Douluo's Monastic Career

Before engaging Qian Xunji, you must understand why you want to engage him. The Secret Chamber Douluo thing itself is unstable. Whether it appears or not depends on Bibi Dong's choice and the choice of marrying Bibi Dong. I will first eliminate all negative influences and replace Qian Xunji. Perhaps, he could only use his energy to strengthen the Wuhun Temple to prove himself. However, when he was middle-aged, childless and single, he found that there was no way to advance into the Wuhun Temple. Now he could only unify the continent, and he was frustrated. He looked at the hope that the little girl appeared with her gifted twin martial souls. Her future was extremely dazzling. I invested all my hard work and expectations in her, and she did not disappoint me. She grew into the perfect Wuhun Temple. But an accident happened to the Saint, as if God was playing tricks on me. She got together with a good-for-nothing boy who would determine the enemy's power in the future. That good-for-nothing used her emotions to plagiarize the knowledge summed up by countless scholars in Wuhun Temple and published it in his name on the mainland. I was very angry, but seeing her face, she only warned him to stay away from her. After I saw her and talked to her, she got angry at me and I was very angry. But when I was about to say something, bad news came that the enemy genius was causing trouble in the territory. I was eager to deal with it and just told her to think about it and left. That guy was stronger than the rumor. He wounded all the people I sent and killed many of them. I came back with the injured body and found that she had run away. I didn't kill the loser, I just locked her up. She clamored to leave the Wuhun Hall and go to the loser. Just when she was still returning, the rational string jumped.

I just want to ask: What does the author think? The infinite jade is already born, so why do you still need to refer to (or apply) the content in the game? Don't you feel that it's a drama? You can say that the protagonist was particularly obsessed with that game in his previous life, so his way of thinking has also been applied to the game, but you cannot apply the game settings to the Infinite Jade Bi. Do you feel like your level has dropped all of a sudden? There are also a lot of unpleasant things in the third golden chapter.

It's not that the two protagonists are poisonous, like The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, which is good, but that a good clone becomes a clone, which is outrageous. The protagonist's second martial soul is given to the clone. Then the protagonist is equivalent to wasting several years to create a clone. This clone may not be obedient, and the protagonist has to lose the second martial soul. What kind of story is this? In the finale, will the clone be arranged to stab the protagonist in the back when he is about to reach his peak, and then take the protagonist's place to play with the protagonist's woman and gain the protagonist's power? In the second part, the author can write a story in which the protagonist is stabbed in the back by a clone, reborn, and then gives birth to a second clone.

This spread is not good. As long as it spreads, it will spread. There is no such thing as loyalty. If people find something wrong with you, they will arrest you and torture you. This spread is really poisonous. If you want to spread it, you can wait until you are given the title of Douluo and give it to your parents. It is not like fantasy novels. After practicing for hundreds or thousands of years, your relatives will turn into ashes. There is no need and you are too anxious.

After reading so much, I don't see a monk, this is a martial artist. Don't you know that cultivating the Tao means cultivating the mind?

I can't read the comments. The more I read, the more speechless I become. They are just minor issues. Compared to other Douluo fandoms, there aren't many bad points!

Everyone said they were not poisonous, and said they were better than other Douluo fans, but in the end they were all trainees, and they created clones to screen readers before they were put on the shelves.

Don't be clever with your name. A unique name may increase your grades, but a bullshit "number one" name is a dead end.

I think this book is very interesting, the writing is smooth, the combat power system has no problems, and there is no yy harem. This is the best Douluo fanfic I have ever read!

I don't understand. Isn't the soul ring too rubbish? Wouldn't the price of such an awesome protagonist like you drop if you open two yellow rings? Also, when you were level 15, your dad was level 40. When you were level 20, your dad was level 46? 😂Which one of you is the protagonist?

Find a class, don't embarrass yourself, you have all three major Douluo poisons, Holy Mother, you like old women, double standards!

It's too poisonous. Name it No. 1. Is this a personal name? Isn't it embarrassing? Which family names their children with only a surname?

I hate level-pressing things the most, and cheat one by one to death. A few years have passed, and the level has not improved as much as that of the supporting characters. The protagonist has been promoted from level 20 to 32 in three years, and his father's innate soul power is level 5. His bones have been finalized in his 30s. He just learned a medium-level skill that was given to the protagonist when he cheated, and he rose from level 39 to 55 in three years. The real protagonist is actually his father, right? If you can't control the development of the plot level, don't make such big mistakes. Top-level skills, top-level bones, top-level martial arts. When you look at the results, oh wow, the upgrade is not as fast as the supporting characters, especially when others are 39 to 55, and you are 20 to 32. The higher their level, the higher the soul power they need to upgrade.

For new readers, this book can be read to Chapter 52. Don't read it since chapter 53. There is nothing interesting about the novel. The clone not only has its own independent consciousness, but also has its own name. Moreover, the author also said that if you have a girlfriend in the future, let her choose which one she wants. This is not pure SB. It is not easy for the author to write a book, so I recommend reopening it. Or if this book is turned into a female channel and the protagonist is changed to Bibi Dong, it might even attract a wave of fans. 😅

The protagonist is called Number One... Extremely poisonous!

