Pokemon: I Picked Up a Reborn Eevee from the Start

I don't understand why Mr. Menas is said to be very poisonous. He is not humanoid like Gardevoir. It is also said that Menas is a public company and 2/3 of them are directly advised to leave. Nonsense? Not to mention Menas, Gardevoir is a male, and I don't believe that 2/3 can be persuaded to quit if there are no major problems with the author's writing. The most important point is that Menas's system is a talking dragon, brothers, not a human being. As for dragons, don't you think the male ones you ride are more handsome? They can't transform into humans anyway.

If there is Crimson, I don't think your elf game is very big. Ibrahimovic was a gym elite or king in his previous life, and he will definitely not be able to defeat Crimson. Ugly Fish develops too slowly, and combatants improve very quickly. Even if you become a god, you may not be able to defeat Chi, so cheating!

The mystery of Ibrahimovic's time travel: I have seen many friends questioning why Ibrahimovic was reborn and whether he died in his previous life. Here, let me help the author explain, the truth about Ibrahimovic's rebirth (fantasy version) is this: One day, Dialga and Palkia fought again. The avenues were obliterated, time and space were shattered, and the long river of time fluctuated violently. It happened that a little Eevee was born, and was swept up in the fluctuating time and space. His soul was about to be wiped out. The bond and cause and effect between the future traveler and the protagonist traveled through the universe, condensed the universe, and protected Ibrahimovic's soul, allowing it to briefly jump out of the long river of time. He transcended the shackles of time, stood on top of time, and followed the fetters in his heart to glance down the long river of time. This glance represented ten years of Ibrahimovic's life. He saw a corner of the future, experienced a possibility of the future, and then was re-involved in the long river of time and returned to the body he had just been born in. But this momentary experience left a deep imprint on the little Ibrahimovic's soul, and the warm bond filled its heart. It secretly swore: In this life, I will definitely find Xia Chen again. Our future will never be like the salty fish in the previous life. We will definitely reach the highest step by step. The sky cannot bury it, the earth cannot destroy it, truly transcending time and space, jumping out of the long river of time, opening up a world on its own, and becoming Alzubu 😜

If you don't even know that Eevee and other elves are really good after a few dozen or even when they are put on the shelves, it will collapse, and you will lose your collection and stop reading. Sooner or later, the aesthetics of a model will become tired. After all, there are many Pokémon books. Every good subject matter and good writing are the prerequisite for attracting people, but how to retain readers after attracting traffic is another aspect. There will not be a cookie-cutter survival soil at the starting point.

I feel that the protagonist is too arrogant. Apart from being good at cooking and making cubes, and relying on reversal of luck to create beautiful cubes, he acts like a liar and takes a few photos to give an entire PPT presentation in an academic report. I feel like they are all rotten antiques. In terms of fighting, training basically depends on the skill, and the command is better than the audience. Maybe he was really good in his previous life and trained such a powerful Ibrahimovic, but he really has no ability in this life, but he looks aloof.

It's gone, the rest is not for children to see

The author's mentality is too easy to break. He couldn't continue writing the last book. Now this book has several problems. The first is that the elves have systems and there are many mythical beasts, so it is easy to lose focus. Now several elves are a bit invisible. The second is the emotional drama. Why don't you write about emotional drama in the next book? Originally, elf literature requires emotional investment in cultivating elves. Now you have multiple female protagonists. In the last book, the emotional drama with a single female protagonist was not written well. With one elf and multiple heroines, there are too many dramas to share. The third thing is not to make too many magic changes, and the changes should not be too outrageous. There are so many people who are dissatisfied this time because there are too many magic changes. The original Darkrai of Dakdo is only average in strength and cannot even reach the level of the King of Heaven. You just come to the top of the championship. Although it will be patched later, the plot behind it still needs to be complete. Moreover, the combat power system of this book is really a bit messy. It's actually quite good to use normal levels. For example, you can divide 40-60 into gym levels. Now there are gym levels and elite levels. The key elves are all stuck, which makes the upgrade fast or slow, and you don't know what level it is.

To be honest, you should stop writing emotional lines. It would be much worse than writing about elves. Really, you either have to make it clear that I am a scumbag and want to open a harem. You are all my wings. I am sincere to you. As long as you love me, I will find a way to solve the Shura field by myself. If I am caught by a good guy, it is because I have no ability. Stand out and dare to take responsibility. Or it's better to be single-minded and have a single emotional line. This is easier to write. Although I know you love me very much, I already have someone I like. I will send you the good guy card, sister card, and brother card. I will only be a good brother after breaking the relationship line, and highlight a pure love god of war. This is much better than the evasive coward you are now who keeps fighting and flirting but not taking it seriously. What do you think? In the end, the heroines were forced to start a harem half-heartedly? Then I can only say ex, how can the owner, king, and champion like him with such a cowardly look? When you open a harem, you must at least make people think that you are worthy of having a harem.

Shen Nong is here, the plot and writing are okay, food level, but Menus is a male. I personally can't accept the setting that beautiful elves like Gardevoir and Menas are male (the monsters can't accept that they are female), so I left after seeing this. There are no other poisonous points at the moment. Those who can accept it can take a look.

It's a headache to write the competition. You, the elf, have all kinds of plug-ins turned on, and the results are impressive. Other elf's who don't have plug-ins can fight against you with ease.