Otherworldly Immortal: I Can Transfer the Cost

It feels a bit overwhelming. It's boring to hang up and have to level up again. There are also monsters and ghosts in the article. If you don't improve your strength quickly, why bother with a flash bomb in this leveling up?

I am a person who always means what I say. So you can supervise me. If I fail to do it at a certain time, I will be abducted by aliens or taken away by demons.

Didn't read it, only read a few comments. Tell me two points of my opinion. If you don't accept it, you can delete the post. 1. Regarding cheats, once the rules are set, don't change them. Don't have the idea of ​​constantly adding rules to weaken cheats, especially the inferior ones! The rules of the cheat are constant. Through the use of the cheat, the protagonist continues to understand deeply and even gets stuck in the bug of the cheat. This shows that the protagonist has a high IQ and is not controlled by the author's will at any time. Try to use golden fingers to grow and don't add additional adventures! Getting a legacy by knocking off a cliff or saving a Taoist companion from a coma are considered poisonous points. 2. Regarding the protagonist's upgrade speed, the protagonist's level must match the development of the situation. For example, the protagonist upgrades to an express and becomes an immortal in three days. However, on the fourth day, Heaven will liquidate the world. This is also a mismatch and an injustice. Don't level up first and then the protagonist will inevitably encounter an invincible enemy (a situation that cannot be controlled), and then you can only temporarily trick the protagonist (to reduce the wisdom of the supporting characters) to get through the difficulties. Such "ups and downs" will not make the story exciting, but will only make the protagonist stupid and controlled by the author at any time. Especially inferior! If you want to level up slowly, write the timeline of the plot in a more detailed way, such as describing the story in units of days; if the writing is not good enough, you can also increase the difficulty for the protagonist to obtain the skills. If you want to upgrade quickly, extend the time span to a few months or a few years.

This picture expresses the bitterness of the young author. Although, I am not a light novelist, haha... But Xianxia is not popular at all. So, I laughed and cried.

Frankly speaking, I don't know why this book is so cold. I wrote it very carefully. The plot is not poisonous or bloody, and the characters are not intellectually depressing. I also keep updating, and I update it regularly every day. It's a pity that the results are not good. Maybe this is the fate of new authors. No matter what, I will write it carefully. Thank you for reading silently. Write more comments when you have time to make the comment area more lively.

This story, although there is a system, is for signing. The author knows it all. New authors like us have difficulty signing contracts with traditional writing. But actually I really want to write a fairy tale with love and justice. Xia is the subject and fairy is the attributive. Because of chivalry, one can soar in the daytime. To be honest, is it more interesting than the previous story?

Haha, Chen Jun is too miserable. Inexplicably, he lost his lifeblood.

The original version was quite good, but it's a pity it's gone.

Can you understand what you wrote?

Everything else is good, but in Chapter 18, I wrote a female supporting role for Ryuatori, and the protagonist immediately became a dog.