The Phantom Wall Collapses

The writing is very good, just what Cthulhu enthusiasts want to see. Because the level of understanding is different, it can only be said that laymen watch the excitement, and insiders watch the door. It is difficult to avoid the aesthetic fatigue caused by the stacking of elements and long narratives in works written by Cthulhu enthusiasts. However, this work really makes people feel that it is not as simple as a cover-up. If possible, I hope more people can read it. It is a very promising novel, and I give the author a big thumbs up! After all, it's not easy to make up your mind to write a more orthodox Cthulhu novel! Real!

Very on point Kevin, very good

Awesome, there are few authors who can ensure the Cthulhu atmosphere while taking into account the down-to-earth language. It is easy to pile up adjectives and translation accents. Come and learn.

How to put it, the description of the writing style of Notes on Tomb Raiders, the relationship between the characters in Dream of Red Mansions, and the vernacular thoughts on human life and values are output. However, the setting and world view are not expressed independently but are closely bombarded with props and characters. It is mixed with Cthulhu elements - the stream of consciousness Cthulhu flavor. The deep love for craftsmanship is the setting and the author's social relationship and personality, which also supplements Cthulhu elements. The setting of Sulu and the writing style can be used to create the setting of "not writing about love, not wanting to get married, and not being prudent". It focuses on magical boys, psychic power, and consciousness shaping. It also introduces a few characters that everyone is more concerned about to form a "white and cool, elite education, dynamic style of running in a group, tempering thoughts, and arousing resonance", which is an important recognition and emotional exchange at the value level. Of course, the market masses should also consider catering to better

I haven't even signed a contract yet, so I'm afraid I'm the only one leaving all this bells and whistles. 😜😜 I really can't help it, drawing makes me happy. (But if drawing becomes a task, this proposition will be questioned.) 2022.12.14 The big head of Lin Bai's character that I just drew (how do I still have time to paint thickly? I have no choice but to paint thickly) 20 23.01.04 Chapter 1 "Dream Witch" design sketch (extremely sloppy) (Originally I wanted to design a cover, but the monster image in Chapter 1 was completed with a painting) Authentic Han Chinese tops and bottoms (some Ming Dynasty costumes were still retained during the Kangxi and Yongzheng periods). The top is a long garment with a collar and a right hem, and the lower part is a horse-faced skirt. In order to highlight the figure, these clothes are tattered and torn. There are patterns on the clothes, but I didn't draw them. Because the head design is already very complex, there is no need for the headgear to overshadow the look. Those tiny circles are just maggots, you can figure it out for yourself. I don't know when I will be able to finish painting her. Fortunately, this is a typical humanoid monster, not something completely indescribable (such as the amorphous existence that Lin Bai can see later. In the setting picture above, I can only use colorful lights to express it), and it is a little easier to draw. The picture below is the floor plan sketch of Lin Bai's small shabby house (I don't remember the date it was drawn)

I'm from Jihe. Is this work already somewhat famous? Anyway, come on brother, don't stop. I 100% invest in a small amount first. 🙂I have watched all the short films distributed in the audit, they are very good.

Why can't I vote for a monthly vote? If I want to vote for a book I like, it won't work. I have to "sign a contract" with the author? 😥

