Travel to the Heavens Starting from the Dragon Clan

I'm more curious... The plot changed without the protagonist doing anything, so why should the protagonist come? The inexplicable Constantine started to form a cocoon. The inexplicable Sansun did nothing. The inexplicable bone bottle was not brought back. Damn it, I always thought I was watching a Dragon Clan fan. After working on it for a long time, the protagonist traveled through a demon-modified world. Except for the character name, everything else depends on the author's imagination. There is no logic at all. It's not that the demon-modified world is not good. If you want to change the magic, you should at least say it first. Then I don't think that the protagonist has traveled to a normal dragon world. The plot of normal fan fiction will change because of what the protagonist did. Now the plot has changed without the protagonist doing anything. Why do we need the protagonist to do it?

So far, it looks pretty good. The battle scenes are very graphic. Thinking about the ghost swordsman and the dragon fighting is quite exciting! The collision of forces is awesome

Write your own style. If you, an outsider, don't do system tasks well and have nothing to do, it is really unnecessary to be a nanny and protect the so-called "bad children".

Can the author reduce the frequency of swear words? In the first chapter, almost every sentence contains foul language. I can't accept it.

A harem is okay, and I support it, but I hope I don't create my own original heroine. If you want an original heroine, please tell me in advance, I'm ready to quit.

Asura is super handsome, his mind is much better than his eyes, and he can even awaken and open his eyes in the later stage. Awakening Skills Great Dark Sky, the densely packed eyes in the sky, so handsome

The new power system is introduced in the next thirty chapters or so, and there is nothing practical about the introduction, but the author's emotional portrayal is too little, and it feels like these powers are given casually, although they are of no use to the protagonist. I suggest it be better to portray more emotions to deepen the bond.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The protagonist is too generous and sends cheats everywhere. I don't like this a bit.

Giving people strength is probably the biggest way to persuade them to quit.

Now Hongyan starts selling oil

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Is the protagonist a Devil May Cry who can deal cosmic damage?

The author added too many things, and heaven. It depends on how you write it in the later stage. I feel that if there is no outline, it probably won't be very long. I will probably only write it until the end of Dragon Race to see if you can continue editing it. And if you really want to give out cheats, you can slowly give out a few in each world later. You don't need to give away a bunch of professions to the dragon clan at the beginning. Just give out 1 or 2 professions in each world.

I hope the next book will be well written. It's okay to have many ideas, but don't rush to throw them all out at once.