Accompany You to Reach the Top of the World

Talk about your own thoughts. Let me talk about it earlier while the current progress in the book has not reached the s game. The first point is some shortcomings that come to mind. S8 is known as the first year of e-sports because it won the first championship, which boosted morale and allowed LOL to live out its second life. The description of the environment in the book actually did not reach the enthusiastic atmosphere when S8 just won the championship. Moreover, there are some differences between the S7 champion in the book and the real S8 champion. I think there is still a difference between the champion in the darkest moment and the champion after everyone is disheartened. At least the popularity of the game will be higher. Secondly, the championship of the all-Chinese class and the championship of Korean aid will definitely change the environment of the LPL league. The number of Korean aid players will decrease and the number of domestic players will increase significantly. This can lay a foundation for domestic players who have excelled in recent years but have not yet played in the current time period in the book to play in advance, and can facilitate various teams to recruit and strengthen. From a reader's perspective, the fan base of the team chosen by the protagonist is really poor. The fan base of each team is not utilized, so I think if the summer split defeats RNG's championship and helps them wake up, so that they will not lose to the top eight of FNC and be eliminated, advance to the semi-finals, and achieve the perfect semi-finals and three LPLs, and there will be no Korean team, such a scene will definitely be very exciting. S7 broke the Korean civil war, S8 successfully built three top four LPL teams, and the final LPL civil war. I think this is definitely not worse than the feeling of the Pig's Feet team wearing three or four. After all, this is not the time in reality when a championship is hard to come by. To be honest, in many competitive articles nowadays, in order to highlight the performance of the protagonist team and change the level and performance of other teams, especially when they win in real life, especially the Korean team, they have to change it to a situation where the protagonist team and the whole family are the heroes. Why we never dare to underestimate LCK is because its performance is too stable. Four teams have steadily qualified for the group stage. There are always four LCK teams in the quarterfinals, three teams in the semifinals, and a civil war in the finals. Most of the current league layouts are too small. I have never dared to expect to surpass or crush the overall strength. Whether it is player articles or coaching articles, they have too little impact on the competitive environment of the entire league. Although it is not consistent with reality, it is really cool. For example, coach Wen coached multiple teams and left a good tradition, forming multiple strong teams. Or, as in the current book, players can influence coaches and create several coaches who are above the standard, thus creating multiple strong teams. Or, perhaps through the role model of the protagonist himself, he can successfully create a god and change the competitive attitude of all professional players in the LPL league, resulting in an overall involution and improvement of the internal environment of the league. These are so cool! We also have a championship now, and this year's MSI has achieved a civil war in the finals. Why can't I be more bold in the book? Our semi-finalists eliminated all Korean teams in the finals. What can't be written about this? Doesn't this look more exciting than a pig's foot team winning the championship with only one team? Who will win the S8 championship in the end? Whether it's ig reaching the peak, a dog realizing his dream, or a pig's feet proving himself, I think these three results are acceptable. Some people in the circle say that the author is a female author, judging from the current behavioral style. There are some writing characteristics of female authors that are very delicate, but these are not important. The characteristics and expertise of the author of this book lie in the daily interactions between players, team building, emotional bonds between characters, and character growth. However, there are still some flaws in the description of the game within the game. So improvements can be made from two aspects. First, improve the competitive level of the game, and then improve the accuracy of the description of the game content. Become a rare hexagonal warrior in the game competitive literature, and become a full-time butterfly blue master. The second way is to make use of strengths and avoid weaknesses. Except for some duels required to achieve the plot, others can be abbreviated. Strengthening his own characteristics, he writes about the growth of each team, the daily interactions between players, the improvement of the league's competitive environment by the special character of the protagonist, the progress of the LPL atmosphere, etc. These are the author's strengths. In this way, it can be considered as utilizing strengths and avoiding weaknesses. It can deepen the reader's impression and is considered unique among alliance articles. It will definitely leave a good impression. To be honest, the current league literature is too homogeneous. They are all large and detailed descriptions of the competition. There is no new approach, and there are still large blanks in terms of interaction between players, training improvement, etc.

As we all know, the LPL has five major virtues: PC, match-fixing, cheating, cheating, and breakup. The author dares to start a group, if nothing else, there must be a full order

The author has watched too many bloody romance dramas. His brain is seriously ill and he died from poison. Why is there not even a good one? It's not without reason. He deserves it.

