At the Beginning of the Alchemy Test, I Became the Examiner's Ancestor

Awesome, the conversation of the immortal cultivator was overheard by the slaves

Good guy, you make your own rules and help others practice elixirs, and you can still gain merits. Is this merit gained by helping others, or by doing good deeds? I'm speechless.

Just, can you teach me how to write? I like your novels very much. I also particularly like novels about alchemy. Unfortunately, I can't even read the novels I wrote.

Now the ancestor, now the father, now a father?

The setting is okay, but the writing is poor and the plot twists are blunt. 1. The plot advances based on the villains, one after another, never leaving the villain from the beginning to the end. 2. The protagonist's strength has only been improved once. Many villains appear, each one stronger than the last. The protagonist has not even reached the foundation-building stage, and the second-level elixir is far away. 3. The world is too small, and the protagonist does not go out to experience, refine medicine, search for natural materials and treasures, and make more friends (creating a charismatic character who can use a knife) 4. There is a lack of excess. After solving a villain, there is a period of safe development. 5. The layout is too small. The villains are all about personal love, hatred, greed, desire for profit, etc. It is better to create a villain with a charming personality. A villain with faith and "equally" justice.

I don't understand. What is written?

The creative writing is good, but the tactful way of writing is not to my liking. The protagonist has a life-saving prescription. He still needs to run around and slowly accumulate system coins. He has never thought that he can borrow the family's manpower. The life-saving longevity pill has been eaten by the ancestor, and he still has to keep it out, making the protagonist's grandfather anxious and angry, and finally slaps him in the face.

I've read five chapters and left a comment. The idea is good, but the plot is a bit exaggerated.