I Can Explode the AFK Position and AFK

Today, I wrote 140,000 words for my first book, and published 90,000 words. I felt a little strenuous at 50,000 words, but after writing 60,000 words, I smoothly reached 100,000 words. After 100,000 words, I looked at my novel with a reader's eyes. I felt that the writing was really lacking, and the fighting scenes lacked vocabulary and were a bit empty. The retelling of some plots is a bit blunt. I wanted to change it, but found that I couldn't change my writing power at the moment. So after 100,000 yuan, I changed my style slightly. Today, a book friend objectively pointed out that he would not describe fighting scenes. I tried hard in the afternoon, but I really couldn't control it. I was confused for a moment, my writing was not good, and I couldn't describe the fighting scenes well! Can I still continue writing? After thinking about it all night, I suddenly realized that if I hadn't written 50,000 words, I wouldn't have realized that 50,000 to 60,000 words was a threshold. Unless you write 100,000 words, you won't find that the first 100,000 words are not good enough. If I hadn't written to 140,000, I would have confidently thought that writing a book would be easy and not difficult. Therefore, even if I cut it and start it again, if I keep cutting it until it reaches around 150,000 words, I will only be wasting time and will not make any progress. Even though the cheats in this book are unreasonable and the writing is poor, I have learned to accumulate vocabulary and learned what some book friends like and don't like. This is enough for me to make progress. When I first opened the book, I didn't expect it to achieve much. What did I expect? What am I confused about? I shouldn't be confused, keep writing, no matter how bad I am, I will learn something. Hope to stick to 1.3 Million. When you can't write anymore, look here. October 4th!

