The Chat Group of All Worlds with the Clone Flow

The setting and subject matter are not bad, but the writing is a bit messy. I write here and there, but there is no one main line. I want to write about each one, which makes the whole text feel confusing and incomprehensible. Moreover, the character of the protagonist Naruto is too bad, he is a pretentious, holy mother, has no goals, no brains, and no ambition.

Are you sure the protagonist in One Piece is not a loser? With so many cheats, it will take ten years to defeat Kaido easily. Also, the main character in the world of Naruto, the arm bone of a hundred thousand year old blue electric tyrannosaur plus other plug-ins, makes him an elite chuunin, and he is also numb. Is Douluo really the floor tile among floor tiles? It feels like if you convert the shadow level into a Douluo, it would be a god level.

After reading so many books, there is only one Tang San who has always been in the dark. This character of Tang San is also a benchmark for a unique protagonist.

The world changes too frequently, and it's a bit tiring to watch.

For those who come in later in this book, please listen to a piece of advice. In the plot of Dou Po, Xiao Yan is given a strange fire, a gift to his grandfather, and a gift to his wife. I am really convinced that I will give up anything for the sake of the plot, right?

This book is on track for the time being. Here I will repeat a few questions. First, their powers are not interoperable, which refers to the power they have gained through hard work and the power they have gained. No one can reach the sky in one step, and they must practice down-to-earth. Of course, you can still take shortcuts. After all, you are all yourself in essence. It is easy for Tao and Yun to infect each other through inexplicable connections, or to acquire some of your own characteristics and concepts in other worlds. Second, their respective insights and experiences are there. As long as you are willing to learn and change them according to local conditions, many of their methods can be used universally. Third, the small program that is used to burst out extreme combat power in a short time and borrow all your own power is essentially a superposition of power in a short period of time. If it were not all about yourself in concept, sorting out various energy systems behind the scenes with the chat group, you would have to trick yourself to death as soon as you use it! In addition, if the mental and physical strength is not enough, it will not last long at all and can only be used to save lives. Third, just like the first point, due to mutual infection, all of them will acquire their own characteristics and concepts as time goes by. However, once this seemingly free thing comes, the disadvantages of the higher level will be revealed, and they will directly become the incarnation of the strongest person. Fourth, because the author is also a complete novice, there are many pitfalls that were not filled in at the beginning. I will try to fill them in later.

Sorry, forgive me for reading the book without reading the comments and send it away directly.

You have your own opinions, and readers have their own opinions. Since you are unwilling to cater to readers, then don't complain and stop reading. Adults must learn to bear the consequences. Everything else is fine. I really don't understand the idea of ​​giving away a daughter. I almost gave him away. Mao's sister-in-law should be given away just because it has something to do with the original work? So if you were to become the Soul Emperor, would you just wait to die? After all, you have to comply with the original work

Don't offend the literary youth, it's embarrassing. The writing is not expressive enough, it cannot empathize, the truth is not profound, and it cannot convince people.

And it seems that every dungeon has the property of being a strict wife. Even if the female character is not originally a strong character, she still has to add punishment and violence to the tsundere heroine setting of Japanese comics.

And the hook is quite big, but you seem to think the protagonist should still pull it like this

The author is a genius. If readers don't like to read things, he just writes them! 😂😂😂😂

Doupo gave away his daughter... The little medical fairy, Qinglin, specially brought her back to Xiao Yan...

First of all, there are basically no fighting scenes. It's a mess. Every time there is a fight, the name of the skill will be shouted. Furthermore, the self-pleasure is too serious. Don't write it in such a self-exciting way. Who can read it with so many inner descriptions? The most important thing is not to write a running account! Running account! Although it is a novice's essay, you are no better than a junior high school student writing essays. The subject matter is good and interesting, but the writing is too sloppy. When writing a group conversation, you can't even write the pronouns. You can't distinguish the priorities. You keep switching pictures. If you don't write anything in this picture, you want to move to the next picture. You should hone yourself more. Don't just think about the word count. Why are you writing so much group chat nonsense? Would you rather use this energy to write and promote the plot? Others write rubbish, but hydrology is a good plot, and the writing is good. Everyone just curses and says a few words. I don't feel good about you thinking about hydrology when you are just starting out. If you really want to work in this field, I recommend you to hone yourself and read more about how to transfer pictures and tags in similar articles. Write fighting scenes based on Japanese anime. How can I write about Naruto beating you? There are so many good animes. If you don't learn from it, it will be useless. There are many similar articles, you can read more, take notes and write down the key points, and slowly make progress. It is useless for you to make nonsense progress in the first few chapters and the dozens of chapters later. Just write what you write at the beginning and then write what you will later. If you write it for fun, pretend I didn't say it. If you really want to earn a living wage and continue in this industry, I recommend you to study more.

Just a random word. You don't even know what the main plot is, there's no outline, it's just a hodgepodge of fan fiction that's been pieced together in a mess? Awesome.

Just tell me where I copied it from

The True God in the Nine Moons Sky fought against the gods of the Douluo Continent. The fight between the two gods did not even break the Jialing Pass, but the True Gods in the Nine Moons Sky had a star-level combat power.

I saw that you came in without sharing power, but it turns out that you are even more outrageous than sharing power.

If you can't write, you can stop for a moment. Don't fool people with some incomprehensible things. Forget it, you still have to pay for it.

Same as the through flow, top one 🙂

Too novice, too many unreasonable assumptions

I really like this kind of book, but it mainly depends on the author's imagination. I hope the author can write seriously. It doesn't matter if there are few readers. As long as the writing is good, the number of readers will gradually increase. Come on,

After reading a few chapters, there are a lot of settings that only the author knows. Many readers asked in the comments where these things came from, and then the author replied with a bunch of settings. Author, you should write the settings in...

Author, I would like to make a small suggestion. Make sure there are 2-3 main worlds, otherwise it will be too messy, such as the worlds from Ascension to After Ascension, Perfect, Covering the Sky, Dragon Talisman, etc.

Writing too lightly is like painting a picture according to the setting, everything is for the sake of excessiveness and no beginning or end.

Be prepared to be pissed off when reading this book.

I originally planned to watch it. . . But seeing the title of the opening chapter gave me a bad association. . . I won't watch anymore!

There is a system and you are licking everywhere, even Wanjie Guan can't help you! Can't feel happy

Why write about Douluo who has hydrogen per capita? Then he brags that the power system is great! The original author of "Isn't It Amazing" has finished setting it up! Fantasy sewer! What's there to brag about?

The pace is too fast. I write one by one. If the group portrait is not done well, it will be very boring.