Start with Longevity Kung Fu

The good-for-nothing stream has made me vomit after seeing it, can't it be a medium talent?

Seeing that now it's all about proficiency and adding points, I don't even want to read it anymore.

Proficiency is a matter of care, as long as you compare it with equipment, your skills will be broken 😁

There's a bit of a strange plot behind this. He didn't even run away inside the inn, but just waited stupidly, and the enemy was killing him every minute.

Mortal flow has gone sour, so why write about mortal flow? Isn't it disgusting?

The author handled the plot very poorly.

I don't need to say more about how awesome Han Li's little bottle is in "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality".

Why another Gu Changqing?

Use chips to refine the life magic weapon 😁

What a retarded storyline, and such a retarded male protagonist. He easily obtained two magical skills from others at the beginning. He won first place in a competition and was given the opportunity to choose a skill but chose a useless skill. What's even more frustrating is that he missed twice when killing an ordinary person and almost died! In short, the character of the male protagonist is very unpleasant and extremely brainless!

Try to reduce the description of the battle scenes as much as possible, it's a bit astringent. If you can solve it with proficiency and amount of magic, there is no need to write anything else. You also need to practice your writing skills in this area.

It's either that we are not afraid of the flow of waste materials or whether our qualifications can be gradually improved.

The old routine did not write out its own characteristics, dooming the eunuch.

The protagonist is too promiscuous and doesn't match this golden finger. Just get +1 points for killing someone.

Well written, please keep updating the author

Pretending to be a mortal, outdated, disgusting🤢

There have been so many system panel posts lately that I'm going to vomit

Well written, please keep updating the author