The book reviews in the comment section are so deceptive. I really don't think this book is good. I'll just briefly mention a few things that make me feel uncomfortable. 1. Name, the male protagonist is named No. 1. My first reaction is that the author is so lazy that he mistook the readers. In reality, some parents do name their children ** - for example, they name their children King of Glory. But when the male protagonist's parents named the male protagonist No. 1, Did they really not think that the male protagonist's life would be inconvenient in the future? I believe that readers will feel somewhat awkward when reading this online article. It is not because Shi Zhenxiang can associate it, but because he uses common words. Even if the name is not like programming, variable names cannot occupy keywords. 2. Daily descriptions are too blunt. I don't know if other people will think so, but I find the author's description really hard to put into words. It's awkward and disgusting, as if a classmate or colleague you're not familiar with suddenly starts hooking up with you, and it's really pretentious. And many times the content is a bit colloquial and not concise, making it feel repetitive and trivial to read. 3. The plot is rough and jerky. Take the previous example - the son of the viscount, Ye Feng, had a conflict with the male protagonist. When I saw it, I was confused, because there was really no foreshadowing for this conflict. The author, even if you said in the previous chapter that the tree wants to be quiet but the wind is not stopping, you should foreshadow the conflict first, so that the dull plot that is upgraded or upgraded every day can be twisted and twisted. A description from another perspective can smoothly introduce new characters and backgrounds, enrich the content, and make the arrangement more refreshing. You just gave a straightforward explanation without any narration. I felt really uncomfortable watching it. It was as uncomfortable as the teacher who reviewed everything for the final exam without highlighting the key points. Summary, so-so, like a newcomer's work, Liangcao-.

This is my first time reading a Douluo fanfic and I feel so comfortable. Please check it out. I've already given you two monthly passes.

If the protagonist intervenes, don't make a secret room fight. The author should think about it!

Extremely poisonous, he opened a lot of tricks and then tried hard to level up. In the end, he was even worse than his younger brother.

It's just that the clone is too unresponsive, and why it doesn't come out during a fight like the Holy Demon Yuan Fei or the One Qi Transformation into Three Pure Ones. If you write about the clone like this, I asked my wife what to do, NTR? I tried to get through it, but it was still too poisonous, and I slipped away. I don't know what the author thinks. Even if you are a practitioner, you shouldn't release such obvious poisonous points. Moreover, I think there are many opportunities to make changes in the middle from writing to have a clone to the clone coming out. In the meantime, there should be readers who have been following up on the revision and have come forward to express their opinions. Is it because I have saved the manuscript that I am too lazy to make major changes?

Just this name can drive away a third of people

Maybe it can be renamed "Training Martial Arts from Douluo"

The setting is very good and reasonable. The combat power has not collapsed, and everything can go as it should. It's a little bit toxic, but it's acceptable. The clone part is really unpopular, but fortunately it has been changed. I feel that the more I write, the more interesting it becomes. I hope it can expand the world view, and I will soon have a try with the world of gods. The name No. 1 Is quite pleasing to the eye when you see it. The No. 1 In the world.

Author, you might as well poison me to death, that part of the clone must be sick. It's true that small poisons are not committed, but big poisons are constantly committed.

Why did Gou Wen teach the skills at the beginning?

I knew the protagonist was rubbish, but I didn't expect it to be so rubbish.

After reading three chapters, I felt that the protagonist was brainless, so I stopped reading. Reason: The protagonist is only six years old, who can he beat? ? He actually practiced palm skills and sword skills! If the background of the story is that the protagonist is six years old, in the back camp of an army on the battlefield, or in a period of crisis, I have nothing to say! But the protagonist is in a mountain village now. He is safe and has to go to school! Shouldn't the foundation be laid now? ? ? Don't learn palm skills and sword skills first! In addition to internal strength training, the focus is on physical training and spiritual training! Secondly, just practice Qinggong! For the sake of a longer life span for the first soul ring!

A relatively new genre among Douluo fans,

When I saw chapter 20, I couldn't stand it anymore. The writing was okay, but I didn't practice well in the early stage. I had the best skills to reach level five in two years. I spent all day practicing swordsmanship. In my opinion, it was purely level-breaking. I had innate soul power and reached level five in two years. It was not as comfortable as starting at level 56. Even the followers in the academy were at level eight in two years. Half of the previous 20 chapters were explained. Taoist knowledge makes me dizzy. Am I here to see you push the plot or to see you preach? The author likes to write and expand, and will not stop until the end of a chapter. I read part of it carefully, and I basically don't want to do the rest. It's not like the Lord of Mysteries who talks about setting and foreshadowing. Pure water, I should have searched the information online, revised and copied it. I'm so speechless.

I want to write something about everything, but I can't write anything well.