Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Evolution of Skills

When you come up, turn on the "Aura of Taunt"

The advancement of the skills should not increase the difficulty, otherwise it would not be considered a cheat. I might as well just practice the more advanced skills.

I saw the introduction before and thought the golden finger setting was quite interesting, so I saved it. I read it in one go today and will briefly talk about my personal feelings. Generally speaking, I personally felt that the mine chapter was well written. The setting of Goldfinger, the setting of the world view, and the description of the supporting characters were all quite attractive. But when I wrote about the black mist later on, I felt that the rhythm fell a little and the overall level dropped a bit. However, in the Northern Chapter of about 100 chapters, the quality has improved after the new setting of aura was introduced, and I feel that I can look forward to a wave of it. Let's talk about it in detail: 1. Golden Finger does not occupy enough space. What is not mentioned here refers to Goldfinger's deficiencies in plot advancement and rhythm. In the previous Black Mist chapter, the characters were upgraded several levels in a row, but later in the martial arts competition and the Northern Territory plot, the character disappeared for a long time, giving people a serious sense of separation. Personally, I think that as the biggest selling point, Goldfinger does not necessarily have to appear all the time, but at least he must maintain a certain sense of presence. For example, without affecting the protagonist's main skills and strength setting, showing his face every few chapters, occasionally learning and improving new martial arts, and adding more new entries on evolving martial arts can better reduce the boring feeling and attract readers to follow. 2. The problem of plot rhythm control. It can be seen from the previous mine chapter that the protagonist's character is relatively happy-go-lucky, but it also reveals that the plot arrangement is not very compact. Personally, I feel that the black mist plot in the later part is more abrupt, and the map transition is relatively stiff, which exposes this problem to a certain extent. I feel that if you are unable to win with the rhythm of the plot and your writing power is not enough, you can consider slowing down the pace and expanding the worldview, character settings, etc. There is no need to rush to change the map to advance the plot. You can better polish the settings, plot, etc., And improve the overall quality. For example, before the Black Mist incident broke out, appropriately introduce the foreshadowing about the Master of Magic, improve the logical sequence, etc.; Or when the main skills are in a bottleneck period, appropriately give some new martial arts that improve the character's shortcomings and introduce new evolution options; through The daily plot appropriately leads to a more complete world setting, etc... I personally prefer this kind of setting with its own panel and the background of practicing martial arts first and then cultivating immortals. After finishing "Super Shinto Technique", it is rare to see a book that suits my taste. Although it has shortcomings, it has great potential. I hope that the author will write better and better, so I have put forward some opinions and suggestions. I hope these opinions and suggestions will be of great help to the author and help him write more exciting stories. 😍

Let me ask, what type of protagonist is he? Is the later development more routine?

(Internal) Sensing Qi, Nourishing Qi, Ventilating, Controlling Qi (Exterior) Refining skin, refining meat, refining bones, refining marrow

Just when I was about to take a look, I saw the eunuch.

The author wants to interact and gain some popularity

I practiced other techniques and immediately upgraded them. When it came to practicing the technique that I knew was weird and dangerous, I didn't upgrade. There was something wrong with the setting of the place where tigers eat people. I knew that there were tigers eating people on the way back to the city, but I still had to go back and kill people, which forcibly lowered everyone's IQ

It's well written, why are there so few people?

Will the protagonist create a prosperous and immortal dynasty?