Happy New Year 😁

22.12.02 The current introduction style is too old, so it is being modified. As a result, I accidentally wasted an opportunity to make changes yesterday, and I have to wait until seven days before making changes. Modified content: (Introduction) Lin Bai had a dream. A demon that looked like it came out of the horror of the last century said curse words to him, making him fall into confusion. But the problem doesn't stop there, H. P. Lovecraft's strange fantasy has come true! Folklore, supernatural powers, lurking fears, distorted information, concealed truths, etc. Have unknowingly built a solid wall of fantasy! The thick wall capsized. Chaos accumulated for thousands of years spewed out and appeared naked before Lin Bai's eyes. However, life still has to go on, and it will not slow down and wait for him to completely figure it out. Although he is as fragile as grass, he is still constantly adjusting his mentality, constantly exploring, and constantly attacking. In the face of chaos, he fought and failed again and again! 22.12.08 The introduction of the new version has been reviewed and approved. The following part is the introduction of the old version: He is a fanatical fan of the Ke series, but he never thought that something bad would happen. With the illusory wall overturned and the mirror image torn apart, he will face each other directly, leading to the ultimate carnival of fans! At the same time, he is just an ordinary person, mediocre for more than 20 years. Terror roars away, but life goes on. But who knew that heaven would entrust this man with a great responsibility, so he was so determined. The generous gift he will receive will never disappoint him! 22.12.12 The introduction of the first volume has been modified today. The modifications are as follows: On the boundless black sea, there is a small island called "Ignorance". The islanders were destined to set sail, ignoring the warnings of their ancestors. Because—— Ignorance leads to blindness, and ignorance leads to death. Original version: On the boundless black sea, there is a small island called "Ignorance". The islanders were destined to set sail, ignoring the warnings of their ancestors. They unfortunately encountered a siren in the distant sea. It comes with the other side's story, and says that there is a "ghost" among them... The revised part of the plan is placed in the introduction of the second volume. 22.12.29 Since the subtitle has no actual role in attracting traffic, it will be deleted directly. Accordingly, the introduction has also been slightly adjusted. Modified content: (above omitted) However, life still has to go on, and it will not slow down and wait for him to completely figure it out. Although he is as fragile as grass, he is still constantly adjusting his mentality, constantly exploring, and constantly moving forward. Faced with all this, he understood the truth that transcends lies "... Even death will die!" Remarks: There is a famous haiku in Luo Lao's article That is not dead which can eternal lie, and in strange eons even death may die. (It is not the dead who sleep eternally. Even death itself may disappear in the mysterious eternity.) In order to fit the purpose and setting of this article, I changed may to will.

Come on, I hope the descriptions of monsters and phenomena will not be too specific. The scariest things have to be imagined. It would be best to give some subtle guidance.

Come from Keba, support it with one recommendation vote every day.

I saw a recommendation for this book from Nixie this morning, so I looked up the name and read it. I don't know if it's incompetent or not. The readers will have to read the article to find out. So far, the writing seems to be okay. The writing style is a bit immature and there is a lot of room for improvement. The part about the monster in the dream was too dramatic. When I saw "Cuck, Cuck, Cock", I was wondering which rooster was crowing here and there, but I couldn't see the quality of the scream at all. As an atheist, I just felt embarrassed about the curse part, while a theist friend of mine said, "It doesn't look like a blasphemous thing, but like a chuunibyou who died unjustly." There is almost no psychological description of the male protagonist, no rendering of the surrounding environment, and almost no profiling of all the characters.

Little author, please get up and update quickly. I've already caught up with you.

Although I haven't signed a contract yet, my results are very good, come on!

Writing is a path that requires persistence, come on!

Didn't the author apply for a contract? Why haven't you signed a contract yet?

This recommendation vote is simply outrageous. Is there any solution?

