Nightmare of Time Devouring the Starry Sky

The author works hard to be sure, but the author is very lax in terms of combat power. First, the strongest person cannot be banned and suppressed in the original universe. Therefore, the highest level 6 power cannot shake the strongest person at all, so you have to use your brain to write the strongest person in a powerful way. To put it bluntly, even the most powerful palace-like treasures standing there cannot be absorbed. It's better not to bring it into the protagonist and indulge in obscenity. After changing these, this book can still be read.

That's nonsense. Once there was a battle between geniuses in the original novel, I didn't even know if the earth would still be there.

I have long wanted to rant about the unsolvable enslavement of devoured souls. In order to prevent being enslaved and making life worse than death, why do you commit suicide and wait for the Lord of the Universe to resurrect you? ... Um😓, has no master of the universe ever thought of resurrecting an enemy who committed suicide and then enslaving him? Does everyone in the entire worldview automatically block this vulnerability?

Don't mix in private goods, don't mix in private goods, don't mix in private goods, say important things three times. Dear author, if you want your grades to be slightly better, you can't include any personal information. You can interpret the plot, and even extend the plot according to your own ideas, but you can't include any personal information! ! Remember that any private content is poisonous in the eyes of readers of your fandom. What is private goods, that is, setting some things that cannot exist in the original work. For example, when I saw the battle of geniuses, I found several private goods. The so-called immortal crystal, the original work clearly stated that there is no such thing, and the cosmic crystal is already the largest currency unit under the Hunyuan unit. What does it mean to set a currency yourself? Tampering with the original work? The second point is that it is the so-called first genius war. I don't know what you are thinking. If you have to come to the first war to show your protagonist, I can tell you clearly that the timeline of the first genius war must be when the original ancestor created the secret method of the virtual universe. You must know that time is devouring the most worthless thing in it. If nothing else, the Nine Swords is the virtual universe that enters from the genius war. This is clearly stated in the original work. Even among the Nine Swordsmen, it will take at least several million epochs for a genius to break through to a high-level venerable. Calculate how many years this is? Have tens of billions of years passed? I am not the only one who can't bear this. Many readers have already felt relieved after seeing this. After all, why are we here to see fan fiction? Are we here to see your private stuff? Then we might as well read original novels.

I haven't read much of the original work, but I feel like the fighting power is broken. The domain lord can fight immortals, and he even kills people later.

There are quite a few secondary settings, but when I saw the Genius War, the first time was a bit ridiculous. In the middle of the Reincarnation Era, the universe started about six trillion epochs. You said the first Genius War started 800,000 epochs ago? Six trillion and eight hundred thousand? Moreover, the original book also said that the Nine Swordsmen had already participated hundreds of thousands of epochs ago, but you were so far ahead of schedule? There is also the following, I haven't read it, but I saw others discussing it, that is, the clone, it is outrageous to carry the clone to death. The author said the original nucleus, but as I told my book friends, there was a clone that was placed in the original universe, but I don't remember when. And if it has to be carried on the body, it will have a life-saving effect? Also, the author really doesn't listen to opinions. It's not very reasonable and it doesn't affect the overall plot. I won't change it.

Blindly changing the setting of the original work, the first genius war was set 8.2 Billion years ago in Luo Feng's era, a mere 820,000 epoch of history? How did so many geniuses from tens of millions of epochs come about? The laws of acceleration, stasis, and reverse flow of time were randomly changed, and the star level could actually use time to accelerate. It was really hard to chew on.

Are you kidding me about the first genius battle?

I don't understand the latest one... Where is the protagonist's doppelgänger? Not to mention bringing everything with you? ? ? And anyone is qualified to block the virtual universe, the original ancestor has no face!

There are 108 kinds of time essence in 10 years in Chaos City. After hearing this, the Lord of Chaos City will shout that he is awesome, and the aliens will stay awake in the middle of the night and get up to hunt. Talking about cheating is more serious than some straightforward intellectual cheats.

The genius of the protagonist, who is really a genius, was killed by the king of the alien race on his own side. He was also exterminated and was very speechless. Just to stand out, City Lord Luo was born and the earth was directly destroyed... There should be a lot of descendants of a queen... In the end, there was no punishment at all...

