Commander Became Famous After Taking His Cub to a Love Show

There are no big problems with the plot, and I don't have any objections to the male protagonist's pursuit of the female protagonist, which is similar to boiling a frog in warm water. On the contrary, my biggest criticism is actually the author's outline setting. I was allergic to it at first but not anymore. The engagement was written as a divorce, and the character names were all confusing. I also kept my breath closed and watched him silently... After all, I had already read half of it...

The beginning and the end are not in the same style. The beginning is still a story about a strong woman, but later it turns into a story about a strong man and a silly woman with the heroine running away with her baby.

The update was too slow. I looked at it again and found that Qi Yan seemed to have also uploaded it... His, it looks good! ! 😍 (-^^-)

Sister likes articles like this, please update more, she likes to read them

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Nice! Not bad! The author would like to thank you for updating! 😜

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The early stage of the love drama was good, but after the male protagonist appeared... The intelligence was real

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It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The character descriptions are just right; the branch lines and main lines change naturally and are interlocking. In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go! There is a shortage of books. Do you have any good book recommendations?

So whose child is Zhouzhou? ?

I have so many thoughts that I am speechless. If I could say a few more sentences, the plot would be reduced by half.

I feel that the concept is still good, but if the author's expressive ability is a little weak, it will become nonsensical, the beginning and end of the explanation are not clear, and it is difficult to read. If you can watch it for free, it's not worth paying.

There are too many typos...😅😅😅

There are too many typos and sometimes people's names are mixed up.

Being persuaded to quit by the manager role, I couldn't resist the urge to punch someone every minute.