Giant: Saving Parade Island in a Mad World

I hope it can really change and it seems reasonable.

I've basically finished reading it. The author is really a novice... The writing is very good but he also made a lot of fatal mistakes. Sometimes the writing is good, and sometimes the mistakes are almost fatal. Let's not talk about the first few chapters. In Chapter 69, you have the protagonist tell others about his identity as a time traveler, and then tell the supporting characters that this is a comic book world. This kind of fatal mistake and the behavior that breaks the sense of substitution are rarely made by even novice fan authors. The drama is almost instantaneous and too poisonous. I suggest that the author must change this plot. Even a person with high poison resistance like me can't stand it, let alone most readers. In fact, many of the plots in your book are well written, but the excitement is not enough to create. Instead, some poisonous points often appear, such as making the protagonist wet his pants. These descriptions are unnecessary. But the poisonous point in Chapter 69 is too strong. Telling one's identity as a time traveler is a taboo in any time travel work, let alone saying that this is a comic book world. This is a super taboo for comic fans, and it especially affects the readers' sense of immersion.

It sounds like an anti-war comic, but in the end everyone in the audience is a Yeager fan.

The protagonist takes things too much for granted and only wants a happy ending. If you really value your own life, you will not seek death like this. You will usually make other plans after ensuring your own safety.

I feel there is something wrong with what I said in the previous chapters. Attack on Titan's ability is to see the memory of the future successor, and then the point in time that the protagonist travels to is the day when the city wall was destroyed. Grisha went to snatch the power of the ancestors on this day. The original work also said that Grisha and Zeke communicated with each other. The ancestor who robbed Eren after seeing his future memories. Since the protagonist traveled back in time and decided not to let Eren inherit the power of the Titan, there is a big problem with this timeline. Grisha has already seen Eren's memory, so Eren is destined to inherit the power of the Titan, and the protagonist cannot change it. (This is my own opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.)

Did the author fail to imitate the original work?

There are as few giants nowadays as rare animals, come on

To be honest, when Giant appeared in the fourth season, he was no longer suitable to appear in the fandom. All of these are interrelated. The admonishment is to highlight the powerlessness of human beings under fate. Why is Alan's father coming? It is because Alan has obtained the ancestor + king in the future. If this decision is changed, Alan's dad will be gone long ago.

It's so well written＼(^▽^)／!

The plot of the work is compact and not procrastinating, and it directly attacks the contradictory nature of the original world of "Attack on Titan" from the very beginning. The character motivations are reasonable, and the personalities of different characters have been perfectly restored. It can be seen that the author did a lot of research on the original work before writing the outline, and there is no watery plot just for the sake of being happy. It is the best article among the attack articles I have read. But it's a pity that there are still too few people watching it, and the author may not be able to support it in the future. But thank you to the author for bringing us such a sensible and calm "Attack on Titan" article. I have no respect for it. Please give it a reward.

The main character's name is really inconsistent, and the style of painting feels different from others

It's better not to have a useless goddess.

It feels bad if you don't reveal that you are an outsider, right?

Come on! This rhythm is just right

Enter Juwen? Long time no see.

I remember that the giants that can move at night were created by Gek, while ordinary giants cannot move.

To freedom

Come on, that's it. Once the eunuch has finished his job, won't Marai stop fighting?

I originally read it on Baidu and came to Qidian to support the author. It is so well written. The author is such a genius. The plot is very reasonable and the characters are not broken.

Will the author write a new book? When?

It's very interesting, very good, but some plots are a bit tight.

I would like to ask the author, is it possible to sign contracts for Attack on Titan fanfics now? I also want to try writing it

I would like to ask the author who signed a contract with tens of thousands of words. It is very difficult for Giants to sign a contract.

But if Karula didn't kill Allen, his father would not give his two giants, Attack and Ancestor, to Allen. He already regretted it when he killed the royal family and asked Zeke to stop Allen. At that time, Allen understood that it was him who killed his mother, and he was so angry that he disconnected from Zeke.

Who is the heroine? Is it Frieda?