My Different World Academy

Overall, Xueyue Road is very creative. However, the character portrayal is too thin, and the early story is straightforward, so the stamina to continue watching is a bit lacking.

Click left and click right. The content is a bit messy. Haven't you read your book carefully?

What should I say? Draw more characters, write down the identity and goals of several students and other indispensable plots. Like this freshman competition, I can't remember anyone. I only know one Su Qian, and the sense of immersion is not enough.

When I see Pokémon, I feel like I'm going to collapse. It's hard to arrange the Creation Llama. It's too high and it won't work. It's too low and it won't work. If it's too high, it will penetrate the dream world. If it's too low, the Pokémon will become useless again.

Fang Meng's cultivation and other things take up a lot of space. I won't talk about Zhang Tuo, Liu Rou and so on. Who wants to read it? It's despicable to drive a wedge between the two colleges. I have done so many bad things and I have to clean up. There are so many chapters. Who is the protagonist? There is no main body. It's very tiring to read. Have you finished writing it yourself?

I thought it was a story about farming, but it turned out to be a story about fighting for hegemony. Why are they gone and still fighting among themselves? I really can't understand the writing. . .

Come on! I think it's pretty

Adorable and new, please collect and read~~~

Come on, come on, it's too little, and I can't get enough of it at once. . . . 🔨🔨🔨

That game is called Ghost Trick, and the extraordinary power of that world can completely solve all the problems in that chapter.

Come on! There are too few articles about the school, but it's pretty good.

This is a good idea, but it's just too little! Not enough!

The setting is pretty good, but the power system is a bit unclear, and the plot is a bit messy. Come on, author.

Specialization, how to use it? Games, changing the world, what kind of families are those? As for the heroine, don't write it in the early stage. How about writing the protagonist? Just show off.

I came up with an idea: Dream wonder: "Nimetic Sanctuary Astrolabe Canopy" Recommended works are "The Myth of Saint Pluto" or "Saint Seiya" (The Myth of Pluto with a full personality is highly recommended, and the stinky and long biography is not recommended) Effects: 1. After activation, a 10-kilometer-long sky projection (which will gradually expand as the sacred object grows) will be printed on the high sky, blocking the original starry sky. 2. The coverage area of ​​the canopy is all "sacred territory" and has a spatial stabilization effect. The initial spatial stabilization level of the core area (the Athena symbol in the center + the surrounding twelve constellations of the zodiac) is level 6 (subsequently increased with the growth of the sacred objects). The spatial stabilization effect decreases layer by layer outwards, and the outermost stability level is level 1. Those whose strength is lower than the spatial stability level cannot open space cracks, and those whose strength is higher than the stability level must pay a certain price to open space cracks. 3. The Lord of the Sanctuary can use the power of the sky curtain to inspect and detect the area, and can also apply buff status to the friendly side in the Sanctuary and debuff status to the enemy. The core area has the best effect of increasing and debuffing, and it weakens layer by layer toward the periphery. Unless you actively remove the effect or leave the sanctuary, the duration of the increase or decrease is permanent. 4. Each of the twelve zodiac signs can only resonate with one person, and there is no limit to the other silver and bronze. After the resonance is successful, you will get the small universe power of the Saint, but you will not get the Holy Cloth. (The pseudo-sacred astrolabe was born to adapt to the rules of this world, so unlike the original work, the Pegasus is only ordinary bronze here and does not have special treatment) 5. The Lord of the Sanctuary can use the power of the astrolabe to infuse the power of the stars into the three metals of gold, silver, and copper and transform them into star gold, star silver, and star copper that contain the power of the stars, and use these as materials to create holy clothes. Using Star Titanium to reshape and upgrade the formed Silver Saint Clothes and Bronze Saint Clothes has a chance to evolve Holy Silver Clothes and Holy Bronze Clothes; Gold Holy Clothes require Star Titanium and Star Tungsten. (After all, it is a different world, and it is a weakened version, so there is no need to completely apply the original settings and directly create original materials)

The world setting is a bit imperfect, why do the authorities rule the country instead of a coalition of major colleges?

Didn't the author write at the beginning that Fang Nan launched a live broadcast enrollment using the world's wonders as a selling point? And he also told others that this strange object can be used in unlimited combat without worrying about injury. Even the official office knew about this and went to find the protagonist, hoping that future competitions would be held here. Why is it that when it comes to the freshman competition, it's as if all the characters' memories have been wiped clean? What's the point of saying that Chenxi Academy is too harsh in selecting students through actual combat? Why is it that Luo Qi's lack of fear of pain during a fight is used as a selling point to attack Chenxi... No, oh, author, do you want to read what you have written? I have posted the picture below, you can see it yourself

Why are they all foreign?

Okay, I overestimated you. . . . This is the first time I've seen an academy stream that doesn't have many dramas about the academy's development. And with your writing style, the plot is not even divided into time transitions. It made me think several times that the plots of the two days happened on the same day. The character perspective changes so suddenly. Before the character I brought in earlier could exit, you suddenly changed characters behind you. It really caught me off guard. Every time I even read it twice and sorted out the plot again so that I could understand what you wrote. I have seen a lot of books that are so tiring to read, but I have never read dozens of chapters and there is no sign of improvement at all! So why can I still read ahead even when I start to find problems? I just hope you can improve a little bit later! Even if it's just when changing time, place, or character's perspective, add a dividing line. Or add: after the character's name to express "this character is talking". These two points will prevent people from confusing the narration and what the character is saying! How did you make dozens of photos without realizing the problem? I won't talk about the plot's key points. Why are you not aware of such obvious shortcomings in writing? How about you go and read it yourself? How tired are you from reading this book? As long as you have a little improvement in the future, I won't talk about it so much.

I suddenly thought of a question. It doesn't matter in the game. What if the Eyes of God are snatched away in reality? Every one of them is exposed. If the Eyes of God are snatched away during the Eye Hunting Order, you will lose your wish. But in reality. Or is it integrated into the body like the heart of God? Are there projections outside?