Book Knife

The writing style has improved, and the beginning is stronger than the previous one, but to be honest, the plot of the second volume is obviously on the right track, and it has achieved some results. It is a pity to cut it off like this. To be honest, if you don't make sure you have the manuscript saved, I would not dare to pursue it, and there is a shadow.

Have a strong character 👍

Personally, I feel that this is the best paragraph I have written so far, bar none!

Lu Ya, go and catch up on modern knowledge. If you really get together with Sister Qin in the future, you will be bullied to death 😅

From the introduction of Dangmojianwan, we can see that Lin Xinfeng is definitely not simple. It is very likely that he is no longer weak to Lu Ya at this time. There are two points in cooperating with Lu Ya. The first is the literal purpose, which is to kill Lin Xiang with Lu Ya's hand. He can take over. I guess after Lu Ya When Yai returned to the Ancient Territory, his identity and strength were slightly better than Lu Ya's, but his status was hard to say. After all, Lu Ya's influence in the hearts of the people was there, and his relationship with the Queen was unusual. It is estimated that after Lu Ya returned to the Ancient Territory, his strongest opponent among his peers might also be one of his own.

Let's be honest, have you not saved your manuscript? 😏

It seems that the sequelae are quite serious 🙂

After waiting for a month, I got the knife and learned how to play with it 🔪

And how good would it be to put this latest plot at the beginning? Now it's interesting, but I didn't retain the readers earlier, so why not just write it for us old people?

Now it's getting exciting. The foreshadowing was too long, which is a failure... Okay, the foreshadowing is less than 200,000 words, but the update speed is really tearful.

I was surprised when I started reading the book just after get off work. I haven't read it for a week. Sometimes there is not even a chapter in almost a month. Sometimes there are only two or three chapters in a day without paying attention. Tell me, what are you doing?