Swallowing Starry Sky's Alternative System

The virtual universe can be easily affected by something from the Nuolanshan family without making people go offline. Then the tenth-level secret method of Yuan and the master of the universe of the mechanical clan who is the server are too rubbish, so they slipped away.

Excellent review, Devouring the Stars writes that the human race is all a conspiracy theory, there are no good people at the top of the human race, and the Lord of Chaos City is also written as a scheming person. It is strange that the results can be improved with such writing.

Can a king be able to go back in time? So awesome. The skills of the Master of the Universe.

I came to watch Swallowing Starry Sky, not to watch you write about other worlds.

Author, please check again. It is Metaverse Corporation, not Universe Virtual Corporation.

Is this book poisonous or not? Selfie cosplay. If it's good, give it a like 😄

If you don't talk about the level, the setting will not work, and the basic level will collapse. Look at your second design, which is divorced from the basis of reality. How can it be good? You directly rejected your own audience. You should read Tomato's book carefully, otherwise you should not write fanfics. It is just a fool's errand.

I don't understand why they are so cautious and obscene and have conspiracy theories. Why are they writing about the discovery of the secret of the earth? It is simply screening out the dedicated faction of the human race and disgusting the selfish faction of the human race like us.

The writing is quite good, and it depicts the ugly faces of high-level officials from another perspective.

Don't jump to the world too frequently. Since the main world is devouring, you must distinguish the priorities.

Is there any Shennong you can tell me about?

Chapter 1, using a heavy machine gun to beat Tang San into a pulp, it made me laugh so hard hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

This introduction: "You can have unscrupulous hey hey hey." I laughed

Author, I would like to give you a suggestion. In the process of reading, can I do something about the transition between world jumps? It feels very abrupt and the world changes, which affects the perception a bit. But the content is still very good. The most taboo thing about fan fiction is not respecting the setting of the original work. You still have multiple worlds. Fortunately, the logic of the combat power system is OK when reading. Come on

It's a mess. Fans can just write about one world, but if they can't control one world well, they write several. And many people come to read Devouring Fans and have not read other novels.

With so many people writing about Swallowing the Stars and not much new ideas, how could it possibly get good results! There is also Luo Feng who joins the military, and the protagonist in the following is also a lot of flattery. This thing is not written for the country. It is enough to mention it occasionally. It has to be disgusting for no reason.

Nuolanshan yyds, one of the five giants of mankind is adding

Are you going to fucking write it or not? At least say something, you retarded person.

Devouring the Starry Sky is the best for the human race. As long as you are a genius, you can live your life wherever you go.