I don't know what to say. In fact, the novel is very good, but I really don't know what to say about the fighting, but as a fantasy upgrade novel, it cannot be without fighting, so I'll figure it out. This is the protagonist's fight that I wrote Cheng Yun saw more than 20 bandits rushing up in a swarm with weapons. He couldn't help but feel a little nervous. Looking at the sword in his hand, he didn't know whether it was long enough. Not to mention the other guards, they are originally servants, and they usually bully ordinary people based on their status, but where did they experience real fighting? Facing these extremely vicious and experienced bandits, several of the guards turned pale, and two of them could not help but have their legs trembling. However, they also knew that it was too late to run away now, and there must be a brave man under the heavy reward. They gritted their teeth and decided to give it a try, shouting loudly to give themselves the courage to step forward with the sword! ! Ah! Ahhhh! ! Soon the two sides were fighting each other, blood splattered everywhere, screams, and whines gradually rose and fell. Senior Sister Dong, along with several martial arts disciples and several strong men from the robbers' side, were quickly intersecting and fighting with each other. As the leader of Black Wolf Village, although Guo Yong is not a near-qualified martial artist, he has been able to get up from the bottom, so he has rich fighting experience, so he first prepared to deal with the rest of the martial arts disciples except the woman.     ，，，， When fighting at low levels, neither side's physical fitness reaches the level of iron skin and iron bones. If you don't use sharp weapons, even if you master a powerful fighting style, it is meaningless. Fighting in reality is not a game release skill. You can control the opponent and be beaten by you, but they can move. When you get up close and personal, you also have to face sharp blades. They don't have the confidence to carry other people's sharp weapons with their bodies. Guo Yong has rich fighting experience, let's give a big shout! He slashed hard with the big knife in his hand, trying to seize the initiative and attack. He kept slashing with the knife. Sooner or later, with his strength, the woman in front of him would be exhausted. At that time, the woman in front of him would have no choice but to be slaughtered by him. Thinking of this, I couldn't help but feel warm in my heart. Although the woman smelled of sweat, it was still okay to wash her off. However, Senior Sister Dong naturally cannot do what the other party wants. Clang, Clang, Clang! ! After resisting several times, she faced the blade and dodged it sideways. After rolling to avoid it, she suddenly jumped up and slashed at Guo Yong's waist with the long knife in her hand. The opponent suddenly changed his moves, Guo Yong was startled, and his figure suddenly retreated, avoiding the sword while moving. However, Senior Sister Dong slashed the air with her sword, and the remaining momentum was not used up. She followed Guo Yong's figure and dragged the sword out again, and the light of the sword became an arc. Facing the serial blades, Guo Yong was worthy of being an experienced bandit in fighting. He twisted his figure hard and moved sideways to avoid it. At the same time, using the remaining strength of the twist, he swung his right foot and kicked Senior Sister Dong to kill... Li Ruigang did not join the battle from the beginning. As the eldest son of Black Wolf Village, he naturally took the back. He looked at the fighting people, kicked his feet suddenly, and rushed over like an arrow. He was close to the side of a guard who was desperately resisting the thief. He exerted force from the ankle with his back foot, and his figure was half a foot off the ground. At the same time, a stream of blood spilled from the big knife in his hand from top to bottom. The guard's head was split open on the spot and he fell to the ground dead! Cheng Yun was still trying to fight with an ordinary bandit, and suddenly felt a line of sight falling on him. He turned slightly and found that it was the young man from the Black Wolf Village who could shine. At the same time, I secretly sighed that I was indeed the real protagonist, and the AFK tool was delivered to my door before I even started using it. Li Ruigang had actually noticed this martial arts disciple who was using a sword. He saw that he was wearing martial arts clothes, with a pair of tattered trousers underneath, and holding a sword. He was a little worried that the other party had learned swordsmanship. You know, when walking in the world, most people use knives and rarely use weapons like swords. Those who can use swords are either good players or show-offs. As a martial arts disciple, the opponent is obviously not that kind of kid from a rich family, he can only be a good swordsman. But after his observation, he found that the opponent actually used a sword as a knife, and he had no fighting skills. He immediately knew that this was just a showman, and that kind of... Li Ruigang didn't know what to say! Faced with this kind of thing, he had nothing to say. At this moment, he narrowed his eyes slightly and took two steps forward. In an instant, his whole body shot straight into Cheng Yun's back like an arrow from the string, and he volleyed directly towards Cheng Yun with a knife. Cheng Yun was on guard for a long time. He couldn't help but smile sinisterly, rolled sideways to avoid the knife, and at the same time reached into his arms to sprinkle the lime. But before he could take out the lime, he felt a life and death crisis coming. He was afraid that when he took out the lime and sprinkled it on the opponent, he would be chopped into two pieces. So he had no choice but to take out the lime. Cheng Yun could only roll on the spot, and then faced the opponent's second, third, and fourth knives, each blow carrying crushing power. When Li Ruigang saw Cheng Yun rolling and reaching into his arms, he knew that the other party might be using a hidden weapon, so his energy and blood suddenly burst out, and he swung the knife quickly without stopping at all. The blade kept falling from all angles, and the terrifying blade was swung down. Driven by Qi and blood, Li Ruigang's figure, which was much taller than Cheng Yun, was very terrifying, like a violent lion. The slashing sword was astonishingly powerful with the strong wind, and the terrifying light of the sword was connected. Faced with such a violent and violent attack, Cheng Yun had already burst out of energy and blood. Even so, he could not help but be shocked by the terror of the opponent. The poor sword in his hand almost had no power to resist. Every time the opponent struck with a sword, his arm would tremble and hurt, his body would shake violently, and his whole body would feel uncomfortable. After all, a sword is not as heavy as a big sword. If you want to use the sword to slash the opponent, it will only be funny. You must know that by the time Cheng Yun's sword struck the opponent, it was estimated that the opponent's knife had already struck Cheng Yun at the same time. As a result, the opponent was injured and Chen Yun was cut in half... At this time, Chen Yun couldn't help but regret why he had to use a sword instead of a knife. But Cheng Yun had no choice. He looked sideways at the corpses all around and regretted once again that he had just been fishing. Now the guards around him were almost all killed. Several senior brothers and sisters in his martial arts school were also besieged by bandits, so he had no choice but to fight... Li Ruigang sneered again and again, there were whistling winds, and the terrifying blades and blades rubbed against each other crazily. Finally, Chen Yun suddenly spat out a mouthful of blood. When his old strength was gone and his new strength could no longer be sustained, Cheng Yun's head was dragged up by the blade, and his remaining body suddenly gushed out with blood... Protagonist Cheng Yuncuo, the book is complete!

