Zhenguan Little Prince Consort

Anyway, it seems childish from the beginning, without any scheming, which is not to say that the scheming is not good. People in ancient times were smarter than you. It's not just you who are smart. You may have traveled through time in later generations. Don't treat others as fools. Anyone who could be an official in ancient times was not stupid, let alone a high-ranking official. Not to mention the emperor, that's all! I don't mean anything else, I hope the more I write, the better!

Li Lizhi: It's so difficult for me. How many husbands do we have? My cousin and I are truly in love!

When I first read your book, I found it fascinating. When I read it to the end, I saw the protagonist in your work, and the girl surnamed Li, who looked like a dog looking at feces, and couldn't help herself. When I saw the title of your book, I knew that you were a licker, and I overestimated your character, so I abandoned the book and left a message to inspire future generations.

The plot arrangement is too bloody and blunt.

The author writes a novel written by a novice. Although it is a bit renaissance, it is still readable. I just love science popularization so much that one chapter is just one chapter. The reader came to see the plot, but ended up feeding a mouthful of Baidu Encyclopedia

To be honest, the writing is not very good. There is also a logical problem. The male protagonist's father is a military citizen, so he should become a civilian if he remains anonymous. Since he has military status, the court must know where he will settle down. Moreover, if you don't have your place of origin, how can you settle down?

I have seen 76 pictures. I think what you wrote about Lu Tianyang wanting to kill Zhang Cheng and then dying willingly is unreasonable because Lu Tianyang didn't know that his Lu family was wiped out and it was related to the Zhang family. Only Zhao Qiang knew about this. , So it's unreasonable for you to involve Zhang Cheng, because as long as Zhao Qiang doesn't tell, no one will know. Even if the Zhang family is involved because of the Niu incident, Zhang Ping should be killed, not Zhang Cheng. You are forcing the protagonist to be involved.

Great write up! Stop writing

This is nonsense. Even if the general of the Xuanjia Army retreats, he will be granted a title. How can you say that a count cannot run away? Everyone knows that the title of wife Yinzi is granted. If Li Shimin would tolerate such political mistakes, then he is not a qualified emperor.

The butler's son was groomed, and then sought revenge from the protagonist, and then was forgiven, and then the protagonist knelt down and licked the emperor in gratitude.

Being a consort in the Tang Dynasty would make you a cuckold.

The protagonist is a prince-in-law, how come he is buried in a cave after death😒

Test the old party! The names of medicinal materials should be different from what they are now!

After watching the first part, it is a bit similar to Tang Bian. The protagonist is both serious and upright, and then the plot of the old lady's foot bindings is smelly and long.

The writing style is stiff, with "although... But" and "why... You need to know" throughout the whole article. The content tends to contain private information, and it often refers to popular science, and it does not integrate with the plot, so it is very stiff.

The only good thing about this book is that the author has such a good attitude that he almost hates it. It is recommended to read more basically written by others, learn about plot design, and hope to become a god in the future.

It's really easy to write and not mindless. Come on, no eunuchs

If you haven't read it yet, I'll ask if you have partnered with others to sell wine, and if you have, I won't read it!

He is too young every day, and he has not even had a bit of wealth in his two lifetimes!

One thing to say is that the writing is a bit poor, the plot twists are a bit blunt and childish, and I don't know how to describe the inner activities.

The plot seems familiar. I've seen this opening before, but I still have to create my own, 😅

Li Shimin's first battle in Luoyang was in 620, and the seventh year of Zhenguan was in 633. According to the subsequent plot, Zhang Ping became the savior and became a guard. It can be deduced that he met Su Niang at about this time, so the male protagonist was at most 13 years old in the Tang Dynasty. However, the male protagonist in the suit was already over 20 years old. The author did not explain it. Is this a bug?

I couldn't help but read a few chapters and chat awkwardly. Slipping away

Can cattle be bought and sold at will?

Nowadays, novices are no longer good. If you want to write well, you still need to read more on Baidu. Some ancient common sense still needs to be written well. If you are not rigorous, you will be scolded. Nowadays, readers' tastes are becoming more and more cunning.

I haven't finished the first chapter yet so I decided to make a decision ×

That's nonsense. If you look up history or ancient novels, this kind of thing has almost never happened. The second and third generations are very smart and know who dares to bully and who can't. The way you write it, it's just that you won't stop until death. The Zhang family was already a new member of the Tang Dynasty. From the relationship between Li You and the servants, we can know that they went to arrest Zhang Hao, beat him severely, and even killed his wife. He was speechless. The powerful would not do this. They were not fools and would only bully the poor. Du Zhenguan has been here for several years, and there are still dozens of crimes committed by these four people in the imperial city. They dare not arrest them. This is ridiculous.

There are too many of these princesses' consorts. We should write about something a little different, such as becoming the consort of Princess Gaoyang...