The pacing is okay. Maybe it's a female author. The writing is more delicate. Even the protagonist like you is too miserable. There are two bastard teams in a row. The characters you wrote shouldn't be so miserable. Do female writers like to abuse the protagonist?

Taking the abuser as real... A typical disease of young people

The writing is so disgusting that people won't let you talk about it, right? It's a "true story" about an abusive master who is addicted to abuse.

I heard someone say that you are the author of that novel about not knowing how to win? I read the comment section and if that's true, why can't you change your habit of abusing your master?

After watching part of it, let's talk about the mistakes in the plot! 1. JackeyLove knows Baolan, Spicy Hotpot, lwx, and lqs, but the scene in the middle of the group called the Seven Wolves is obviously not familiar to me. Although it is said to be an adaptation, since it is based on a realistic plot, I think it is not good. 2. As the boss of NB, although he doesn't understand games, he should know the business value. Chris is not a boss who doesn't know anything about writing. He is a bit ingenious. Players who don't know what soul is will casually enter the e-sports circle. Since you want to do big things, you need to understand the basic knowledge of the e-sports circle. The most basic cornerstone of team building is not required. Chris's role is dispensable. Online public opinion, other teams don't know? He is so good as others and no one comes out to prove it? Except for the people of his own team. 3. I feel that the mid laner of the team with the pig's trotters is weak. . . Doinbs7 can't hold down Knight. He is an LSPL power leveler and became famous for his assassins in his debut. Knight is probably still ranked or playing in LSPL. After training in S10 and S11, he gradually became the number one mid laner in China. 4. The connection between the middle teammates in the game is a bit not very good. I watched most of the first championship and it was nothing more than putting up the highlights of the junglers in each season. Many of them were from the third uncle, and I knew all the details in the middle. 5. If I don't believe in the people who can accompany you to the top of the world, I won't stand up and speak to you. It's Lin Weixiang who is very smart and lqs who values ​​emotions. They directly renew the contract before the contract renewal is confirmed. We will ask the good brother after we have renewed the contract. What these brothers did, it feels like lwx and lqs are superficial brothers. If brothers are like this, then I can't even think about it. It only represents my personal sense, I think some of it can be modified!

DRX! This is a miracle belonging to the League of Legends!

I think the writing is a bit strange, so let me mention a few points that I personally think are not very good. First of all, I was actually attracted by the title of the book. When I saw lqs and lwx among the supporting characters, I knew what the author wanted to write. I felt good about it, so I clicked in and read it. But the more I looked at the back, the weirder it became. What I couldn't understand the most was that the protagonist had clearly shown a clear dislike for several TCS teammates in the front, and the protagonist had many choices. Why did he have to follow him to NB? Although I know that if the protagonist does not go to NB, it will conflict with your original purpose of writing this book. After all, it is "together on the top of the world", but overall it is a bit confusing. I can't understand the logic of the writing. Well, the author said that you will explain it later, so I will read it later. Secondly, I think some of the character portrayals are a bit strange. In my impression, junglers always have a little thought. How to play without a little thought requires a lot of thinking about jungle. Moreover, the background of the protagonist you portray is a child from a single-parent family who works with his mother outside all year round. I feel that such a protagonist should not be such an innocent person. Even if the protagonist is young and his mother is very good, he should not have such a character. The character state in life and in the game is also a bit separated. Again, some descriptions of supporting characters feel unreal to me. I won't talk about OOC because I don't know much about the real situation of these professional players. The main reason is that when you describe some of their psychology, it makes me feel uncomfortable. On the one hand, you described some of their dark psychological thoughts, which makes me think that it is understandable for them to have such thoughts. This is a relatively real side; but on the other hand, some of the plots you described make me feel very unreal. Let's not talk about these professional players who have not yet gained fame. Let's just talk about some of them who have gained fame. After playing so many games, if there is a problem with the details of the game, their mentality will collapse. It is so easy to lose their mentality. How can they achieve these game achievements? Why do they play professionally. For example, the description of Hou Ye and Benji, they are also world champions after all. After playing so many games, why are their mentality so bad? Not that much. (Of course, because I don't know much about the details of some games, maybe this detail is very important and correct, so they simply lost their mentality) Come on, author, he is actually very fast and very diligent. You can build on this a little bit Improve the quality. I really want to see this kind of plot where a bunch of brothers work together to reach the top of the world. From this perspective alone, the author's writing is different from many other writings. I hope you work hard, write this novel well, make more progress, and write better. ps: My suggestion is just to read it. The main thing is to write the story you want to write and present it completely.

