Sea Island Owner

The first three chapters make people have no desire to read anymore. No wonder there are no comments.

Author, you must understand when writing a book that the creation of the protagonist is very important. First of all, he must be a complete and independent individual, not a friend's father. Your golden finger did not appear in the first few chapters, but you spent 70,000 to buy a broken boat when you didn't have much money? Is that friend your son? If you don't change this, you're destined to hit the street!

I don't quite understand why the character of my friend's wife was portrayed in the early stages. It was simply a way to screen readers.

It's too poisonous. I have to bind such a disgusting woman. A tricycle costs several thousand yuan, so I chose hers and returned it.

After reading the first few chapters, I saw my friend's wife and I had no desire to continue reading.

It's chapter 39, md. I can't stand it anymore. I go to save my life for a person who is neither a relative nor a savior. I can't stand it when I have a friend's wife. I'm so tolerant that I suspect that the friend is the protagonist's father. Poison

Don't look at anything. This person's wife is not yours.

After slipping away, my friend's wife looked awkward.

This book won't be popular because the author is too wordy.

If you don't change the first few pictures, well, it will be hard to say what happens next! !

The author later explains her family situation. I can feel that the author is making progress. Overall, I can read it. After all, there are few novels on this subject.

The idea is good, but the writing is terrible

Speed ​​point update, vote for you monthly

Always catch fish from the mysterious island and sell it! Not interesting

Don't listen to those people, the author actually writes quite well.