
This Plot Is Too Ordinary
这个剧情太普通了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 63k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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28Chapters
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My thoughts after reading the first ten chapters. Readers who are passing by please read the article first and then read the book review, so as not to be affected. First of all, I would like to say that the author's writing style is very good. The first few chapters are very well written and the language is also very humorous, which makes people feel no pressure to continue reading. The character design of the protagonist is also very interesting. He is a skilled scribe and has a very good attitude. I just saw some doubts and questions later. The protagonist has a cheat and needs to counteract the routine. This is the premise. But the anti-routine rules for plug-ins are very vague. It can be said that almost no hints are given, and the protagonist is just asked to follow the ancient routine to counter the plot. Although everyone knows that the ancient routines are those shabby plots. But because there are endless anti-ancient clichés nowadays. This also makes the male protagonist's counter-routine a bit cliché, making the counter-routine look like the mainstream "routine" now. So I feel a little confused when I watch it. Why is this counter-trick like this? The only difference is that the male protagonist does not have a novel plot like other male protagonists, so he relies entirely on his own imagination. This is innovative, but it is also a bit unclear. All the routines that should be countered are entirely up to the author and the male protagonist, and readers are forced to follow them. It's like a sudden inspiration: Hey, this is a routine, I should go against it! However, the previous plot where the protagonist was divorced and even took the initiative to write a divorce letter, and the supporting actor Xu Zheng defeated him with one move and covered his mouth was very interesting and interesting. But it feels a bit abrupt later on when Chu Mengyao, Elder Mo, and the two visiting elders are afraid of admiring the male protagonist. Chu Mengyao's admiration was okay, but it felt a little strange that the two elders were running like quails. Although I know this is a pleasant place, there is something a little bit wrong about it. No matter how you say it, you are still a patriarch or the like. No matter how afraid you are, if you stay in the Xu family, even if you die, the Xu family will definitely be responsible. It is a bit cowardly to run away in despair without even saying a word. Later on, a group of people in the clan began to turn against the male protagonist, and things became even more blunt. It feels unnatural. Except for the male protagonist, everyone else feels like they are pure NPCs and have no self-awareness. Although the tone is just sand sculptures, just let it pass by hahaha all the way, but if it is too blunt, it will become a bit awkward. These are purely personal feelings. I don't feel awkward when watching it, but it feels too stiff to be refreshing. Some readers will prefer this kind of plot. The author's writing is good, the title and introduction are quite good, and I feel it has great potential. The plot and supporting characters will be better if they are polished. I hope the author doesn't think I'm nitpicking hahaha. Keep up the good work, author. If the male protagonist in the follow-up has no cp or a single female protagonist, I will pursue it. If there is a harem, I will run away. .
... The same routine, but with different expressions. Is this called anti-routine?
I feel that this book you wrote has great potential. Why should I give up? Can you finish writing this month? Take a look at the situation?
Another good book that I have no choice but to read T T