Start Traveling from the Human World

Why do so many stories about the human world focus on caring about, loving, and compromising the family after traveling through time to become Zhou Bingkun? Can't we directly change Zhou Bingkun's life trajectory in the original work? Does it have to be written according to the basic settings of the original work? The changes only changed a few details. Isn't there any book that directly writes about Zhou Bingkun going to college and joining officialdom, or being involved in the business world? You have to take care of your family and compromise with the rest of the Zhou family. As a soul-traveling traveler, you shouldn't have any affection for your original family, right? Why can he seamlessly treat other members of the Zhou family as family members just after traveling through time? This is very unreasonable

It's all about the plot. I'm really convinced. It would be great if I just watch the TV series like this.

What kind of time travel is Zhou Bingkun? Can't he be someone else and accept Zhou Rong? Little Song Jia is so pretty. Look at those stills, they are so exciting

Go to Rose Story World. The heroine Huang Yimei is not accepted. Is anyone still watching? And basically everything follows the plot. Not only in this copy, but also in the previous ones, I just don't care about this thing at all times. That has nothing to do with me. If you go to the film and television world, you don't care about anything. What are you going to do? Does everyone think you are a dramatist? I'll just watch the TV series again. Do you want you to retell the script for everyone?

Putting aside the sensibility, I can see that the Hao family's attitude towards the Zhou family is really right. 1. Zhou Zhigang is too face-conscious, and his family likes to show off everywhere. The bigger the official, the more he has to keep a low profile, as this can lead to death quickly. 2. Zhou Rong is selfish and bad. Zhou Rong + Feng Huacheng were simply the nine tribes of Xiaoxiaole in ancient times. Feng Huacheng was a reactionary reform-through-labor prisoner. He was finally pardoned and openly promoted anti-poetry at the train station. Later Zhou Rong divorced again. It hurts to see their family. 3. Zhou Bingkun is ignorant, cowardly and stupid. Most of his sufferings come from his own stupidity and ignorance. Going to jail, being cheated when buying a house, borrowing the house and not being able to get it back... Smart people would not marry Zheng Juan, a woman who is pregnant with someone else's child. With his cowardly character, he will not refuse people, nor does he know how to refuse. When someone asked him to borrow a house, he did so, but then he was no longer a human being. That is to say, the Hao family ignored Zhou Bingkun, otherwise the neighbors in Guangzipi would have asked the Hao family to open the back door/ You only need to look at the family's information to know that this is a sinkhole! They are not bad people, but they must not be related to politics, otherwise they will die without a burial place.

The writing is even more disgusting than the TV series

Slow heat is actually water. Generally, the so-called slow heat books in the early stage are large-scale water. The specific methods include the water method of repeatedly introducing the plot and characters, the water of licking dogs, the water of injustice, the water of holy mother, the water of looking at the overall situation like cerebral thrombosis, and the water of inexplicable principles. Some are more simple and straightforward, like buying a bottle of water at a convenience store. Usually these kind of chickens are sprayed and cut after being put on the shelves🐔

The main reason why this book is not popular is that the buttocks are crooked. You have to understand that most of the people who read this book are men, and the vast majority of people who are willing to spend money to read the book cannot be lickers. And your book is not a female channel. If you want to be popular, isn't there a ghost?

What the hell are you writing? The number of water words is clean. Regarding Zhou Rong's problem, normal people would start directly and report people to eat peanuts.

The writing is really more disgusting than the TV show

Liujin is poorly written. Jiang pretends to be a big white lotus, while Zhu is a real villain who worships gold.

The protagonist's sense of substitution is really strong 🤫 He is more filial than his own biological children. He looks like a time traveler being swallowed... Normal people suddenly have an extra set of parents. How can they have such deep feelings...

How should I put it... A person who has lived for several lifetimes is as if he has never seen the heroine. A book friend said it very well, "Stay low and be small". Being a person and doing things really brings down your experience and experience in several lifetimes. There is a sentence that fits the pig's feet, "It's all lived on 🐶". Although it is a fast food article, you can't really have no deep meaning at all, right? Withdrew, I can't stand it anymore.

Has the protagonist changed shit? Is it interesting to write it all according to the plot?

The concept of golden years is really useless. It is simply confusing right and wrong.

Not great, the main character is a loser and the writing is poor.

I don't have any common sense at all and I can't even read it.

I feel very strange, because I always feel that the author's three views are not on the same level as mine. Not much to say, those who have seen the plot in Ode to Joy should be able to understand. The handling can only be described as bland, but I am used to watching protagonists who are angry with the sky and the earth. Let's look at the protagonist's way of praising the characters in the plot. I just think it's weird

This section of the human world is very untravelling. The first is the mentality. Failure to operate in the early stage can be understood as prudent. But in the later stage, I couldn't understand the plot and it was very frustrating. The second is the emotional handling of the Zhou family. It's understandable for a time-traveler to replace filial piety with his parents, but how could you be so full of emotions for the Zhou family when you just time-travelled? The third thing is that the system is wrong and the wrong system was sent. It turns out that the protagonist should customize the film and television system, and the system's mission should be to make up for the protagonist's regrets without departing from the plot.

The writing style of Zhutian can be average, but two points are very important: 1. When you should be ruthless, you should not be soft, and when you should be soft, you should not be like a madman to catch anyone and quarrel with anyone. It can be relaxed and relaxed, so that it can make people feel happy without feeling that the male protagonist is too impersonal. Like the one written by Mario, it is too flat-headed, like a deep well ice, and the most important thing is unreasonable. He beats other people's parents in various ways, and even beat her, and she actually slept with the male protagonist. , It's so baffling 2. Choosing the heroine is the most important thing for Zhutian Film and Television. If you choose the wrong one, the chapter will inevitably lose readers. For example, in Alley Family, the author chose Guan Xiaotong, which is embarrassing to readers. It's not that she is not beautiful, but that she has no sexual attraction, and the polarization is serious. It is better to choose a standard-looking beauty, such as Wu Shanshan or Li Jia, and what is the most important thing about Alley Family? It's the conflict between the banker in the early stage. The author just skipped it. It's like the people in the alley are missing a lot of plot.

Is he a eunuch? 😰😰

It was already uncomfortable and depressing. It's still the same even after traveling through time. You wear a woolen yarn. They have traveled through time and space to make money. College entrance examination. Pack up the people and things you want to pack and go directly to Beijing to study. All unhappy people don't care what they do. Isn't it good to live your own life by yourself? A lot of garbage must be made.

From the initial idea to the time I started writing this novel, I knew there were many flaws. Thank you for your support, this is my motivation to continue writing; I will continue to improve and learn to improve my writing; I also hope that everyone can give me more suggestions!

The writing is dull and tasteless, a classic left and right brain battle.

I don't understand. Didn't the author think about why all kinds of tickets were needed to buy things at that time? That's because there is a shortage of supplies, and even if you have money, you can't buy them! ! ! At that time, when it was announced that meat was available in the store, every household lined up to buy it. It wasn't that they couldn't afford it, it was that they couldn't buy it! ! ! It's not that it's expensive, it's that it's not available! ! ! The author wrote a lot about how rich he is, and then he eats meat every once in a while. Do you think anyone will report it then? ? ? The enthusiasm of the masses in Chaoyang now is incomparable to the enthusiasm of the masses back then! ! ! Whenever something goes too far, the first person to suspect you is not corruption, the first person to suspect you is enemy agents! ! !