God of Douluo's Fist Breaks the Sky

It would be better to be an orphan from the beginning, and later forcibly write the protagonist to death, which is extremely poisonous. Moreover, he went to school at Shrek at level 40, and in order to forcefully confront the Spirit Hall, he created a scene in which the protagonist's father was captured by the Spirit Hall while alive, which was even more poisonous. The first ones were all good, but when Zhu Zhuqing came out, he was extremely poisonous and changed the character's personality beyond recognition. Paraquat is not as poisonous as this.

After Zhu Zhuqing appeared, the plot started to fall apart. There were so many poisonous points. Why were you still chatting while hiding in the tree cave without the Soul Sage noticing, and even using your third soul skill to trick the Soul Sage? Dai Mubai is the third prince, not the second prince, and Davis does not have such great power. A hundred thousand-year-old soul bone is not a piece of cabbage, and the entire Holy Luo royal family does not have a piece. They even sent the Soul Saint to transport it, and they still said it belonged to the eldest prince! Moreover, the origin of the soul bone was not explained clearly, and the protagonist absorbed it upon touching it! After absorbing the idea of ​​running away without my mother and still sleeping, it's a big heart. Instead of forcibly cheating the protagonist, it would be better to attack the system. A large number of Xingluo people were active in Tiandou, but the Tiandou Empire didn't react at all. It was discovered that the protagonist's 11-year-old soul master had no reaction at all, and he had already investigated the protagonist's details! Zhu Zhubing is at best a soul king, right? He even appeared and fell from the sky! I won't mention Zhu Zhuqing's character, Zhu family's attitude, etc. Let's just treat them as successful secondary settings. Having said that, let me just say it before. There is a problem in using the fighting spirit arena as a cash machine without any background. At first, I talked about making money to treat my mother's illness. Later, I made money, and I didn't find a healing soul master to see something, nor did I improve my living environment and hire a caregiver. In fact, there is no need to use my mother's medical treatment to advance the plot. After all, I am a time traveler.

The reason for forcibly becoming hostile to Wuhun Palace is too far-fetched.

I didn't want to watch Zhu Zhuqing as soon as it came out, the plot was too toxic.

To be honest, I started to get addicted after meeting Zhu Zhuqing.

I haven't figured out why you grabbed this mandala snake until I watched it! ! If the other party comes from a good force, you may be beaten to death by forcefully grabbing other people's soul rings like this. Even if you are not beaten to death, can you have more seriously ill mothers in your family? Seeing how you pretended to refuse the Great Soul Fighting Arena earlier, I didn't even understand where you got the courage. A level 21 great soul master, do you really think you are invincible? Even if they don't hunt you down and others ban you directly, do you want to find other ways to make money to support your mother's illness? There is also the Wuhun Palace in front of you. In less than half a year, you have been upgraded to 14 levels continuously. The Wuhun Palace does not even invite you, nor does it covet your secrets. You have met all the good-tempered, good-natured, and kind-hearted people in the world? There are a lot of unreasonable things, what are you writing about?

Seriously, the heroine is Zhu Zhuqing. I'm really tired of it. She is the same in nine out of ten books, just because of her big breasts?

Thoughts after reading 1. It's too gamified, and the accumulated experience is upgraded, and one level up is several levels 2. The protagonist only practices boxing, and never cultivates soul power (all relying on system initiation). Although it is most cost-effective for the protagonist to only practice boxing, the author has design problems 3. The protagonist's soul skills are average and nothing new. The skills given by the system are purely game skills. At first glance, the protagonist will only use them as skills, and will not be able to do it without the system. Can use it 4. There is no development of the main spirit, so he can only practice boxing 5. The protagonist does not pay much attention to the role of the quality of the spirit beast in promoting the evolution of the spirit. Hunting the spirit beast is extremely casual. You can get whatever you encounter and don't choose. Level 10 rabbits are fine, and levels 20 (leopard) and 30 (leopard) are still very casual 6. The external soul bone has basically never been used, and has not even been developed. Maybe this soul bone can be worn as shoes, and there is no need to buy shoes.

It was so good before, but Zhu Zhuqing started to poison him as soon as he appeared on the stage? Trick readers into killing them?

Overall, it's okay. Although I feel that the acquisition of the first soul ring is a bit hasty. Douluo novels are generally enjoyable. The first soul ring feels like it requires a more or less awesome soul beast, but considering the identity of the protagonist, it is quite reasonable.

The previous one was so good and such a gold-skinned one, but once I arrived at Shrek Academy, everything changed. I felt like it was written by a completely different person. When I arrived at Shrek Academy, I felt that the protagonist was even more double-standard and unreasonable than Tang Sandu!

To be honest, you don't need the mandala snake soul ring, and you can tell at a glance that the person who was seriously injured before is someone else's prey. You can ignore it or kill it directly, but it's a bit shameless for you to beat him half to death and tell others that this is not the owner of the thing, right? If someone is injured and flees to you, it would be understandable if you also need this soul ring. After all, it is beneficial to yourself at the expense of others, and you don't need its soul ring, so just grab it forcefully, really! The three views are incorrect.

This first soul ring is a bit tricky. Although the protagonist has golden fingers and doesn't care about this thing, it doesn't matter if a fist martial soul absorbs a rabbit soul ring. It must be the best soul ring of the power system, like an ox or a tiger. In addition to having a powerful attack skill, it will also greatly enhance the power of the punch. Absorbing soul rings isn't as simple as giving you a skill. Why is Tang Hao so strong? It's not because he has all the power-based soul rings added to his first eight soul rings. The increase in basic power brought about by absorbing soul rings is extremely terrifying. Let his Clear Sky Hammer's attack power soar. Douluo is a world where one step is fast and the other is fast. If the protagonist messes around with a golden finger like this, it really lowers the evaluation.

What to do at Shrek? Going for a jog carrying rocks? I can graduate directly, so I can just force myself to follow the plot.

The synopsis is a bit too tacky, and it feels like the protagonist is being forced to become a villain. The whole world is the enemy of the protagonist. Of course, I don't hate the plot where the protagonist slaps them in the face. What I hate is the plot where the protagonist is chased and flees all the time. This is the plot that I can think of when I see the synopsis. I don't know if there is such a plot in the main text, and I haven't read it either.

It's obviously a fantasy world, but the terms of address are those from the martial arts world... It's too funny! Earlier I said that the appearance of the protagonist is not outstanding, but later I said that the protagonist has a handsome face... Inconsistent! If the protagonist is not handsome, then there will be only one female protagonist. After all, how can one accept a female protagonist if he is not handsome? Is it reasonable? Most women are members of the Appearance Association! Either the protagonist is liked by too many people and is very good, and the other party feels that he is not worthy of you, so he will compromise and allow you to marry more, otherwise it is impossible.

In order to give the protagonist a useless martial soul light, he changed Su Yuntao's work address, which is also very impressive.

Good author, you didn't lie to me. It's rare to earn so much from investment.

This book has three wrong views, that is, Shrek's seven monsters have become eight

Nothing interesting, 8 Shrek monsters, haha