Create a Xiuxian University

It's well written, the main character is mentally ill, and it's funny It's very comfortable to read, with a hint of "Cultivation Chat Group" Come on, author

Disgusting. . . The introduction is to create a world of immortality from scratch. The result? ? ? Suddenly there is an extra dragon group and a cultivator management department. Are there other cultivators in the world who start writing randomly without an outline? I came to see the protagonist appear before others and run his own school and the daily life of the school. Are you a disgusting reader who is crazy about opening new pictures and licking the system? A principal is running around the world like a child, and co-operating in the school is just an added bonus?

The book started off well. The school had just established the main character, who is invincible. It was boring. He almost didn't write about school affairs, and the school didn't do anything to generate income. The main character was busy opening new pictures of other worlds and was very impetuous. If you add some practice in the real world, the book became popular. The main character slowly practiced and became stronger.

Come on, author, keep an eye on you. What you read earlier is interesting, and it doesn't have all the clichés of being holy and pretentious right from the beginning. I would like to remind you that the protagonist's more systematic love affair is a bit too much. The protagonist's writing in Qingqiu is a bit crazy and has a tendency to develop too quickly. It's better to adjust back soon!

In fact, there is no need for Qingqiu to come out so early. It has just begun. There are a lot of things that need to be developed and constructed. Appearing so early gives people the feeling of going out to fool around before their home is taken care of. The reading is actually not very good.

The idea is great, but the main plot and branches are too confusing. According to the nature of novels or TV shows, the main line is the skeleton and the branch lines are the meridians. Once it is not handled well, it will be messy. Before the content of teaching students has been started, the protagonist went to Hukou Village to recruit the monks and survivors. The survivors barely had a rough idea, and then went to Qingqiu Country to find the Fox Fairy. It felt like he was not reading a novel, but an outline of a novel.

The idea of ​​this book is good, but it's a pity that the author can't grasp it. First of all, it is all kinds of forced comedy, which looks very awkward; secondly, it is all kinds of illustrations. You have to understand that the basic reason for reading this book is to teach and educate people and cultivate immortality. As a result, the author basically ignored this thing and it is all messy stuff.

In a modern Xiuxian Academy, students should beg to come to school, rather than inviting others to come. The academy should be as mysterious as possible. It is best to select one student out of millions

The most fascinating part is the part about the system and the egg. I really can't watch it. The toxicity point is full, but everything else is just okay. I can give it a six or seven out of ten, so it's watchable.

The subject matter is very good, but what the author writes is like shit. You might as well be in the first batch, just recruit some powerful children, they are extraordinary, but you still care about so much, it really looks like a noob.

I've seen it later. Chapter 40 or 50, about Qingqiu Kingdom, is a bit boring, mainly because it doesn't contribute much to the plot. After all, it is mainly about the teaching of immortality. This kind of article is about cultivation, watching your students go out to pretend to be bad after they have learned. Haha, to change the word, it is called promoting the style of the academy. This is more fun, and there are also things like the protagonist appearing in front of others.

Let me tell you something, the chapters about Qingqiu Country are indeed a bit boring.

I didn't feel nervous when I started the first chapter. Brother, can you figure out your position? You are a Xiuxian University! Modern Xiuxian University! You just need to casually tell others that you teach people to cultivate immortality, and show yourself to be a saint in front of others. If you come to study, you can be ranked from xz to the imperial capital! And later on, I hired a cleaning company to clean the house for the sake of word count. Do you want to take a look at the fact that you gave five hundred years of cultivation at the beginning? Not a single spell? Is this the first chapter at the beginning?

Although no one seems to notice that the author is letting himself go, but you are such a bastard who talks about the system. To be honest, it is very uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, there are so many chapters and there is no element of students cultivating immortals... It's too slow.

Don't you feel awkward if you force yourself to be funny?

In the early stage of a Xiuxian University, if the college is not well built, the weapons and alchemy talismans are not built, and the students' exercises are not written. Running around feels messy and boring. Reading dozens of chapters is boring. Why write about these alien races? Isn't it good to write about the world's spiritual energy gradually recovering in the future? Students can show off their anger.

It was good in the early stage, but when I went to Hukou Village to see it, I felt terrible. There are other immortal cultivators in the world.

How can I put it this way, this is the only starting point for the modern academy of immortality (=°Д°=) The author must not cut it~

The protagonist's clones should all be deleted after reaching a certain level. The dialogue appears inexplicably, and the protagonist has too many scenes.

It's so long-winded and confusing to read.

Once you get out of Qingqiu Country, you won't be able to enter it.

What a great idea, but why don't you write about your strengths? I came here for the school. I couldn't stand it when I saw Qingqiu. It's so boring. The campus doesn't write about it at all. I just know how to draw pictures and draw pictures.

I don't know why the more I watch it, the more boring it becomes.

Is it over? It feels a bit rushed.

Is the author happy with his own writing? Ever since the protagonist got the egg, he felt mentally disturbed.

Want a eunuch? Why not updated?

Author, are you serious? I really can't stand the part about Qingqiu. This system obviously has no emotions or intelligence. Why does the protagonist keep licking it? Every mouthful is my treasure. I want my system treasure to know how much I love him. I got an egg as a reward from the system, and told everyone it was my son, the fruit of the love between myself and the system. There is also the Northeastern dialect that fills the screen, making it difficult to understand the sentences. Giant poison, farewell.

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I personally still like reading this type of novel. I have read about ten chapters now and I feel pretty good! Come on, author!

If you want to write this kind of thing, you might as well learn about the academy in Harry Potter, and you can learn from it to create a Chinese version of the revised academy world.