Fantasy: Load the Huangtian Emperor Template at the Beginning

I'm tired of seeing handsome guys. I don't care about being handsome. I keep saying that there's nothing more masculine about me. At the beginning, the will to survive was so strong, but in the end, it hurt so much that I wanted to wake up, couldn't understand, and left.

The protagonist doesn't know the plot of Perfect, and there are a lot of perfect content throughout the story. He doesn't know the plot and often plays through levels repeatedly. It's very different from what he expected, and he doesn't know whether he's watching Perfect or watching a game. Goldfinger is really frustrating, it's like watching Perfection all over again. The protagonist doesn't know anything and has to try and make mistakes. It's like one book within another.

Just based on the second half of the introduction, if you don't fight, who will?

The protagonist is too soft and is always being led by his uncle. He smiles bitterly and smiles again. It's a classic street-fighting plot.

? Write less perfect things. Isn't your main goal to play NPC time traveler games with wild templates? What kind of perfect fandom are you talking to me about here? There is also Da Luo Jian Fei. Putting aside whether he can pick it up or not, how about you let him feed you back? What level is the protagonist now? What about the ability of the Third Generation Bronze Coffin? Why didn't you see the future?

If you just remove the elements of the perfect world, the book will be much better. No one really wants to read it again, so let's forget it. Although I won't continue watching it, the less perfect the plot is, the higher the reading will be. That's for sure.

Your book was written like this in the early stage, where did the later stage come from? Are you just entertaining yourself?

The protagonist has never seen Perfect, and he doesn't know Shi Hao, so who has more control and authority in the dream? Can the leading role of the protagonist become a waste?

The repeated jumps between the two worlds are not good to watch. I am thinking of your novel, which is about the perfect world. It looks like reading two novels, which feels a bit watered down.

How about copying the perfect world? What should I write?

Since it is Shi Hao's template, isn't Shi Hao capable of defeating all kinds of magic? What kind of swords are there? If you want to play with swords, wouldn't you make a sword fairy template? It's not that the protagonist doesn't have a sword, but it's so long that it looks awkward.

You're so handsome, why do you say it so many times?

Classic within a classic, the Renaissance of the Stone Age

School belle. The master of being a close friend of a school girl turned me into a funny person →_→ Now that I see this kind of book, I don't want to read it It's not a provocation. I simply don't like stories about good-looking school girls in real life.

In A Batch of Water, the protagonist is not only dreaming, but also dreaming, and the protagonist is living in a dream.

It's hard to describe in one word! At first I thought the title of the book had a high opening and a high writing, but it turned out that it was a low opening or a low writing. The writing was awkward and nondescript. Half of the nearly 40 chapters were about the dream. There were not enough words, so I had to use the dream to make up the title.

Let's complain! The more I read, the less I feel. The plot and characters in the opening chapter are quite attractive. Only after reading the comment section did I realize that someone taught you how to write novels😂. You have to know that novels cannot be liked by everyone. When readers screen you, you are also screening readers. Yes, you have more perfect plots, but how many readers like me came in because of Emperor Huangtian's click? There are so few perfect fanfics with Huang as the main character that I haven't found them yet. You have to control the proportion of the plot yourself, rather than relying on others to teach you. The first part is basically a perfect dream, and the dream system in the second part is deleted. Half of the gimmick in your book is this dream system! The Emperor of Desolate Heaven from another world. Actually, the main reason is that your game is too bland. Huang can at least be considered a tool by you, while the others are not even tool people at all, and their sense of existence is too low. I don't know if you saw the previous complaint. Who has more control in the dream? If the protagonist does not have perfect memory, can he become a wild man?

Brothers, don't keep books! ! ! During the new book period, catch up on this book's recommendations! Everyone is going to die if he feeds himself! ! ! Read more! The author will release more updates soon! ! ! 😓

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