When I saw the second fight against IG, I felt that the author's writing was too realistic and too exaggerated. The protagonist did not have any plug-ins and could practice routines in advance. As a result, he was able to defeat Samsung and SKT with Sunset Xishan's Wu Shao and Tong Wudi plus the fledgling Songxiang. It was a bit exaggerated. Samsung was really invincible in the S game that year I couldn't stand it when I saw the fight with IG. , It's too routine, the teammates are in dire straits, the protagonist explodes and leads his teammates to win the game. Although it is a routine like this, other novels will give the protagonist cheats. After reading it, we will know that it is not an explosion for no reason, but a cheat, and yours is the protagonist's explosion. I don't know why it happened. After all, it is a novel, and it needs a little sense of excitement. What you wrote is too dry and uninspiring. This is my personal opinion, I hope it helps

The same moral kidnapping as nt, a brainless literary young author who likes to abuse his master. In this book, lpl does all kinds of disgusting things to the protagonist, but the protagonist has to win the championship for lpl and increase the popularity of lpl. After winning the championship, he can sign a contract You have to be the one to sign for 10 million less than your worth. After all, you said in the article that you were willing to drop 5 million from 15 million, and then you signed for 4 million. Have you ever thought that the European and American teams are the big deals, and you don't play professionally just to make money? What are you putting this on?

I read in the comment section that you are the author of the best support. It's a bit like that book with chapter 600 about how to lose a S-match, "I don't know how to win", a classic chant spread, various abusers ➕ Wen Qing ➕ Han Za, this one can be said to hide Han Za's clothes, the abusers and Wen Qing have not changed at all.

I have to say that the plot here really deserves no grades. The protagonist is a pure clown. To put it bluntly, he treats people as having no IQ and capital as imbecile. For an ordinary but not ordinary person like the protagonist, the plot has been incompetent and furious without any help. .

There is something about this little boss. He has no system and is not old-fashioned. He likes data and slow-paced daily alliance articles. You can take a look.

In reality, those who are willing to play brother lol have not won the championship. There is also lwx. The fact that lqs can win the championship is really because the version of that year is suitable for fpx. Only S6's SKT has truly won the championship against the meta. Therefore, the player hero pool and team play style are not suitable for the meta, and the championship is just a luxury. And the fpx team is so far the only team that cannot enter the S-League the following year after winning the championship.

In other words, it is eye-catching among most fast food alliance articles, the rhythm is well controlled, and it is also the kind that I like with background and ideas. Support

The boss of NB knows the popularity of the hype of "The Last Dance", so doesn't he know the popularity of the protagonist and the number of MVPs of the protagonist, so he writes about the rich second generation as a fool? The education received by the rich second generation is far better than that of most people. Do you really want to be reborn as one of them?

Fortunately, I always get on the bus first and then replenish my tickets. It was because of authors like you. I stayed up late to read 600 chapters of the best support you wrote. I didn't know how to win. I almost got angry to death. When will the self-proclaimed literary youth die?

In addition, the protagonist's "good brothers" lwx and Liu Qingsong signed a contract directly without asking the protagonist, and the good brother Wushu and koro1 also signed a contract directly without any prior discussion with each other? You're still not sure whether your brother will stay and play, so you voluntarily take a pay cut? They are too superficial brothers. Is this a plot that the author is proud of?

Abuse main article. . . Can you please stop committing literary youth disease?

It can be seen that it is a purebred GSL.

Walking through it step by step, it's quite enjoyable to read, well-founded and not overly cheating. It's a masterpiece.

I haven't seen such a beautiful picture in a long time.

No. You like the all-China class and you found someone who won the single-poison coin? After winning the world championship, you still need to be poisoned.

The protagonist licks hard? ? ? What you think about? Unfortunately, the reality is far different.

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel about alliances without being systematic. It's very well written, so go for it, author.

I feel gay in gay.

The large amount is really refreshing😚

Not bad, the rhythm is very comfortable, come on