Mystery: from Apprentice to High-Dimensional Overlooker

Why do I have 10 favorites added to "Circle of Fate" just one day after the update started? Don't you guys watch "The Ring of Destiny"? Jpg

🙏 I almost forgot, let's get a sealed item and a supporting building! The main thing is that I want to give everyone some Sealed Artifacts (you) in Bai Nu's vote. This thing is too much to think about on your own. As for the supporting cast, any one that is not too outrageous will do, including the remnants of the old days and aboriginal people. It is best to have some from all over the world. If you become a traveler in the future, you will definitely travel everywhere. I will leave a message if you need it and take it away, but the role will definitely not be too much. If you are interested, just vote 2333

From the time I read Mystery, I felt that Cuiyu's habit of having a technical summary in each volume was too self-disciplined, so I'll give it a try! I won't pretend to double-update it in chapters. After all, the following content is very self-aware. The target audience is myself and not fan readers, so you don't have to read it. ♦️Update volume/update frequency Updated weekly, updated weekly. I know that the Internet writing day is even more of a passing standard now, but there is really not a drop left (scratching my head) To be honest, you ask me to fill in 2,000 words a day, and I don't know how to fill it in! Objectively speaking, there are many reasons for the low output. You may not like to see this and think it is an excuse, but I want to see it. Even if it cannot be corrected for a while, it is still a good thing to know where the detours are. First of all, I have no outline in the whole article, I am running naked. This outline refers to a written and systematic plot summary. I used to be a short story player who could finish the story in one go, or a typical idea-based passionate player. I would start writing as soon as I had the core of the story. When this habit was moved to serialization or long-form, the problem I encountered was that the core of the story that had always supported me in writing was too damn far behind for a work that might have millions of words! The dumplings made with vinegar can make me choke to death! Douglas's foot steps on Si'a's fist and punches Fabuti, holding up a barrier with one hand. If there is a story in the world, I will have a future. Do I not want to watch it? I'm very excited too! But this plot can only be read in 300,000 words, even if I write it fast... Well, the above content is exaggerated, and I did not punch Fabuti, because Fabuti died early (lol) And the time span of the serialization also determines that if I don't have an outline, I have to review the previous articles every once in a while to make sure whether I have written this content at all. Is there any way to remedy this problem? Yes! Now I create a new document and write the outline, the detailed outline, and then the chapter outline. After writing all these, I have drunk the vinegar, and I can pack up and run away! Pit? Whoever likes to fill it in! I said when I started the article that I have the main plot points. I don't know which way Douglas will take to reach the nodes, but this is the most interesting place for me to write. As for the balance between drinking vinegar and making dumplings, the current plan is not to make a more detailed outline. What is important is the logic of the characters' actions and the logic of the events. If it is smoothed out here, the path will be clearer. More specifically, I'll talk about it later in the theme/character/structure section. Secondly, there are loopholes and bugs in the article. When I finish writing a short story and put it aside for two days, I revise it, which will most likely make it more complete and reduce errors; but in serialization, there is no room for large-scale revisions, and a single move affects the whole body. This will cause me to hesitate more when typing, and I am not sure whether what I am typing is the most correct and appropriate. This point can really be solved by messing up (not) the perfectionist mentality is not advisable. Completion is more important than perfection. In fact, there is always time to go back and revise after writing an entire chapter. For those unavoidable mistakes and omissions, those that can be repaired can be repaired, and those that cannot be, please show your respect to the audience! After all, everyone knows the setting size of the mysterious original work! Anyway, welcome to catching bugs! ♦️Theme/Character/Structure Let's start with the theme. I still can't reach the level of being able to use Tarot cards to discuss topics in each volume of Mystery. I can only set the core discussion or the theme I want to show for the entire story. The first is "choice" and the second is "responsibility", with more emphasis on the former. But this theme does not belong only to Douglas. Even in the first half of the plan, the "choice" will be more reflected in the supporting characters and even the opponents. For example, the choice of Tyron from MI9 and his witch brothers, the choice of Vanna, the choice of fellow devil, and even the choice of Amon and Antigonus. Douglas also made some choices, but relatively speaking, they were not as difficult as the choices of supporting roles. As a remnant of the past, Douglas has a set of established standards in his heart. His performance is mediocre or even mediocre, which is a manifestation of the character's immaturity, escaping from choices, and hoping that things will develop according to the way he is familiar with. But coming to the extraordinary world, this naivety will force him to break the inherent standards again and again, and he will always break it hastily and forcefully. It's not until there's nothing left to break that Douglas can become the true protagonist. He will not redefine right and wrong, nor will he care about right or wrong anymore. Instead, he will decide to do or not do certain things based on his own standards. This process also includes the loss of his humanity. Initially, Douglas or Jing Wenying was set to be a college student, not a social beast like Klein. Based on plot considerations, young people's ideas are easier to fluctuate and be reshaped. As of Chapter 82, I can even say that he is not a complete person because he does not have a self-consistent logical chain to support him. Similarly, everyone has different reasons for choosing to save a painting instead of a cat in a fire. It is not difficult to simply "choose", but what is difficult is to bear the "responsibility" that "choice" brings. The "responsibility" aspect is not shown much yet, but it is complementary to choice. The second is the character design, um... Um... I don't know how to put it, the difficulty here is given by myself... It's not that I don't like the protagonist Long Aotian, but I prefer to make the protagonist suffer, constantly doubt myself, keep trying and making mistakes, and pay a lot, and finally reach a balance between gains and losses, and become the "complete person" mentioned above. Not just or evil, just making choices and having the ability to take responsibility for them. It can be said that if the character really has an arc, Douglas's arc will be so long that it will be difficult to detect. Those supporting characters who have more personality than Douglas, on the contrary, I will not consider their growth path. If they can give readers a qualitative impression in a plot, it will be considered a success. For example, after Winkel, such as Fanna, has taken on the plot, there will be no changes later. Of course, some are already dead, let alone pretending to be corpses (you Even the plot of the Castle of Dilan to complete the Zaratul family has actually not changed. It just adds some things that are not in the original work based on personal preferences. For Most of the characters in the original work are written in a rigid manner to save brain power, and they don't appear too much. Except for Amon, a pre-appointed plug-in... I can only say that thanks to Amon's character, he is very tolerant. Even when I think he is OOC, I can say it with confidence. Amon is cheating! (You Of course he is cheating. Back to Douglas! His setting is not attractive. In the future, I may focus more on writing techniques and strive for better expression. Try! It is possible to summarize his character in a few words. Yes, but I think this is the author's dereliction of duty. Everything has to be determined in the work. It is meaningless for me to explain it sentence by sentence from the outside. Finally, it is the structure or rhythm. I will kneel down first. I have no structure and no rhythm. It is a piece of cake. I lack experience and have no outline. The protagonist. The setting is not outstanding, which is the reason for this result. It can be said to be my biggest flaw. Because this thing cannot be compensated by trickery... Even for Klein, many people think that Klein was pushed away by Adam, Night and other gods in the later period, but at least Klein has his own clarity as of the third volume. The main plot on the surface is Klein's revenge, and the other branches are interspersed in an orderly manner. Although Klein is not omniscient and omnipotent, his control over himself is still very obvious. In contrast, my main plot has no main plot, haha, so far, Douglas is more like Ti. String puppets, this is indeed my failure. And because of the frequency of updates, I guess some characters have been forgotten. Even if they are prepared in advance, it will be like piecing it together (sad) So even if there is no outline, I need to sort out the logic of various events and try to make it as clear as possible. They are not so much like things that are forced and reasonable in 0-08. The specific contents probably include the back and forth between Medici and the Witch Sect, the life-saving measures taken by the three Fengzhibai gods, the establishment of the old remnant organization (Curly Baboon Research Society. JPG), the joint planning of Lilith Night and Amon, and the real dark protagonist. Related to high-dimensional overlookers... In addition, a lot of basic skills training such as reading, opening books, and pulling tabs should also be put on the agenda... But the results of these exercises will not be a matter of time. I know that I have no talent in writing, so there is a high probability that this book will be pieced together like this. I finished it in a hurry. It may not satisfy everyone, but finishing it is the most important thing. ♦️ Setting In terms of setting, because "The Circle of Fate" is definitely faster than me, being backstabbed by the squid is inevitable... I really haven't thought about the possibility of the circle and the disaster being adjacent. If it is compatible, I will try to focus on the squid, after all, it is orthodox; but when it comes to the core of the story, I can only follow my own ideas, and I can't change it from scratch. Regarding these private settings, I welcome discussion, and I hope you can bear with me. Oh, and you can only feel the brilliance of the mystery in the setting if you really write it. Let's talk about the Origin Castle. The "plug-in" not only provides Klein with extraordinary direction assistance, but also provides the Tarot Club with human resources. The existence of the Tarot Club can also reasonably develop branch plots and shift the attention to the supporting characters to make arrangements. Is it still the final answer that is put on the surface... As for Douglas's plug-in, apart from Amon, it can barely be regarded as an extraordinary helper. Other than that, everything else is difficult to achieve, and there will be abruptness and discontinuity in the transition. In this regard, I am trying to neutralize and buffer it by using more scenes of the original characters, and make a transition to establish a relationship with Douglas. If you can't get along, you can only do it hard. Look at my way of turning things out of context! >This situation will get better after the old survivors organization goes online. Each of the fellow villagers has their own connections behind them. I wish me well in advance to write it down. I have to read and reflect on it after every update, so I leave it in the book circle. The author ran out for a drink in the afternoon and was a little confused. I think you are talking nonsense. Just pretend you didn't see it! I never feel that what I wrote has any merit. I can only say that I don't think my son is ugly. That's what I want. There is no ready-made story for a protagonist. As for whether others will buy into this story... What's the point of thinking about it! If anyone is willing to read it, I'll make a fortune! Anyway, thank you to everyone who can read this story. 2023.04.09