First, you can get a minimum experience value every day. In addition to the minimum experience value, external objects to assist cultivation can also increase the experience value gained; This setting allows the protagonist to choose salted fish to obtain the minimum experience value, or to obtain money to buy things to assist cultivation. The author's idea is that the golden finger is an auxiliary. It is up to the protagonist to decide whether to salt fish or find something to increase the speed of practice. If the golden finger is set not to be affected by external objects, then the protagonist has no motivation to open new maps, then does the protagonist still have independence? Secondly, regarding some readers who said that the description of the illusion of the lucky light ball was less than one sentence, because the author's writing style is limited, the golden finger is read as information like notes. If it is a description of the illusion, it needs a three-dimensional description or something. The author's writing power is limited, so it is difficult to write it for the time being. Third, the skills panel requires the protagonist to read it carefully, rather than the skills of ghost painting. The protagonist can hang up on the panel even after reading it. What the author wants to write is a story that is more inclined to the mortal stream. The golden finger is just an auxiliary. It at least reflects the protagonist's cultivation talent and understanding problems. Then if there is something that can improve the understanding or talent in the future, the protagonist will be motivated to grab it. Fourth, mount a skill in the idle position, and the set limit is that it can be changed when reaching the next stage. For example, if a skill is upgraded from Lv1 to Lv2 to Lv3, then if the skill is changed, the original idle skill will remain at L3 without losing experience or level. However, if during the process of upgrading from Lv2 to Lv3, the skill has not yet reached Lv3 and you change the skill, then the skill that is being idle can only be Lv2, and the experience between Lv2 and Lv3 will be cleared! Only experience will be lost, not level. If you don't understand, leave a comment below, and Xiao Mengxin will explain it to book friends😀 The various limitations of Golden Finger are due to the author Xiao Mengxin's limited writing power and limited imagination, so he can only develop it slowly. It is also for the purpose of writing a novel that is like a mortal flow, slowly. The golden finger will be developed slowly as the protagonist improves. Xiao Mengxin does not seek popularity for this book, but only wants to improve his writing skills, so he will try to win more than 1.3 Million. The golden finger is too powerful, and he is afraid that he will not be able to control the book and collapse. I hope to satisfy all book friends as much as possible. If you don't like it, please click on the upper left corner to exit. Thank you very much. If you are a book lover, please discuss it when you have time and help Xiao Mengxin think about the plot.

As mentioned earlier, the character of the protagonist is to be obscene and never to be a waste. It does not mean that if you have a hang-up position, you will hang on till the end of time. The character in the novel is also a real person in the author's writing, and real people will change as they grow up. For example, a man with an income of 5,000 yuan a month, a family of three, a wife and a son, is buying a house in the city. It takes half an hour to walk to work, and only takes five minutes to take the bus. Taking the bus costs 2 yuan each time. Is it cheap? If it costs eight yuan four times a day, do you think he will sit down? Does he have a choice? Yes, but the choice is limited, and most people prefer to walk to and from get off work. And this man suddenly started a business and succeeded, with an annual income of one million. His company is in the same building where he used to work. So when he goes to work, do you think he walks A or takes the bus? Author Xiao Mengxin I think he can choose ABC. If he is rich, he can choose option C to buy a car and drive it himself. But after buying a car, he will definitely choose to drive himself to work? I think he still walks occasionally and takes the bus if he finds driving troublesome. Why is this? Because he has money and the right to choose, but you don't use the right to choose? People who have the right to choose mostly choose what they like. Some gangsters will say, I won't choose it, I just like walking. For such people, I can only say that this book is not suitable for you. Please click on the upper left corner to exit the book. Dear book friends, the author is just a newbie, there must be some unreasonable things in the book, I will correct it if I can. Don't get hung up on character issues. Cheng Yun has become stronger and has the right to choose. He will choose the one that is better for him. The author's imagination is limited. I hope all book friends will read the book and laugh it off if it suits your taste. I wish all book friends a happy life.

After that, if you have successfully practiced the on-hook skills, will it be completely cleared if you remove it? Also, will the internal energy be cleared after removing the internal skills?

This book is considered the best among the best. I hope you don't want to be a eunuch.

The author welcomes you to ask questions, but trolls are banned directly. I think the book is worth reading and I will collect it. You can't read it, it's not to your liking. You can exit in the upper left corner. The author's writing skills are limited and it is impossible to write a perfect book! Everyone, if you can read it, read it. If you can't, see you in the book world! Don't troll, thank you, there is no shortage of trolls' collection!

