The Crazy Girl Doesn't Want to Go to Jail

Generally speaking, there are no major problems, but the author's writing skills are too weak and the writing is not in place, resulting in the supporting characters not being able to stand up, and everything except being funny is awkward. It's child's play to reform people, and the description of the fighting scenes is unclear and lacks expressiveness. If you like the setting, you can watch it, but if you don't, you will definitely not be able to watch it.

Well, how should I put it? Although this is a story about a male protagonist with a female protagonist, the logic of the content is that of a male protagonist's pleasure story. It was fine in the beginning, but after getting to the college chapter, I started to feel that the male protagonist's pleasure story was too violent. This is actually very embarrassing. The female protagonist's story is written with the logic of the male protagonist's story, which gives people a more fragmented feeling. There is also a shortcoming. There are a lot of elements that are too many for outsiders to feel deeply. Insiders say that their brains are constantly playing tricks on each other.

I don't know if you have read "The Peerless Sword Princess" This book has a female protagonist. In the early stage, there is a female character and the female protagonist Lily, and there is a male villain Long Aotian In the middle period, the female protagonist met a pair of Lily, and then one of Lily was... A man was drugged while the heroine was watching a live erotica In the middle and later stages, the heroine was raped by Long Aotian in the early stage and fell in love with Long Aotian. The one with the heroine Lily in the early stage was still waiting for the heroine In the later stage, she and the heroine Lily's character has no role anymore, and they are all writing about how the heroine fell in love with Long Aotian I can only say that I already have PTSD After reading this book, the heroine is careless in front of men, and the women around her are being raped one by one. The man picks up the girl (starting from scratch, the heroine is picked up by the man when they know each other) (the heroine even knows that the man picks up the girl with bad intentions) But the heroine doesn't care, they are free I can only say that the author is also free

The Kaslana family adds another member, conquering cities and lands in all the worlds

That's right, I won't pretend anymore, the prototype is Irena, I didn't even bother to change her name.

1. What I wrote was okay at the beginning, but the further I went on, the worse it became. The three chapters 2, 55, 56, and 57 are poisonous. The captain and the others tricked him into becoming a blood slave, yet he smiled and was fine, without any inner description at all, acting like a fool. In Chapter 57, I met the original person, and then the protagonist began to say that he was a selfish person and was decisive in killing. Please forgive me for being so inconsistent. 3. The system is too powerful. The logic of the system should be equivalent exchange. You will get something if you pay. You will get a white ball if you influence others, and you will get a higher-level ball if you kill a monster. As a result, when he became a blood slave, the system helped the protagonist fuse for free, and the protagonist paid no price at all. It's too relaxing. There should be some plot here, a lot of suffering, doing tasks or killing monsters to get system rewards, so as to limit the influence of blood slaves.

I'll come first and take a look

The form of the future red archbishop~

What the hell, at first I thought it was a story about a cult leader traveling around various regions, meeting all kinds of special people, and then relying on his eloquence to win over people, becoming a hero, and then gradually becoming stronger and revealing the secrets of the world. When I opened it, I was very disappointed (I'm not saying that the plot written by the author is not good, you can write the story however you like, I mean it's not to my taste)

I think the poisonous points of the first few chapters of this book are as follows (don't ask why you didn't read the first few chapters) First, she was not pretty at the beginning, and she relied on the system to improve her appearance (I don't need to say more about Irena's appearance, right? You slowly improved it at the beginning, which makes me embarrassed) Secondly, Pulitzer did a lot of things in prison (although he was unsuccessful, the whole story was disgusting enough for me) Thirdly, what the warden did (I don't know why, I just find his behavior disgusting)       Unreasonable plot and logic Logic aspect From the beginning, when the protagonist was not in prison, I thought it was similar to the medieval era. The whipping of the prisoner later confirmed the conjecture. The problem is that shotguns and batons appeared later, which made me doubt the world. If it was the medieval era, there should not be shotguns and batons. Shotguns only appeared in modern times (if you say they are similar to muskets, pretend I didn't say that), batons are more It was only used in World War II (if you say it is similar to a baton, pretend I didn't say it). Of course, if you say your world is like this and the technology tree is so crooked, just pretend I didn't say it        In terms of plot As a missionary, I don't have any power given by gods (not counting the power given by the system), which I can't understand. From what the protagonist said at the beginning, it feels like being a missionary is more like... A job? He was also imprisoned for tampering with other people's beliefs, which is a bit outrageous. Whether he has faith or not is his relationship, not the protagonist. If he can really tamper with it, how is it different from a cult? But at first glance, it was not a cult (of course, if this was because the nobles had the ability to overpower the sky at that time and were arrested and imprisoned, pretend I didn't say it). After entering the prison, he was not very good-looking, so why was he being targeted? (If you insist that he likes this, just pretend I didn't say it)             The rest Why does the introduction look like a male video, but your content is written like a female video (in my understanding, most of the daily articles in the article are called female videos) That's all, I can tell you what I said wrong, let me see what I said wrong, so I can learn from it and improve it (the content in brackets is supplementary)

After Lorraine Hill, I have more daughters. Please update the author.

