author going to enter the palace or something? Just tell me, don't pretend to be dead.

I wiped it and was released.

My personal evaluation of this book is that it is quite good and I dare to write it (3 stars). At least in the later stage, before the time traveler character Su Chen, who I hate very much, appeared, the evaluation of this book in my heart was still very high (5 stars).

Does anyone know the name of the author's new book?

It's a novel that suits my taste very well. It has almost no poisonous points. I like it very much.

It's already great to be able to write so much, try your best next time

I haven't started a new book yet. I really can't continue writing.

I scrolled down and found that there was no hint of the finale in the latest chapter. I was a bit panicked.