Douluo's Xuanwu Zhenshi

Have you ever wanted to invest like me, but found only two of them and couldn't watch them for 10 minutes?

Wouldn't that author consider getting some whale gum for the protagonist? Whale glue can lay a better foundation for the protagonist to prepare for absorbing the 100,000-year-old soul ring later. In addition, the protagonist's martial soul should be able to exert better combat power at sea. Go to the seaside city in advance to experience a wave of sea soul master battles to prepare for going to the sea later to find suitable sea soul beasts. Otherwise, unless the author wants to continue Let the protagonist absorb the soul beasts on the mainland without considering the sea soul beasts. It is known that there are relatively few water soul beasts on the mainland that are 100,000 or even 80,000 or 90,000 years old. The fourth ring is 10,000 years old, and the fifth ring must be 40,000 or 50,000 years old. If it is difficult to find land, you can only go to the beach or sea to look for it. After all, there are relatively few water soul beasts with high age on land. Unless the protagonist goes to the far north and absorbs ice-type soul beasts, but the author has chosen purely water-type soul beasts, I feel it is better to go to the beach or sea to find them. After all, the protagonist's martial soul attributes are here. The fifth ring is 40,000 or 50,000 years old, and the sixth ring must be 70,000 to 80,000 years old, or even 100,000 years directly. Such water-type soul beasts on the mainland It definitely can't be done. It's not the same at sea. There are a lot of 100,000-year-old sea soul beasts at sea. Although the description of the protagonist's absorption of soul rings still seems to be effortless, whale glue can at least increase the upper limit of absorbing soul rings. After all, at this time, almost no one knows the true effect of whale glue, and it is all used to aphrodisiac! Also, if the protagonist considers his family, if he obtains whale glue and doesn't use it, then he can give it to his parents so that they can practice faster in the future. After all, improving the body when absorbing soul rings can also increase a little bit of cultivation qualifications, just a little bit. The best soul rings that are particularly suitable for martial arts may have more cultivation qualifications. If the protagonist wants to form a force, he can now rely on the Chamber of Commerce to slowly cultivate some confidants. After all, there is a paving process for construction and training, and the allocation of soul rings based on the current protagonist I feel that the fifth soul ring is 40,000 or 50,000 years old, which is conservative. The Ice and Fire Eyes should be able to be planned now. Otherwise, I feel that after Tang San comes over, if this is not planned in advance, the Ice and Fire Eyes may still be given to Tang San. There should be many people now Everyone knows the protagonist's chamber of commerce, and should also know some of the protagonist's abilities. The protagonist can use this to get in touch with Dugu Bo or Dugu Yan. Otherwise, it would be unreliable to go directly there without any preparation in advance, unless the protagonist doesn't want the fairy grass anymore! The author should consider this! If it conflicts with your later settings, forget it, it's just a personal opinion after all!

I would like to give the author a few suggestions. First, if a tortoise possessed by a martial spirit is really ugly, it would be better to have a summoning system like Yu Xiaogang. Anyway, the protagonist has the martial arts of the Nine Yin Scriptures to use, and wearing a turtle shell and using the spiral nine shadows is really not that cool! Second, the ultimate attribute can only be restrained by the ultimate attribute. If you are afraid of being restrained by the ultimate ice, you can find a suitable soul ring later to let the martial soul mutate twice to grow a snake tail, and then the snake tail will grow the ultimate ice. Third, during the soul saint period, you can consider setting the martial soul true body armor in the comics to make it look more attractive and not to wear a turtle shell. Fourth, the protagonist must have a soul bone attached to it, right? In particular, the best ones with soul bones attached to the back are definitely those with wings. In the original work, didn't Tang San's Eight Spider Spears evolve into the Eight Poseidon Wings? Therefore, if a turtle spirit possesses a turtle shell and then grows wings, it will definitely not be able to see directly, so the author can really consider the summoning system. Fifth, the soul skills can be tested later. Consider the gravity system. Gravity is not only found in the earth system, but also in the water system. Sixthly, the evolution of martial souls does not necessarily have to rely on the system. You can also absorb more good soul rings to allow the martial soul to mutate or evolve. Currently, I have only thought of these six points. The author can consider them as appropriate.

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The writing is okay. The protagonist is very loyal. A roommate who has only known him for a few days teaches martial arts. The parents who have raised the protagonist for several years have no hair. The protagonist is really a good eldest son of his parents. Awesome(／≧ω＼)

It is suggested that after the protagonist becomes the God King, he can do the same as the Seven Original Sin Gods under the God King of Destruction, and create seven first-level gods of the stars to take away the authority of the starry sky.

Is there a Shennong? I flipped through it casually, and it seemed like a nanny article?

