Entertainment: My Wife Is a Big Star

I should have read one chapter of this book before, but I couldn't get past the second chapter. Now I've read it again, and stopped at the third chapter. Like a book friend said: Secondary cancer, the plot of the first three chapters is weird (I won't read it anymore)

I was about to watch the heroine Tiantian, but then I saw that there had been no updates for 5 days and I didn't dare to watch it.

Some suggestions for the author: 1. I saw that the author is leaning towards nonsense and comedy, but this type of writing is a test of writing skills. If it is written well, it will be a highlight. If it is not written well, it will be full of secondary cancers and look a bit childish. 2. The main line is not clear. Perhaps as the author said, there is no outline and it tends to be chaotic. 3. It is better to study the conflicts carefully and see how other entertainment works deal with them. After all, in the real world, I saw several conflicts in the article, which seemed like child's play. I didn't see the nonsense, but instead felt the urge to put the childish embarrassment on the public screen. 4. In terms of character design, the character design may be affected by the style and cannot stand up. Especially the protagonist has two lives. Even if he escapes from the previous life, he can be seen as a calm and dull person in this life by merging his memories. The male protagonist will definitely be affected by the memory and at least be calmer. The male protagonist now gives me the feeling that he is a middle school boy who is still in junior high school. 5. Since you are writing an entertainment article, you must understand some specific situations in the industry, including copyright, sharing, etc. The heroine has not terminated the contract when the song is released, and the company of her income must participate in the sharing, especially the less famous the company, the higher the share ratio. Even if the protagonist holds the copyright, the amount of the heroine's share must be clearly calculated, otherwise the couple will jointly exploit loopholes in the contract. It will not be illegal but the reputation will not be good when the contract is terminated. (Of course, after all, I know very little about the entertainment industry, so maybe I don't understand it deeply.) These are personal suggestions. Daily interactions are good, but it's hard to get high grades in the second grade.

Most men will not like this kind of heroine. She is not innocent anymore, she is stupid beyond description. Anyone who falls in love with such a woman will suffer.

The heroine is so silly and sweet, can she be more normal?

How miserable! Not a single comment. I think the writing is pretty good, why is it so deserted?

After writing so much and being so deserted, I give the author a hug.

Pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, or a flying dragon to ride on your face? Too boring. Let's hype things up openly, why bother to be secretive and yyds?

This book has been criticized by eunuchs! ! !