If you were to write about a story about a beautiful fourteen-year-old or fifteen-year-old saint from the Holy Land, or the legitimate daughter of a big family, who meets someone in trouble, there are a lot of starting points. As soon as I wrote a sentence, all book friends thought of the process and ending, and the reading experience was not good. The first problem is that I am fourteen or fifteen years old, still in junior high school, and can't write by hand. The second question is about the plot of the heroine. The author is Xiao Mengxin. If you can't grasp it well, it will be easily banned. (Chapter 26 has been cut a lot. I really can't grasp it. Fortunately, the heroine has not been arranged yet.) So I will definitely not write it in the early stage. It will depend on the situation in the later stage. It is a bit unreasonable for a time traveler to travel to an extraordinary world, have a golden finger, and be treated as a pure white rabbit throughout the book. There is a golden finger, running around the map to find a heroine who can keep up with the protagonist, just appearing in Kaiyang County is a bit of an old routine. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. The author wants to write that Cheng Yun is just a mortal, not a saint. He doesn't want to write that he is not a saint, so that the empress can take notice of him. As a mortal becomes stronger, his vision will also change from low to high. Is it normal for an ordinary person who cannot guarantee three meals a day to think that he would not marry a non-saint? Gentlemen, take a closer look. You only have the right to choose when you have the ability. If you talk about single-mindedness, there is no way to say that you only have one for a lifetime. Xiao Mengxin can only give the protagonist a hobby that has no emotional burden. Adjust it when running the map. If it doesn't work out in the end, it will be changed. Xiaomengxin's writing style is limited and his imagination is limited. If there is something that does not meet your taste, I would like to apologize.

I think the writing style is acceptable. I would like to add some favorites and recommendations, and monthly passes. Anyway, I'm a newbie and don't know what the use is. I'll ask others for help. It should be useful.

I am a bookworm of fifteen years and am writing this book myself. If there are any typos in my first book, please leave a review and I will correct it immediately!

This food book seems interesting

Except for the big difference in preferences for women (age), everything else is fine.

Xiao Mengxin would like to explain here. The setting of the golden finger is to lie down and do nothing. There is a minimum guarantee of 1 point of experience every day. This will be explained later. Cheng Yun's setting in the book is that he can lie down but not stand, he will not stupidly carry on when there is danger, he will run away if he can't be beaten, he will come back to take revenge after being beaten, and he can be a wretched and never wasteful character. If there is no restriction on the setting that the experience gained after canceling will disappear, then Cheng Yun can hang up the aircraft directly and directly hang up the Monkey Fist. He can enter the ninth level in about a year. The ninth level is basically invincible in Kaiyang County. Will he still take escort missions and go out to find a new on-board slot? It's not that you can't, it's that you don't need to. Wait a year and you will be invincible in Kaiyang County. Will you make money casually? So can Xiao Mengxin still be able to write the next plot? This setting is to lead to the plot of the next escort mission, and the plot of the escort mission connects the new AFK position with money. Also, Goldfinger's abilities will be unlocked step by step later to make them consistent with the protagonist's upgrade situation. It has been set up early in the morning, and it is not added temporarily. Please be patient and look at the back to see if there are any saved manuscripts. Throwing out all the settings at once, Xiao Mengxin couldn't grasp it. He was afraid that the book would collapse, so he could only throw it out step by step. Even if there are new AFK slots, there are only two. He has learned a lot of physical exercises and martial arts, and two AFK slots are not enough. Then Cheng Yun will be eager for new AFK slots, so he will open a new map. Otherwise, if he has guaranteed experience every day, he can become invincible in Kaiyang County, or he can just hang out for two or three years and become invincible in Kaiyang County before going out. What plot can be written like this? Xiao Mengxin couldn't think of it, so he could only set it like this. The golden finger will be improved in the future. If you are not satisfied with reading this book, I can only say sorry. The author is a newbie and his writing skills are limited.

The plot needs to be sped up, Shuangwen is almost

I can't understand the plot, but the previous part was okay

The problem with the latest two chapters is a bit serious and a bit unclear.

If you have Yang, take two tablets of vitamin C every 3 hours. Your throat will not swell, but it will become swollen when you stop 🤭

Take a bubble! Wait for the update to finish and read together. It's not easy to add another chapter.

Do all high-level warriors have good luck?

If it were me, I would not retaliate against the Qian family at this time, but continue to accumulate strength, because I don't know if the court will side with Qian's fiancé later. At the same time, when I have enough strength, I will come back with revenge and let everyone know that those three poems were written by "I".