Eight new collections are added, real and fake. Jpg Aren't they the zombie fans stuffed in the starting point? Come out and let me see the eight living people who appeared out of nowhere (sad

No cp is the positioning of the work, not a restriction on readers, so I will not reply to or delete messages with cp tendencies (contemplation) After all, I don't mind readers' imagination, in my opinion, the imagination is also an affirmation of the character relationship and the story. So feel free to do whatever you want! Just remember to respect each other! If you don't like it, don't scold it, and if you like it, don't overdo it. If any extreme situation occurs, I will delete it without discrimination, and that's it, disband!

Damn, why don't you just update your status now? I really want to see the follow-up 😭😭

As long as you can live 😢

Leave a comment. The protagonist is a remnant of the past. The tone of the article is gray (personal perception). There are no big cheats at the moment. The writing is pretty good. Pass by and take a look, you won't be disappointed.

It's been discontinued for a long time 😭

Sad, wait and see when it will be released

I forgot to post it, the protagonist probably has this kind of virtue (thinking) and is not very good at drawing. Anyway, I just have to have an impression of this face!

Check back, no updates

The author's unique update after midnight (the book we are following was updated in the early morning of Monday!)

Uncle, I am so impatient🤤

You know what I want to say🤓

When will the author update? . . . Is there no update on the old Ford side?

? ! What happens? Why was it taken off the shelves? !