Come on

I found that I was very tired and couldn't hold on anymore. There are more than ten chapters left. Should I send them all at once, or slowly extend them to the 26th? I planned to start writing an article today, but I found out why what I wrote was like the last chapter of a eunuch article. Due to practical reasons, I set a time limit of three months for myself when I started the book. Now, three and a half months have passed. The exam is coming soon. It was when I was in school that I was tricked by the teaching aid agency and spent a lot of money to take the self-study exam. On the eve of graduation last year, I ruined my future because of a moment of slackness. Who would have thought that this self-study examination would become my only way to obtain a bachelor's degree. I am a person who is easily influenced by the outside world. Although I despised online articles before, I was not willing to take this path. It's just that I made an impulsive decision because of some dreams, some articles, and some information on the Internet. I have a bunch of unsystematic and fragmented fantasy stories in my heart, just like everyone else. I want to sort them out, string them together, and do something with them, or possibly make money from them. It turns out that this is just my wishful thinking. Because my energy is limited and I am too fly. But he is extremely stubborn and unwilling to lower his face to write novels that truly meet the market. Of course I have tried internal submission. There is actually no suspense at the beginning of this article. I rejected it directly without any trouble. I decisively rewrote the beginning and was able to get other suggestions from the editor. However, after receiving a reply to my last submission, I asked the editor a question in somewhat impatient terms, and the other party blocked me. After this incident, I thought about finding a job in the community where I could lay down my job, but because my written test score was too low (I didn't prepare well) and my interview score couldn't be improved, it was over. A week later, on December 1st, I found that I still couldn't let go of the story in my heart. And because the author of "Craft's Notes on Anomalies" replied to me on the post forum, I impulsively published the article. Although I know that this article is destined to not be in line with the market, I still want to give it a try. Maybe which editor will take a fancy to my follow-up plot is unknown. But it turns out that my level is just that. How can I win the love of editors, nay, readers, when I can't even express myself clearly in a complete sentence? At the beginning of this article, I was thinking that maybe I could use this to prove that the pure Ke system can be integrated with online articles. But in fact, I don't need to worry about this at all. People who are more capable and knowledgeable than me have already done this. I have just been indulging in my own small world for too long, and I am ignorant of many things in the outside world. I am a sociopath. I don't often negotiate with others, and I often stay at home. How can I describe real and delicate relationships between people? This led to the overly dry description of the protagonist's interactions with others in my article. Now I am very exhausted. Not only is it the pressure of multitasking, but it is also something where efforts are unrewarding or even counterproductive. Work hard on writing, and then get scolded. Actually, this is nothing, but I am a good face person. In order to push myself, I boasted in Haikou and said that I would not give up and keep writing until it was completed. But does it have to be posted on this platform? I write part of it a day, and I don't always follow the outline when I write. From time to time, new ideas emerge, or loopholes in the previous text are discovered. I write very slowly, only writing one chapter every day (no writing on Saturdays, two chapters on Sundays), which is completely inferior to other normal online writers. I thought I could write less in a day so that I could write more refinedly, but in fact there were still a lot of problems. Maybe I should slow down and change the format, instead of letting everyone shake their heads looking at these sparse semi-finished products. I am so proud of myself. So even if I have to look down and say that I don't want to do it anymore, it's very painful. Whether you write or not write, you are torturing yourself. The story I cherish is really not that important. It has bothered me for too long. I'm just so sorry to my friend who has been helping me promote my book and even spent money to send red envelopes for my book. But I really can't write anymore, I'm very tired, I'm very tired. Since writing this article, my mentality has changed tremendously. Although I said that I didn't want to be too utilitarian and I didn't want to look too closely at the numbers, I was still confused by those numbers. I can't write anymore, I really can't write anymore. I already wrote down some important settings yesterday, and I have completed part of the task. Although there are still many stories left to tell, I am tired. I still remember that years ago someone said that I had a very bad attitude and my writing was bad enough. Yes, he's right, I really can't. He also said how could I have the shame to be boastful and arrogant, but it left me confused and hesitant for too long. Because I know that I am a useless person with no future, and I never dare to say how good I am. I just have too much obsession and too much desire in my heart. At that time, my emotion of wanting to accomplish something reached its peak. I want to make money through this (it's very contradictory, isn't it? I really want to make money, so I should follow the laws of the market and write such a story) Maybe it's because I have already written down the important plot, and because an important exam is coming, I want to end it temporarily. I am so proud of myself, but now I have to break my promise. You have a bad mentality, a very bad attitude, and your abilities are not good enough. You still want to be recognized by others? It's simply a fool's dream! How can a person who cannot even formulate a sentence correctly write an excellent article. How can a man express what he does not have? Some people say that I don't have much san value left. Well, indeed. Why should I continue to torture myself, give up on the right choice, continue to struggle on this dark and lightless road, integrate into a circle that I cannot integrate into, and do impossible things. This is equivalent to Zisha, not to mention, I have no interest in online articles. Why be so persistent. I wrote an article in the post before, but accidentally touched it and lost it, so I had to rewrite it. The emotions are not as smooth and full as the last time, and the sincerity is not as good as before. I am tired, tired, tired, tired... Compared to the kind of author who earns tens of thousands of dollars a day, and the boss who does many things at the same time, I am nothing, I am really flying. I only wrote 2,000 words in one day and I was barking like a dog. I was really flying. Now I just want to endorse quietly, instead of being influenced by the outside world and draining my energy by illusory things. After all, I have to give in to reality, alas. In the future, whether I can finish this story in other forms... I don't know. I don't have that ability, and there are even too many conflicts and contradictions around me. Different values ​​are placed in front of me, influencing my thoughts and influencing my behavior. Maybe after I quit, my heart will still be affected by it. Nothing has changed, I am still the same... With an explosive mentality.

I will go online from time to time to gain weight and watch it together)