After reading it, I haven't watched any fights about Ultimate Water. It's about Xuanwu, so it doesn't matter. The defensive ability is not reflected at all. I thought it added group defense in the gravity field. Also, the author is a time traveler and is an adult. When he sees a little brat, he becomes his brother, recognizes his elder brother, and gives him skills. It's amazing.

Ma Hongjun belongs to Shrek, Dai Hu belongs to the Xingluo royal family, Ning Rongrong belongs to the Qibao Glazed Sect, Sausage also belongs to Qibao, and Zhu Zhuqing also has a family, the Zhu family, that relies on Xingluo. Not to mention Tang Shenwang. So, if the protagonist wants to develop his power, has he chosen the wrong place? Since he has spent so much time and effort cultivating talents for others, why not consider developing his grandfather's sect or finding some civilian geniuses. If you don't have the talent, you can go to the Wuhun Palace, which is at least a large force with a low threshold. The protagonist himself may become the Pope. Shrek is here to help cultivate talents. Can the protagonist become the master of Haotian Sect, the master of Qibao Glazed Sect, or the emperor of Star Luo Empire? Probably not

I specifically subscribed to a chapter just to express my opinion. Before I read the rest of the content, I saw where I met Lin Yanyang at the Junior Soul Master Academy, so I decided to go out and turn right and give up. There are several reasons. First, the previous emphasis was that if you don't have any strength in the early stage, you should keep a low profile, and if you are full of soul power, you should hide it from your uncle and grandpa's family, for fear of attracting prying eyes. Then he showed off his so-called self-created soul skills here. Second, we only knew each other for a few days, and after listening to someone else's story, we became so-called good brothers. Then pass on the martial arts skills and moves to others. The parents who have raised me for six years are not as good as someone else's story.

Kung Fu is nothing to the protagonist, after all, heaven, but it's a bit too much for you to teach your classmates directly regardless of your parents.

The front leg just concealed the news about the innate soul power, and then immediately told the three people in the mercenary group, the so-called life and death brothers? Just one first soul ring and two parents of the protagonist are completely enough. Three more people won't help much? Asphyxiation operation.

The character design is in strong conflict with the plug-in. They also want to mess with the system and need reputation. If you want to be meticulous, you still have to fight for the limelight. I wouldn't think of wearing a mask. Wouldn't it be possible if someone wanted to check it? It doesn't matter what you want when you go to Shrek. Everyone who went to Wuhun Hall said that they would give good treatment, and some of the people who went to Shrek had some and not. You said you were going to have a harem. All are more credible than your statement.

Don't say anything else, just say that you have been saying that you need to be patient in the early stage, but in the end, someone you just met for a few days at school taught him the exercises. I didn't see you teaching your parents to practice the exercises. Sure enough, your parents are more outsiders than outsiders!

The protagonist's martial soul has not yet awakened, and in other people's minds he should not have soul power. As a result, he still publicizes his self-created soul skills everywhere. Feels like a big smart guy.

I was told to quit at the beginning. Feng Xiaotian and Oscar were both born with full soul power, and I didn't see what Wuhun Palace did to them. Your protagonist is still pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. Is it fun to pretend to be level 8 with full soul power?

The author may have sent it, so you can delete the book and go away.

I was put off by that person who taught a new person the human mind for no reason. My parents didn't even teach me how to teach a stranger. It's none of your business how miserable his family is.

No, you and Yu Xiaogang parted ways before you could urinate in either pot, and you knelt down to apologize. That's so vicious.

Uh-huh, now I have an idea Why should I help Ma Hongjun for free when there is no interest involved? Fred argued hard for the share of the Chamber of Commerce Although everyone in Shrek Academy is considered a genius, the protagonist has a cheat. It's not like he can't live without the cheat. Giving Oscar the practice skills for free is very poisonous Even for his subordinates, you find some with innate soul power of level six or seven. And then add in the skills and fairy grass elixirs, they are no worse than those from Shrek Academy. I don't understand. If you are trying to clear your name for someone from Shrek Academy, then just say it in the introduction. Don't trick people into killing them.

Excellent review, Chapter 14 directly gives the mental method to others to practice 🥵

First of all, let me explain that I am not giving the land to the third young master of the Tang family, but According to the original book, the Xuan Tian Kung practiced by Tang San is my Taoist Kung Fu. It is possible for the three flowers to gather together in the end. Who created your Nine Yin Sutra? Can he gather three flowers and become a feather and ascend?

Wow, author, you still know how to come back

Nnd, I almost forgot all the plot.

Not bad, author. Please vote for your recommendation. By the way, you don't want to join Shrek (*ﾟ◇ﾟ). You can try to establish the Xuan Ming Sect in the future.

It's been so long since I updated, have you saved any manuscripts? Don't update one chapter a day

How can you still update the book after clicking on it? Do you have to ask the editor to grant you permission every time? Or should you ask the editor to submit it for you every time?