Super God: a New Vest Every Day

The plot is getting more and more ridiculous. The first 50 chapters are just okay, but after 50 chapters, it becomes unreadable. The plot is boring, the clichés, and the old-fashioned wisdom-killing blows are slipping away.

Your plot belongs to Hard to Help Me Fat Tiger, piecemeal, with a dream on the left and acting on the right, first changing into a woman and then a man, and then a Chinese martial arts coach playing science fiction.

In Super God, it is written that Devouring the Starry Sky is completely defeated by being swallowed up, okay?

Well, I saw 35 pictures in 30 minutes. I read a little too fast and didn't look carefully. For me, I can continue to read. The system is good. For super gods with dark planes and eyes of insight, I can only let the system wash the ground. The abilities are a bit fragmented. Either give some powerful abilities to play with, or extend the time of small abilities, such as opening the dream to extend the time to 10 years. In reality, the more lies there are in the role-playing, the less rigorous it becomes. It's okay to describe each role-playing as a time-traveled dream. After all, there is only one protagonist! The timeline of the Super Seminary is still too short. If each role is not outstanding, it is better for the system to directly give abilities and add clones to individual character cards to cause trouble. Well, I don't have any comments or suggestions. It's not easy to write a book. Good luck, author! !

I don't know what the author meant by this book. There is no main line. You can write about daily life, but now and then, you change into a character and go off-line. In this way, even if the writing is poor, the emotional scenes are awkward, and the dialogue seems to be obscene. At least the character you play has a complete story. If you don't have a complete story, forget it. You are still wandering into the world and can't grasp it at first. Can you think about the plot later?

Oh, hey, he also awakened the spiritual master. The physical structure of the Xiongbing Company and the Angels is 18 million miles away from the humans on Earth in the Devouring Starry Sky. They can all be awakened. The laws of the two worlds are too different. Under normal circumstances, it would be normal for the Angels to have their computers explode as soon as they arrive, and the same goes for the Hero Company, as soon as they arrive, they would be completely destroyed due to the differences in the world.

The hidden dog licking of a female angel! 🙂

You are in a group with a messy plot. I skipped three chapters in a row and read three chapters in a row. The effect is the same. It is a bunch of nonsense. There is a plot but no plot, and there is no rhythm. I can't understand what you are writing. Forget about cultivating immortals and practicing martial arts in the world of science and technology. You are also swallowing the stars. You are a little stronger in practicing martial arts on your front feet. Why do you get beaten like a dog as soon as you practice immortality? You still dare to write about swallowing the stars. There is a possibility that you will be soul-searched by the powerful as soon as you enter. You have nothing, and you like to run around.

I really don't understand it. Can anyone tell me about the worldview of this book?

The plot is messy, so proceed with caution

Those who can persist for 10 chapters are all great people, and I persisted for three chapters! Can you imagine that Pi Pixi turned into Yue Lingshan, and she still has memories! ! ! If you say that the memory has been suppressed, it would be okay to return to Super God and revive after the plot is over! Are a bunch of great masters playing house with you with their memories? ? ? People's tens of thousands of years of experience and experience can't compete with your two lifetimes of less than 50 years! !

My head hurts when I look at it, I feel sick

Personally, I feel that if the protagonist has the ability to apply a template directly from fantasy or belief, and then change his vest to make trouble and make flirtatious remarks, which is still interesting, you will be too messed up.

This wave of forced driving makes my scalp numb.

The author has a great pattern. The acting stream is not limited to men and women. Although there is no non-human being, although the protagonist is stinked as Yang Jian, it is not limited to personal time travel. Although there is only one true group time travel, there is a choice in the harem, although there are regrets left in the fox demon, although there are so many, but it depends on the author's ability to grasp it.

People who watched it were really upset, and I was really convinced.

I've read a few chapters and it feels so confusing that I can't even stand it anymore.

It's really confusing. Although I can understand it, what you wrote doesn't deserve your title.

The world changes over and over again, and the characters in the novel are all confused. And every time the dream world is changed, there are more than ten or even dozens of chapters of the original work. This is unnecessary. The dream world follows the plot throughout, so it is better to just read the original work.

Author, you are not suitable for writing role-playing topics.

It's not acting, it's imitating characters' experiences, etc.