Agents

What I'm reading is the original version... Duplicate chapters. This book is ridiculous... The author doesn't care at all.

The level of Hengba is no longer what it used to be, and he can already be called a boss. When I saw the deserter eunuch, I couldn't get over it... He was the only one who jumped out and carried the banner, and he deserves respect from people like us.

Among this type of novels, Unstable Balance and Hengba are the authors I admire.

The concept, plot design, and rhythm of this book so far are all great, reflecting the profound skills of a great author. Another small suggestion is to use less first-person perspective of supporting characters to promote the plot or supplement background explanation, because although the plot is very compact, many of the supporting characters with names in the book are a bit fragmented and the reading experience is not good. It also weakens the protagonist and affects the relationship between primary and secondary. Sometimes I always feel that something is missing from the plot.

The content of the chapters is repeated, but the titles are different. What's the problem?

It's well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

The first one at the starting point

Is it because I didn't top up the money? . Boss chapter repeated twice!

It's the same as reading pirated novels. . . . .

If an agent were like this, I don't know how many times he would have failed!

It seems baffling. Is there any need to write this down?

The writing is good and the rhythm is good, but can you correct the typos? It affects the reading fluency too much!