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Wang Po sells melons: What I wrote is pretty good, come and take a look 🐷

Recently, more and more people have read it, and many book friends have left comments. First of all, thank you for taking a look. Then, negative reviews are okay. I know there is something wrong with what I wrote, and many details are not perfect. But don't list three arguments in a negative review, two of which are wrong. I haven't read two chapters of the book, and the review is 500 words. I am favored, and I don't know whether to cry or laugh. Uniform reply: 1. The Golden Heart Sutra in the first chapter - the Nameless Heart Sutra is opened by the protagonist and exploded from a box. Everyone in the team who clears the level will get a box. The Heart Sutra was not given by teammates. 2. The protagonist did not suffer misfortune, nor was he very miserable, because the nanny had no fighting ability, and he chose to breed a pet beast because the golden finger I arranged for him was an experience allocation, and I have a background in beast control. 3. The male protagonist spent eight months with his former teammates. 4. The purpose of management is to transform it into strength, just not the other way around.

Some random character drawings. Picture 1 and 2 sugar scribbles. Figure 3 Koi concept drawing.

Except for the bad taste of male mothers, everything is good.

The atmosphere is a bit gay

Three maps are attached. Picture 1: Distribution map of sects in Qingyun Realm Picture 2: Overlapping map of the two realms Picture 3: Map of Hongchen Realm (not drawn below the state level)

Si Guoyi is so awesome 😍😍😍. Not enough

. . . After reading the introduction, I thought it was a summoning style pet style similar to Pokémon. After reading it, I found out that it opened a breeding house 😅

Hasn't this been updated in a few hours? ! Donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this!

It's hard to live without laughter, family. My classmate He Yue is a girl

Good looking. Come on, author.

Jiuer

Is the author male or female? It doesn't feel right when I read it. I guess the author is female.

I feel that Little A's copy is not as outstanding as before. Is it because I am tired of my taste? Is there any book friends who can discuss it?

Hahaha, they are all quite cute.

This is just before it goes on the shelves. I really want to apologize to Yeshu. After he won the koi, the protagonist even laughed at him and said he was slapped in the face... This paragraph made me angry! He was so miserable because you didn't have experience? Especially the wave-like operation. As soon as I added experience to the kitten, I started to compare the rankings... It's really pure suppression, okay? ! ! Even if everyone adds one round and then compares, it will still be better than your magical operation... I really don't understand the weird operation of giving experience to that kitten but not to Yesu. Currently there are three ways to benefit from the Heart Sutra, first to yourself and then to the koi, this is totally fine. It's okay if the wine comes late and you don't give it first. Then here comes the issue to consider between Yesu and Mao Mao. They came out at about the same time, and Yesu still has fighting power... Upgrading a completely useless (not high level) cat? Can a level 40 cat compete with a level 60 dragon? Back to the front, the hypocritical protagonist, seeing that Yesu has only increased level 11 from level 30 when he was born, will feel guilty and stop laughing at Yesu. To put it bluntly, he is a wolf-hearted man, a male mother? Don't touch porcelain! Fighting depends entirely on Yeshu, and he doesn't give you any experience 🤭

Updates are too slow. That's it as soon as it hits the shelves. How can we retain readers?

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The pace is too fast. I have read 100 chapters and over 60 levels. I feel that the protagonist can write 500 chapters in detail since he first entered the game. I always feel that purple is not as good as dog and gold everywhere. I don't know how to divide the subsequent levels. The two worlds will soon overlap 😭😭 I hope the author will write more. I like it very much.

Come on, I feel like I can write more details, such as equipment, skills, mysterious spirits, and mount skills. It can fill up a lot of words. I really like to read it.

I saw it on the shelves in one go. Generally speaking, I feel that it makes people want to read more. There are all kinds of interesting pets and a clear main line. But the current environment is not suitable for a slow start, and the conflict between Zhou Bin and the protagonist has not yet broken out until it is released. What's even weirder is that in the chapter before it's released, there are actually several pet beasts competing in internal ranking matches. . . Personally, I feel that there is no need to spend several chapters describing this kind of thing. It is purely daily and does not help the advancement of the main line. On the eve of the release, readers prefer to see the climax of the main storyline, so as to stimulate the desire to order the first time it is released (personal opinion) The other thing I want to say is the skill introduction, of course it is just my personal opinion (stacked A). There could be more foreshadowing in the introduction of skills, such as using seemingly ordinary skills to achieve unexpected and reasonable effects at the most critical moment. This makes the skill introduction less confusing. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch anymore

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I'm from next door. Put it on the bookshelf and read it later.

I've almost read it and say something First, the rules of the third generation have many loopholes related to the main plot. I don't know if they will be changed later You can give things to apprentices, but isn't your apprenticeship ceremony too generous? You didn't take the test, you don't know anything, and you didn't do anything, so you just showed off your core skills that you created? And Yezhu, my Yezhu, you are so cruel. Is it the mount that is fighting, is it breaking its promise, or is it? It's okay to give experience to yourself and the first place. But Yezhu later beat the first place again and died again. The person who was hit by resistance to injury was not his, and he was beaten by the junior who just came and robbed the experience.

When I saw the name, I thought I was a nanny! After reading the introduction, isn't this a profession like Summoner?