Dragonborn's World Journey

It would be better to write this kind of Western fantasy without adding modern accents. After all, you are an empire builder and reality god who has lived on Nirn for nearly thirty years. Your spoken language should have been affected by the people around you. You always speak the same way. This is just a young man who has just arrived in another world.

I don't like the barbecue stew here. Let's try the noodles I made... Do you think this is not inconsistent with the Western Fantasy World? The other Supreme King has no character at all, especially like a villain who has achieved his ambition. Whether it is dialogue or behavior, it completely does not meet the set standards. It is recommended to delete the king set previously. Just be a brainless protagonist who has a golden finger and shows off everywhere.

The author writes a book like this, deliberately writing the protagonist like this, just to prepare for making money when it is released on the shelves. When it is released, you can drag out the plot as much as you want, and disgust the readers as much as you want. Aren't you afraid that readers will be disgusted by you and run away before it is released? Why can't you get along with money? ~~(ಡωಡ)Hiahiahia

It's really poisonous. The night watchers can't see the protagonist's extraordinary power? Do the Lang family think they won't be slapped to death? It's really drama for plot's sake. . Animals all know that they are afraid of strength, and the protagonist is constantly being ridiculed in the face throughout the whole story. Almost poisoned to death

What I see is the face of the protagonist, the villain, who has traveled so many years and is not as mature as a junior high school student. Did you lose your brain stem during time travel?

After watching it for a long time, I didn't feel that the protagonist's speech and behavior fit the setting. Is this God? This is the king who has been fighting for half his life? Is this someone over fifty years old? Awkward? "I'm still the same boy as before, unchanged at all!"

Pig's feet are too kind😥

When the law of the weak and the strong is forgotten, the writing style of this novel becomes third-rate. If the protagonist has power but others keep stepping on the protagonist, then it is a mindless novel.

Letting innocent people die tragically, knowing that there are many evil people in the Night Watch, and letting them go, one building after another, the protagonist has no idea at all.

Maybe what I said was a bit ugly, and what I wrote was like a child playing house.

The protagonist is too pretentious and doesn't want to care about anything. He looks magnanimous and condescending, but in fact he is not happy at all. Compared with the self-proclaimed god image of the protagonist, I think the people of the motherland are better, at least they will not wrong themselves.

Not bad, but the pace is a bit fast

I'm confused. After reading five or six chapters, I still can't figure out what the protagonist is here for.

The setting of not withering flowers is rather vague, so I suggest you set it yourself. After all, either they have achieved freedom from the restrictions of the God's Head, or they have not achieved it. Half don't understand what it means. The concept itself has too little information and is very high-quality, so even the Elder Scrolls would not be in a hurry to complete it, so it is very suitable for second creation.

What will the Dragonborn do when he comes to the Bone King world to confront the Bone King?

Let me ask you about the heroine. Is this book without a heroine? If yes, is there much xo? Are there many female supporting characters? If there is a female protagonist, is it a single female protagonist?

Jon's Thousand Wolf Armor should be designed according to the shape of the Fang Wolf Armor.