
Daily Life of Immortals in Teyvat Continent
提瓦特大陆的仙人日常
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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12kRecommends
24.8kFans
539Chapters
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I have voted for four monthly votes, and two for recommendation votes... Author, please satisfy my desire to have the emperor and Shisui banishing the real girl stick together, or you can switch the genders of the two and stick together...
I remember to torture those two losers who disturbed Jianyi after seeing Fei Que, otherwise I would feel unhappy. Of course, forget it if I didn't write about it.
The characters of Chong Yun, Xing Qiu, Qin and others are deviating from the game. The protagonist wrote a book and spent a lot of words to describe it. Of course, this may also be my problem, or I am not suitable for this kind of book. I started to pay attention to this book when it was just ten chapters old, but recently I have become more and more disappointed. I hope the author can improve it.
Now I am very doubtful about the author's mental state. In order to encourage the author, I can only discount 999, hoping that the author can carry forward his unique (crazy) style.
What the hell? Aren't mandrills from the Yaksha clan? How come you are now a bird?
Damn it, boy? Danmei, are you investing here?
An essential question, is this book good to read? Don't put any filters on your answer, just focus on the pen and writing style. How does it compare with other fans (such as Naruto's high-scoring fans)?
A rather long book review
Let me comment on it seriously. First of all, the advantage of this book is that the writing style is not bad. The author is capable of writing a good work. At least even if he follows the routine, it is enough to make a pass in online articles to support himself. I will focus on the shortcomings later (because this is the only advantage) 1. [No main plot] The protagonist seems to be a plot adaptation machine, without any purpose or any logic of action, as if it is just to satisfy the author's fantasy of adapting the plot of Genshin Impact into a cool novel; when things come out and things come out, I almost want to insert the plot originally described in Genshin Impact according to the routine of a cool novel. The protagonist of the experience given to readers is not a pure water elf, but more like a fly flying everywhere. 2. [Serious Feudal Complex] Because the devil loves people, and because the devil is powerful and can handle many things that humans cannot handle, people must follow him without any complaints or second thoughts. The Demon God of Salt does not like/is not good at fighting but is very kind. Although her people can only hide in Tibet and are deprived of the qualification to live in the sun, God loves the world, so she is not wrong; the tower tyrant is self-motivated and is great in isolating the wind and snow. In fact, he is a CJB. After being overthrown, Wendy directly solved the problem of wind and snow. Although he raised people in pig pens, God loves the world, so he is not wrong. Then the protagonist begins to exterminate human desires with great righteousness, and the descendants of the followers of the Salt Demon God are directly purged and exiled. Brother, this is a peaceful era. Our ancestors have lived for so many years, and living resources are obtained through labor. Is it your turn to be judged by the pure water elves who have been sleeping for 500 years? And to execute a large group of people with just one notice, without giving any excuse or opportunity to make amends, is the social impact not considered? Wouldn't other people think that this butcher's knife would fall on them one day? 3. [I want to be feudal but don't understand feudalism] Qixing is the real power person who guards key departments and is only responsible to the emperor. You are an immortal and you are an imperial envoy. Are you awesome? You just woke up for 500 years and started shouting around to review Qixing's work after just three days of sleep? Even if you find something wrong with Qixing, you can only report it privately. Wouldn't direct accountability be a slap in the emperor's face? 4. [Acting disorderly] In order to write a cool story about accountability to the Seven Stars, the protagonist was given a powerful position; then, in order to be funny and funny, a bunch of settings were added, making him become a fool from time to time; and finally, in order to satisfy the author's desire to change the outcome of some people, the protagonist occasionally killed decisively. Any two of the above combined are already a disaster, and all three together I can only say good guys. That is, you can imagine a mentally ill person. An unhappy person is like killing someone, and the key is that his killing is legal. What kind of despair it is to live in this kind of Liyue... 5. [Other three-view issues] The protagonist has an attitude of "done all the work in this life when he entered the customs." That is to say, is it possible that even if the emperor does not win the battle between the demons and gods, according to the routine of gods loving the world, people will still live well... It's not that they can't live without you, can you not be a eunuch and set the emperor's pedigree?
