One Song Went Too Far, and I Cried All over the Internet!

Why write the male protagonist like a gangster...

It's the same old start again. I got cheated on by my girlfriend and got the system. I participated in the show and was targeted by my instructor and slapped in the face like crazy. I can figure out the content just by looking at the chapter titles you wrote.

To be honest, brother, when I opened the directory, I didn't want to click on it.

The plot connection is not very good. ①Why go on variety shows? It was clear at first, but then why did it change to money? ② Appearing on a variety show for his cheating girlfriend and singing "Going Too Far", what about the follow-up? What's your reaction to your cheating girlfriend? ③Is that cutie the heroine? ! It should be! So why does the male protagonist feel so distant? And you already have a cutie, so why do you want to flirt with other women? Even if you want to be the King of Neptune, you will not take the initiative, refuse, or take responsibility. The three no's! What kind of woman are you flirting with! ④When you saw the cheating girl bullying the cutie, didn't you say they broke up at first? Why do you feel like you haven't divided yet? Overall, the character of the protagonist is unlikable, the connection of the plot is inconsistent, even the continuity of the songs is not up to standard (wouldn't it be better to follow "Actor" after "Overdone"?), And the conflicts between the characters seem like children fighting. Author! The conflict at the beginning was good, but the connecting plot fell apart. Furthermore, what kind of image do you portray as a cheating woman? Cheating on his family, but viciously threatening the heroine? What a contradiction!

The real ex-girlfriend is really disgusting🤢Is the author here to disgust us?

Open the table of contents Chapter 1: My girlfriend cheats Chapter 2: Being targeted by the tutor Chapter 3: Singing and crying to the whole network Chapter 4: Being tough on the tutor, popular on the whole network Chapter 5: Girlfriend begging to get back together 😅😅I really don't know what to say about this routine. It's just like the must-have three-piece set in previous TV series, car accident, amnesia and cancer.

If you think this is good, then write it this way. If you write it, no one will want to read it. That is also your own idea. Since you feel happy to write about your ex-girlfriend's photo, then don't say anything like no one will read it. After all, you have fed your readers shit, and you still ask readers to read your novel, right?

Just learn how adults write novels at a young age, go back to college, and then write after a few years of social experience.

I haven't read your book, but I predict that there is a high probability that it will be caused by the handling of the ex-girlfriend, and the second is the hesitant character of the protagonist. So many readers ask you this question. How do you explain it and explain it? You are standing in your position and perspective. The question is, do you plan to write this book for yourself? In the past year, there have been a lot of opening plots with this theme. Even level 5 authors are writing them. If the situation is exactly the same, it depends on who can follow up well.

A garbage book with moral garbage. How should I put it? What does it want to be?

One song sells 50 million, that's awesome

They are all bad reviews. Please read them first to respect them. If you don't like them, you will criticize them later.

The style of writing ten years ago, appearing on variety shows, releasing new songs, everyone burst into tears, and a judge targeted me. The king invites songs, the four major entertainment companies steal people, offends the four major companies, and is still awesome despite being banned.

The author wants to learn from others, but he doesn't have the ability.

Come on, tell me, you can cry the first time you listen to that song. The first time you listen to that song, you will read the lyrics and be moved by reading and understanding it!

I forgot to read the comments. After reading a few pictures, I immediately asked him to quit. It is highly toxic and I went to wash my eyes.

Rubbish. Otherwise, why don't you just write very bad things to your ex-girlfriend? Isn't it disgusting that you were cheated and found out and forced to do nothing?

I found someone in the comment area saying that I sell 50 million per song... Please! No one with any brains would write like this. If a song sells for 50 million, even if you are willing to sell it, who will buy it? It's the protagonist who is talking about it. He just wants to prepare the other party mentally. If you want to take the full copyright of this song, it will be very expensive. If you can't buy it, or it doesn't meet my psychological expectations, then you can only transfer the share. This is called putting psychological pressure on the other party... I also said later in the article that the full copyrights of "Overdone" and "Forgetful Water" were packaged and sold to Star Entertainment for a total of 10 million. As for "Young and Young", "For" later, the share will be transferred... Don't think that selling the full copyright of an excellent song for five million is very expensive. The song "Old Boy" was enough to last the Chopsticks Brothers for a lifetime... Finally, thank you readers and fathers for your opinions. If you really see something illogical in the article, you can discuss it calmly. I see that the situation has changed. If you encounter any nonsense, please feel free to criticize it, but you can't make it out of thin air!

That song made you cry, let the author tell you! Your title drives away potential readers!

There is no female protagonist in this novel, but all are female supporting characters. Bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review

I paid by mistake. I don't want to see the songs sold anywhere.

I bought this book on the street, and the starting system gift package makes me invincible. It's still ridiculous.