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When I was shopping for clothes, I stripped down to my underwear and measured a man's measurements. He was so open-minded and I dare not compliment him.

The characters and plot are obviously good, but it's always a bit awkward to read. Many places were not handled well. For example, there is a plot in Lord of Mysteries. Zhou Mingrui said to Klein. "Klain stared at the other party silently, letting the blue gems of the "Poseidon Scepter" light up one by one. Lightning bolts instantly highlighted, twisted, entangled, and enveloped the "Klain" like a storm. Amidst the shrill screams, the figure quickly dissipated, and all traces were erased by the electric snakes. "As expected of me... I know what's in my heart Where is the soft place? I know how to plead most effectively... However, I have recognized myself before. I am Zhou Mingrui who is a fusion of Klein's memory fragments and some emotions. If I let you go, it will be equivalent to separating the two and admitting the opposition. Then as soon as I return to the real world, I will lose control..." Klein put down the scepter, closed his eyes, and sighed in a low voice." And this article also has a similar plot. What did the protagonist do? She trampled them to death, trampled them to death... Although the result was the same, the feeling given to the readers was completely different. If she hadn't been cute on the outside (she was a transvestite + liar on the inside), she would have given up on it at that time, but after reading Chapter 80, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It feels like the author has no intention at all. It's like a pot of rice. It's delicious, but there are pebbles in it from time to time, making it hard to eat.

Seraph was easily kidnapped, and his trump card was sealed by his own people. He could not unblock it in such a critical situation. If it were not for the help of the vampire prince, he would have become a specimen. Seraph became a specimen and was exhibited by the vampires. When word spread, the Holy See was laughed at by the world for the rest of his life.

I finished it with more than 40 chapters to go. I'm going to complain after reading this. To be honest, I quite like this book. Before the academy chapter, both the settings of the hammer weapons and the plot arrangement were pretty good. It's a highlight. After all, there are very few people writing about hammers, and they're still cute girls who add hammers. There's a contrast between them and cuteness. The only drawback is that it changes. It was indeed a little poisonous when I turned into a vampire, but it didn't affect the reading, but I have to complain about the academy chapter. After entering the academy chapter, the plot began to become dragging, the system's presence began to decrease, the growth rate of power slowed down significantly, and the holy flame was sealed. I know the author wants to write more dramas. But you don't have to suppress your feelings all the time. It was a bit frustrating to watch in the academy chapter. Except for the epee Adam, which is not a small explosion, other times, he has no dominance in the battle. He can fight with anyone at 50-50, but he lacks blue and physical strength in the first fight. This situation is even more obvious after the selection is over to participate in the competition. Five people fight. After all, I felt that it was very uncomfortable to watch. After the game, she was captured by the vampires for research. She was not very capable after all. After all, she deceived so many vampires. The God of Life also grew up very fast, but I never expected that she was locked up in a different place for research and suddenly went crazy... , It's uncomfortable to watch. You have so much foreshadowing, but the character of the protagonist changes too quickly. After escaping, he jumped off a cliff and lost his memory... I don't know how other people see it. Anyway, I'm going high and low. I hope the author can continue to make progress while writing a book and write a great work. It's so dry ˃ʍ˂

The first volume even made my eyes light up. I thought I had finally found a book worthy of reading. Then I immediately focused all my attention on running the coffee shop and put all other things on hold. I couldn't stand it any longer.

I see you as a girl with a stick

He almost died after being used as bait, and he just let it go without compensation?

Irena feels awkward holding a hammer. I originally came here for Irena's appearance, but it was much different from what I expected.

It's beautiful. I like Irena the most. Come on.

After reading a few chapters, I wanted to complain about it. Knowing that the white magic ball will change its appearance, you actually arranged for her tenth company... Later, she even arranged for her thirty company, and recently there was a person (chaomen) observing from the side, so what? Are you afraid that the people next to you won't be suspicious? One night passed, appearance, body shape, body shape, voice, everything was like two people, just like this... Still want to be cute? I'll be fine if I don't burn you on the stake... Anyway, what I saw was quite speechless😓...

Irena

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I chose a male channel, why did Daodu recommend this to me?

I haven't read the content yet, but just by looking at the name of the protagonist, I'm full of buffs. I just used my toes to predict that the protagonist must be Bai Mao.

Chapter 56: Poison comes here to complain. The protagonist was sold as bait. If it weren't for her, the protagonist would have died. And then she said she forgives her?

54 To 57 is really weird. Then they can be used as bait. What the hell is a level 2 protection? Neither of them is important, right? There are 9 levels in total. The highest level is level 4. Is it okay to be closer? There is also the vampire who wants to control the protagonist without killing him. Didn't the original target get killed easily? It's okay to almost get your teammates killed, right? The system will do it for free, right? Shinroku

There is a feeling that is not a witch mixed with Sword of the Dawn

This diary reminds me of Rosetta the Great.