People Are in Konoha, and the Start Is Overwhelming.

When did you get poked? (Happiness)

At the beginning, he was captivated by the will of the third generation of fire, and then he climbed into his bed obediently.

I can't accept that this book has a female protagonist. Shouldn't it be the male protagonist if the country is already here? Be the strongest fencer in Konoha!

If you have any cool ideas, please leave them in this comment area and I will adopt them.

In what state of mind did the author write the introduction? I don't dare to look at it.

I thought Qingguoqingcheng referred to those two guys, but it turned out to be a literal meaning.

Let me know when you pick up soap! I want to see when the protagonist is picked up by Otsutsuki, the third and fourth generation Raikage of Uchiha Madara Senju Hashirama. I can understand being attracted to the opposite sex, but what the hell is this to the same sex? (ŐдŐ๑)

I'm often incompatible with you because I'm not perverted enough.

My evaluation is that the author describes the protagonist very well, but the author does not take a serious look at Naruto and the like. In other words, if you have not watched Naruto and Conan and the like, it will look very good, but if you substitute these works, the author is a little black guy (not to mention chicken feet).

It turns out that it really means "overwhelming the country and the city" at the beginning, which literally means it, but it doesn't mean what we thought. It's just okay.

Brothers, please come in and take a look at this. ORZ

Xia Jin? ? ? It's very tight down there (seriously)

I'm probably sick. I looked around, this should be the starting point

Wherever the leaves are flying, the fire is endless

Has Allure Talent been cancelled? If so, I won't watch it anymore.

Just read and cherish it, maybe one day this book will be gone

Have you considered changing the title of the book? Every time I see the title, I think it's about a male protagonist with a female protagonist, and I don't want to click on it at all. The content is not bad, just don't overfeminize it.

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Happy New Year, author!

I feel like the main character is a lunatic and he just makes up his mind. The author doesn't have an outline at all.

I thought that the Qingguoqingcheng was a world prop in the world tree. .

How much does Xingyue Heavy Industry have for you?

The author dresses as a woman and joins the group.

It's a bit messy, and it's dazzling to watch. To be honest, it might be better to just simulate the plot inside.