Tomb Robber: I, the Leader of the Archaeological Team, Start with the Immortal Killing Sword

First

Seeing now, it's starting to collapse! In the first era, a group of tomb robbers dared to stab the troops. You probably don't know what a punch is, right? The second one million bronze temples are constantly moving and changing. Do you know what this concept is? That is no longer the end of the law, I am afraid it is still in the world of immortality, and it is not ordinary. Even the Gate of Immortality Xuanmu is not as awesome as your Bronze Palace. In addition to the lower combat power, the first tomb you wrote is so awesome. And you mentioned the climax, but the problem is that there is no climax in this article, so it ends in an anticlimactic manner?

Looking at the beginning, there are a few questions that I hope the author can answer. 1. As a plug-in, is it too much to put a Zhuxian sword at the beginning (depending on the setting of the Zhuxian sword)? Let's not talk about whether the protagonist can be tamed. Let's talk about an ordinary person. What can you tell me to drive it? Blood sacrifice? 2. Are there any problems with the identity of the protagonist? Let alone a regiment leader. In that era, archeology did not require the cooperation of the troops only when the central government issued orders? Otherwise, have you considered the responsibility of mobilizing the army privately? 3. Explain next week how Wenxiu and his research team went to Kunlun when they were not in Xisha. Xisha was their first operation, and then they were investigating the activities of Snake Valley and the training center where the video was shot. 4. Now that all the above is established, you are talking about how you, a regiment commander, have the courage to disobey military orders. This is still a problem with the first two chapters. I couldn't read the rest of it at all. The plot was confusing and the character dialogue had no logic. No, you should think carefully about the order. Then let's talk about the cheats that the author opens for the protagonist. I still say that, familiarity with the plot (the plot here does not refer to the occurrence of events, but the familiarity with various settings in the original plot including but not limited to various creatures, ancient tomb mechanisms, etc.) Is already the protagonist's biggest cheat. What's more, as a soldier, his physical condition and proficient control of professional skills can already deal with most events. Any more cheats will cause disharmony in the plot. Just give two chestnuts. The first plot is the nine-story demon tower in Kunlun Mountain. This plot originally only existed in Hu Bayi's memory, so you can just follow the original plot and just go with those few people. As a substitute for one of them, you can use the army's response knowledge to cover up and remind them in many places. Then after several crises occur, discuss with the leader of the inspection team (here you can use more intense words) whether to retreat. This is considered to be a change of the plot. If you don't want too much plot confusion in the future, you can let the inspection team's decision-making go wrong, protect a few people and give up as much as possible (this is because no one returned alive after this inspection except Hu Bayi, and Hu Bayi's comrades basically did not come back alive, which is also one of the reasons why Hu Bayi retired from the army). This successfully avoided the large-scale collapse of the subsequent plot. Second, if you want to add the content of the notes, then write this to the back. For example, the author set Wu Laoer and the protagonist to serve in the same place, so he took advantage of this incident to retreat to the second line with Hu Bayi. Then Wu Laoer came to see him off again and invited him to be a guest at the Wu family in Hangzhou when he was free. You see, this is a very logical connection, and then use the fast-forward method to speed up and go directly to the part where Hu Bayi goes to find Wang Kaixuan. Plot, and then the protagonist also goes to the station to pick up Hu Bayi. Through the dialogue between the three people, he briefly introduces what the protagonist has been doing in the past few years. Then he can rewind the tapes with Old Hu, Wang Fatty and the others, do something on his own in Panjiayuan, or simply arrange a position for the protagonist at the Central Bureau of Cultural Relics and Archeology. Then, he can skip the plot of Ganggang Yingzi and directly join the team of the Queen of Jingguo. See if it goes smoothly. Then I came back and found that I also had the ghost eye curse. I don't need to tell you the rest. In addition, in the meantime, you can get to know Wu Lao San through Wu Lao Er, and then explore some of the plot after their return from Xisha. Then, you can kill the ghost first and then pick up the notes. After interspersing the weird things about Makino (supposedly involving the son of Hu Bayi and Fatty Wang) in the notes, it will take almost ten million words to complete.

I haven't watched it yet, but is Zhu Xian a bit over the top at the beginning? Which monster can be the enemy of Zhu Xian Yihe!

Seeing the latest update, I feel more and more wet. The ability currently shown by the protagonist can obviously solve the problem easily, but it doesn't. On the bloodline issue, suppression does not require bleeding. It depends on the strength of the bloodline (it is said in the original book) - Immortality comes with a price. "It". Everyone who knows it knows it, and those who don't know it don't know it. I won't say much about other things since some book friends have said it.

My first book on investment success, I'll take this as a souvenir

I don't know why, those who write about tomb robbing and time travel have to write so early in the story, they always travel before the plot begins. I looked lonely

I am writing two chapters and become a superman 😅

That book by a certain donkey is too embarrassing. Let's read it first and then evaluate it.

May I ask the author what the character and character of the protagonist are like?

There is the ancient sword of Zhu Xian but there is no cultivation technique? I really don't know what the author was thinking

The writing is very interesting, but the plot is a bit delayed. It is too slow, but the author's writing style is good and I seem to have the desire to read on.

Interesting writing. You are a member of this organization, right?

Are there people from the polling bureau here?