Author, I would like to make a suggestion, either delete the character card of the emperor, or add the character cards of several female characters, or directly state in the introduction that the protagonist's sexual orientation is normal. Otherwise, your character card only contains two men, and there are hints of Nantong in the beginning, and then you submit the book to a male channel, what's wrong? Do you want to go to heaven? After reading more than 200 chapters, I glanced at the book sticker out of boredom and thought it was Nantong Shukai who scolded me. You deserve it for what you did!
It can be more daily, and try to be a version slower than the official version, otherwise the later chapters will be more troublesome. Miha backstabbed the fan author not once or twice. Don't write anything that the official did not explain in detail. Someone from Station B and Miyou Society summarized the in-game information. When referencing, be careful to distinguish between the summarized content and your own supplementary content. Cai Ying described it very well, but the official protagonist was relatively normal in the early stage, and only became shabby in the later stage.
After reading three chapters, the grass content is amazing🙂
Mhy's worldview is similar. It is known that the laws of heaven are the outsiders who defeated the original people. The sky of void is most likely a barrier, perhaps to resist the collapse. So in addition to maintaining the rule of Kanria and Snow Kingdom, the purpose of heavenly law may also be to delay the collapse. So, assuming that Tianli is eliminated, then the collapse of Tianli's civilization (unknown, but definitely stronger than Teyvat) may break out. If there is no next Tianli-level strongman, Teyvat will be cold, and of course there is a high probability that Teyvat will not come. The Honkai that I personally prefer is the corresponding level of Teyvat. There should be no Herrscher, so this should be able to block it. Then it depends on whether Teyvat chooses to speed up development to fight Honkai or suppress development to reduce Honkai.
Daily detox? 🤭🤭🤭
Change the map
The writing is okay, and it is very comfortable to watch But there are too many private goods First, for the believers of the Salt God, the emperor in the original plot does not care at all. This kind of tolerance is also one of the charms of the emperor Second, the emperor has long been prepared to rule by humans. In other words, the emperor has been weakening the influence of the immortals. How could it be possible that the Qianyan Army met the people hundreds of years ago? The Immortal still follows it to the death Third, the Immortal's respect for the emperor can be reflected in the entire plot of Liyue, but the protagonist cannot see it at all Fourth, the Qixing of Liyue has been in office not for a few years, but for decades. Ke Qing can work until retirement if he does not make a big mistake, and the same goes for Uncle Tian. How can there be a situation where Qixing has been demoted, but their confidants are still there? Fifth, Uncle Tian is in charge of intelligence in Seven Stars, and his identity is top secret. How could a person in charge of recruitment know Uncle Tian's identity and open a back door for Uncle Tian's daughter? You said Ningguang's opening of a back door is more logical than this. Sixth, Ke Qing dared to speak out in front of the emperor. You, an immortal who has not seen his shadow for 500 years, deserve to make Ke Qing nervous? In a word, the writing is very good. But it's too out of step with the original plot characters, and it looks very awkward.
It's just because Kaijijima is the invader that I hate it so much. For this reason, I even gave up on drawing Xinhai. After all, the most important thing about playing games is fun. Why draw a character I don't like just to form a team?
I'm too neurotic, and there's no main line, just going here and there.
Can you stop writing about Dao's wife's daily life? If you really want to continue writing about daily life, can you write back to Liyue?
Can you please stop writing about emotions? It's too confusing. Let's advance the plot.
I came over next door to check in. The writing was really good.
Why? Would recommend to me, transgender,
Is it possible that the modern water god is the wife Shisui's mother found for him?😍
Is this a fanfic? Start by figuring out who is who
What happened? I haven't seen it for almost a month and it's gone
Where are the new books It's already December