Honkai Impact, Otto Is My Father

Looking at it so far, I would like to give some suggestions on writing: Basically, the description of the battle scenes can be ignored, and it feels like it will have no impact if you don't read it (it seems that there are no battle scenes). If you really want to write battle scenes, you still have to strengthen this aspect. The division of strength is too vague and confusing, and the description in the part like the man in the mirror is a bit baffling. I hope there is a way to round it out in the future. Many readers actually don't like too much interaction between the protagonist and the system, not to mention that some of the interactions in the book are a bit embarrassing, so they can be reduced appropriately. There is also talk about the Leziren system and the Leziren protagonist. Emm... At least from now on, it doesn't seem to fit Leziren's character design, maybe it hasn't been developed yet. In general, although the writing style still needs a lot of improvement, it is still worth reading because there are relatively few Honkai Impact III fan fiction and Otto's identity as a Kallen experimental subject (this must be rewritten). Come on.

Why is it called Qinluluo Apokalis? Don't you think it's weird? Just like Nicholas Zhao Si.

It's a pity that it's not Otto from Beng Er. I really want to see the Star Destroyer Cannon.

I persisted and finally read a Honkai Impact novel

This name really has no sense of substitution. Any foreign name can be reformed, such as Mikael, Saxophone, Dales, Walter, and Werther. Doesn't the writer's assistant have a function of becoming famous?

Except for a bit of a bad plot at the beginning, the rest is full of incomprehensible characters and plots that I have never seen before. It is a confusing classic. The subject matter is quite interesting. Just watch the beginning.

It's been seven months. It's been seven months. Why hasn't it been updated yet? The author who never stops talking. You cheated on my feelings. Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

There are not many San Bengzi novels left, so you must be cautious and don't tj.