Without a Heroic Spirit, I Can Only End It Myself.

I have read almost thirty chapters, and I would like to express my humble opinion. The underlying logic of the author is very good, and the writing style is good for a book on simulation themes. The simulation is detailed and appropriate, and the big things are written in detail, and the small things are covered in one stroke. But the big problem is that I hope the author will have it right when he starts the book. I have thought about the follow-up development and made an outline of the book. For example, the projected heroic spirit will be simulated again, causing the heroic spirits of other people in the world to change. Once this part fails, the entire book will be bad. I hope the author is solving the ending. The writing is still very exciting.

This book is very strange. You have to say it's good-looking, but it also has some poisonous points, but the strange thing is, damn, the author's writing skills are really good, and he can round it out and take it to a higher level. I even suspect that the author is poisoning it to pick readers 🙂

This book, to be honest, the writing style is not that high, just average, but it looks great. I kept a smile on my face when I read it. Well, it is a very spiritual novel. It feels a bit like I just read the simulator novel back then. It is very fresh. I hope the protagonist can be more lively. After all, we readers love to read this. Come on, author. The writing would be even better if it were better.

Sitting and talking is a derogatory term, it is the same as talking on paper, I hope everyone knows🤪

Astonishing as an incomplete legend

It's very awkward. The people who come out are all oriental fantasy. The rating is abcd Not to mention the bugs. This multi-week project is really a failure. Without a little variety, it looks very "fake" When I wrote about the painter earlier, Zhou Mu killed the emperor to avenge the white fox, but failed to save her. In the end, his time was approaching and he returned to the snow mountain. Although there was regret, there was no regret at all However, as soon as the second Zhou Mu came out, this feeling The love is ruined, and the happy ending is nice, but it looks really awkward If the first game is a real journey through a life, the subsequent multiple games are pure game guides, giving me a blunt feeling of separation It is better to write it as a person who is originally a 🐮b. The plug-in can substitute the first-person perspective to experience the life trajectory + realistic command spell enhancement + protagonist overcontrol, and save the need to play the game and change the history once so many bugs

This hasn't been updated for 18 hours. Even the production team members don't dare to update it so quickly.

The content is very interesting, but there are two bugs. One is that the combat power has begun to collapse. There is only one known pre-dynasty heroic spirit in the entire human race, which is still disabled, but the evolution speed of the gray enemies has begun to accelerate significantly. It is impossible for the protagonist to be the only one with a pre-dynasty heroic spirit. Even the protagonist is When it is too late to subsidize (after all, there is only one consciousness); the second is that the hole is too big. There are nine parts in the Age of Dharma End. How to fill the hole in the pre-dynasty? Do not suddenly have many pre-dynasty heroes appear later. If it is too fast and the span is too large, it will be very stiff

Up to Chapter 43, it was very comfortable to read, and I didn't feel any obvious poisonous points. It's worth reading 🙂

It's too short, it's too short. What's the difference between two-in-one and one chapter?

No, it's been five hours, why haven't you updated? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Ma Liuliu will update quickly. I'm still waiting for you to put it on the shelves.

Vote every day. Can it be updated?

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Come on, come on, it's interesting

This book is very well written and feels very exciting, but it is too short and not enough at all.

The life of an online writer should be spent like this: when he looks back on the past, he does not feel regret for joining the palace as a eunuch, nor is he ashamed for writing a few thousand words a day. We should devote all our energy and time to the great and sacred cause of coding. Updates will be made every day. Life will never end, and coding will continue.

Next time you wear a vest, remember to tell me. If you can't offend me, can you still hide from me?

There is no eunuch in the book, there are many things to do during the New Year, and updates are unstable.

This is a story about "The God of War in Caishikou ate the fruit of talk, had a long talk and put it into practice"

I come to the book review section only for three things: to add more updates, to add more updates. What's even more special is the extra updates! ! !

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not understand the plot trend of the latest chapter... It can be seen that the author wants to create such a heroic spirit who "should bear all the sins and infamy alone and silently save the world." We will not discuss whether this setting is outdated or cliched, but because there is not enough foreshadowing, the motivation seems very outrageous, which makes people feel that the protagonist seems to have some serious illness and is too virginal and hypocritical. The general plot is that the protagonist and his companions killed the emperor who was immobilized by the evil demon Li Daitao and saved the world. However, they were slandered as villains. When they were eliminating the remaining enemies, they were attacked by a group of "righteous men" who did not know the truth. Then the protagonist could not bear these righteous men. Sacrificed themselves (forgetting those who died on the spot, they all died on hunger strike after being captured alive, I really can't complain, it's too rude), I decided to start the process of saving the world all over again, choosing to bear all the infamy myself...  This is probably such a situation. The problem arises because during this period, the perspective of the simulator is used, so the so-called righteous men who moved the protagonist and sacrificed their lives. From the time they appear to receive the lunch, there are only a few sentences of introduction... The final feeling presented to the readers is that the decision made by the protagonist is extremely pretentious. ——Even if you say that it is because of obsessive-compulsive disorder that you must have a perfect ending, we all think you can understand it, but for a protagonist who has waded through a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​​​blood, and whose road to salvation is covered with the remains of his companions, is "deeply touched" by the lives and deaths of a few deceived passers-by, and resolutely changes his own path and starts over, that is truly touched by himself.       To put it bluntly, there is nothing wrong with the idea and plot direction, but you must have enough foreshadowing to give the protagonist a reasonable logic and motivation. Everyone will think it is reasonable for Li Xiaoyao to restart Legend of Sword and Fairy 10,000 times in order to save Lin Yueru and Zhao Ling'er at the same time; but if you want to say that Li Xiaoyao resolutely restarted Legend of Sword and Fairy 10,000 times after saving the world in order to save the cannon fodder Zhang San who was deceived by the Moon Worship Cult, then we can only say... This person is probably a little bit seriously ill.

My dear, I was so moved. In order to save me money, I updated two chapters a day. All the donkeys in the production team were burned into donkey meat. Those foreigners thought I looked down upon them. Quickly give everyone ten chapters to cheer up.

The possibility of finishing this book normally is very slim. I just stopped updating it because I was in a bad mood. Then I posted a single chapter two or three days later saying that I was asking for leave. I thought it would only take four or five days to rest and adjust my mood, and it would only be a week at most. Then 23 days passed, and there was no movement. Do you expect someone to finish it normally just because the author was in a bad mood for a month? No kidding.

The biggest problem with this book so far is that the protagonist's tone is getting higher and higher, and it can't get any lower. Sometimes it's embarrassing to face some choices, because not all readers assume that the protagonist is a noble person. Some readers do not understand, do not recognize, and have no sense of substitution. The protagonist's actions can be said to be a saint (note, not a bitch), but they do not seem like choices that a normal person would make.

Tell me if you are changing your waistcoat to make money

Build a character building in response to everyone's requests, and Maomao will choose better characters to add to the article.

I'm wondering if I can simulate being a woman🤔. Thinking about the plot makes me feel happy (my aunt laughs). 🤣

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After all these years, I still can't figure out why I became a eunuch and my grades are okay. I'm really convinced.

Newcomer, I have almost finished reading all the orders on the first day. The author will update soon