The beginning is quite rubbish, and they often talk about immortality. The Black Dragon Mountain Empire cannot exist for that long. In the world view of Devouring Starry Sky, the infighting among human races below the title of King Wudi basically doesn't care too much.

I deleted another wave of negative comments. It's really stupid. If I keep deleting like this, the comments will be deleted.

It's just a skin from the Yuanxing era. Almost everything follows the route of Luo Feng's era.

There are too many loopholes, and many places that were clearly described in the original work have been changed by the author. When reading a fanfic, I definitely read it with the original setting in mind. Once the setting is changed, it feels awkward. Otherwise, you can make it clear that this is a parallel world of Swallowed. The world rules and timeline are generally the same but the details are different. This will be easier for people to accept.

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If you read this book, please fill up your poison resistance first. I persisted until chapter 65 and still retreated.

The protagonist is disgusted by the idea of ​​becoming a disciple of the mountain guest. He has already inherited the inheritance of the reincarnation of the emperor in the wilderness world and the local Kai. Both of them are at least the same level as him or even stronger than him. Why should he become the disciple of the mountain guest? In particular, he casually shattered the protagonist's soul treasure. Moreover, when Zuo Shanke expresses his idea of ​​accepting a disciple, it is still a gesture of giving alms and setting conditions. The protagonist is already guaranteed to be immortal. Sooner or later he will catch up with or even surpass the mountain guest. Why should the Lord of the Universe have to avenge him when he is so awesome?

I haven't read it yet, but I don't want to read it after reading the comments. The first Genius War Thunder came to me only more than 800,000 epochs ago. I can accept countless poisonous points when devouring fans, but I can't accept the chaos of the timeline. It's more poisonous than licking Luo Feng. For example, if you write that it only took tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of years from the creation of the world to the canonization of the gods, this poison is not

Who said this book is good

You are not being strict. During the previous trial, you said that you had handed over the inheritance of the Beast God of Light Time (including the mind power cultivation method). Later, after the inheritance of the secret abyss came, it directly became that it has not been handed in yet, and the human race does not know the mind power cultivation method. Also, you are such a big group of Yuanxing people, why haven't they been resurrected yet? Have you forgotten?

In order for the main character to have all the clones of his dead body? He also forcibly explained that the original nucleus should not be too far away from the clone, and the protagonist gave up his family for the treasure.

This is what I read, so it's one of the better ones among Devouring fanfics.

The protagonist's self-game is very serious, and the cultivation of his character is just a talk. I have never seen the changes in the protagonist's character in his words and deeds. Oops.

I want to say that the first genius war was held two thousand years in advance. Wasn't there two genius wars in ten thousand years?

The writing is very good, don't write it again in the future. I have seen more than 50 chapters so far. They are completely copied from the original work. If many of them are original works, it is completely Luo Feng's growth route. Source Star accepts the assessment (Relic No. 9), Killing Fields Virtual Company, Source Star is discovered, and participates in the Genius War (I don't know how many billions of years have passed, but the Genius War has not changed at all). In the early stage, I wrote about how awesome the orthodox illusionists were, but it turned out to be useless. It turned out that I couldn't do this, and I had to go all out for that. If you can't reasonably strengthen a profession, don't write about it. Look at what's written now, it doesn't make sense. Besides, what use is an illusionist to becoming immortal? What, are you going to cast illusion spells on the will of the original universe? In addition to being able to influence the starting point of the demon race, what else can the illusionist do? Fight in a nest? What is useful in Swallowing Starry Sky is divine power (source power), laws, soul, and will.

Chapter 179: Being poisoned, too bad, the protagonist is really mentally retarded

Ask a question: Does the clone have to be conceived in a specific realm? For example, the first clone of the Luo Feng Golden Horned Behemoth can be conceived in Xingzhou, but can it be conceived in a later realm? Still have to use it every week.

In the first genius battle, the protagonist's ancient earth is probably either the Mountain and Sea Realm or the Source Star. The distance from the middle to the Earth is estimated to be 40 billion years.

The author cannot be from Tiejun Company.