Lister of Azeroth

Let me tell you something, I feel really tired lately. The plot advances too slowly, mixed with a lot of unnecessary plots, and the intrigue makes people feel a bit bored. Directly use powerful power to temporarily wipe out everything and accelerate the plot. There are too many versions of Warcraft and too many mixed stories. With the current writing style and the pace of plot advancement, I don't know how many chapters the author plans to write.

The humans in Azeroth seem to be much more talented in magic than the elves? It takes hundreds of years for elves to practice, but it takes a dozen years for humans to achieve it. Medivh's guardian power was also created by humans. At that time, he was known as the Star Mage. His strength could probably beat the high elves stupidly.

Objectively speaking, the writing style is acceptable.

Complain about it. 1. The plot is too slow. The protagonist expands his territory massively? ? Expanding the territory and launching wars are not as good as developing oneself, and relying on superior policies to attract outsiders to join the territory. . Modern people are really not interested in war or anything like that. 2. Why are the character relationships so complicated? Originally, a half-elf is quite good. A long life is enough. . Turned out to be a collateral descendant of the Sunstrider? ? In order to obtain the territory reasonably, I endure it. . And then he became Aegwynn's son (Medivh's half-brother)? ? Are you sick? ? Is anyone interested in the protagonist's life experience? ? ? Having the talent of a mage and the memory of another world are the protagonist's biggest golden fingers. These life experiences are really not relevant. . Isn't it sweet to be an orphan? ? Do you like to recognize your mother and your father? ? It's still some kind of noble blood theory, right? ? 3. A lot of things that are not interesting. Everyone who clicked in was clicked in because of Azeroth. There is a female official match, can you not do the stallion plot? ? It's enough for Stallion to read urban literature. . . When modern people travel to Azeroth, to be honest, they should be more interested in magic than anything else. Because it is powerful power that brings security. What is a woman? It will only affect the protagonist's speed of drawing the sword. Thank you. 4. It's too slow. Chapter 200, the cool thing is that only the artifact actively follows and develops the arcane Rasengan. . . Shuangdian picked up too slowly, so how could I have any interest in pursuing the book? ? Suggestions for more fun: ① Territory super-era policy/infrastructure development ② Development of alien version of spells ③ Collection of collection controls (artifacts). Even if you don't use it yourself, you can collect other professional artifacts for your subordinates to use. It's pretty cool too Some more cool things will attract readers more than other messy things, thank you.

No wonder the data is not good. When a child duels, the prince will talk about it. The control is too lenient! It's just rambling. If you don't read it carefully, you still don't know what to talk about.

The generally depicted images appear to be petty and small-scale. Jianguo in Wetland belongs to Ironforge's sphere of influence. The protagonist is preparing to open up wasteland and mine in the cursed land, and everyone wants to get involved. This logic is really poisonous, especially Terenas, who is written like a mean and evil woman next door who likes to take advantage. The Eastern Kingdom is very large, and humans only occupy a few places. Lordaeron itself has not even developed the Eastern Plague area. The other parts of the Hinterlands, the areas occupied by the Wildhammers and trolls, and the Arathi Highlands, which are so close to humans, have not yet been developed. What is the logic of not exploring the place right under our noses, but traveling halfway around the planet to the southern hemisphere?

The plot is too inconsistent and coherent. The scene changes suddenly. I feel confused as I watched it, as if I missed a few chapters.

Write it well. In fact, reading this novel makes people angry, and so did I. Various unpleasant plots came one after another, and I felt that the protagonist was always hovering on the edge of madness, which made me a little defensive. But looking back, thinking about it, being able to read angry is actually an introduction and experience (although not a positive one). Being able to read it shows that the book is not as unacceptable as I thought. As far as the plot is concerned, the protagonist is not schizophrenic, but an exquisite idealist and egoist. He is growing up, and the price of growth is making people unhappy. There is no way around it. There are some small questions. One is to suggest that the author learn about the feudal system in Europe. When vassals enjoy the title of monarch, they also have to bear some responsibilities. In fact, the protagonist can think about this issue every time he considers a problem. I don't know if the protagonist will realize this later, but there is no need to use land as an introduction every time. Nobles need and must bear certain obligations. Another thing is that the protagonist himself is a big feudal lord. In fact, there is no need to be so separated from his subordinates. The binding of interests can make people more loyal. There is no need to rely entirely on elves or humans. Pick something that is generally decent on both sides. Balance is a required course for monarchs in both the East and the West, especially if the protagonist is a half-elf. Finally, the heroine problem, mutual use can be possible, but I hope to have a real bond. I don't like to watch romances too much, but once people have no scruples, nothing matters, there is no bottom line, and they can do anything, and they slowly become paranoid and crazy. Think about it, is there anyone in Azeroth that the protagonist really cares about? It seems that there is no one. The current goal is simply to fight the orcs. After fighting the orcs, he will fight the natural disasters. After fighting the natural disasters, he will fight the Burning Legion. The protagonist should also be an emotional animal, and there should be something else besides these. Of course, the pen is in your hand and you have the final say, so come on.

Some of the plots are awkward. I think the protagonist is at least a leader first, and the second profession is a mage. However, in every war, he takes the lead and breaks away from the troops and goes straight to the base, instead of pushing past the troops. When you write like this, I understand that you want to say that pig's feet are very powerful, but every time you encounter the boss later and you encounter the danger of death every time you fight, you feel that you can't beat it. Moreover, Pig's Feet's mood swings were particularly high in many plots. At first, I wanted to write him as a wise, calm and genius character, but from time to time he suffered from emotional breakdowns (the scene with Oriana after the dance), fanaticism (stimulating his subordinates to kill murlocs), and sudden changes, which made people very uncomfortable.

The game plot is completely incomprehensible. . Start by burning trees