Douluo's Body Douluo

I really like the martial arts and thunder attributes The only shortcoming of this book is the heroine. She used the field to hold down the protagonist during the competition without being discovered. Although it is unreasonable, it can be regarded as promoting the development of the plot The biggest problem of this book is that the system should not be intelligent, and the heroine Luo Xuan should not be written too messy. The best female character in fan fiction is to choose one from the original work, even Jiuxin Haitang The main character must be to unify the continent and develop soul guides. The descendants of the major forces should marry in order to eat the cake and safeguard the interests of the rule. Ning Rongrong marries the protagonist for the sake of the sect, or the Star Luo Empire sends Zhu Zhuqing as a concubine, or Qian Renxue reluctantly marries the protagonist. Only marriage will become a fun point, and it will also promote the development of the plot

In the early stage, he was able to kill Tang San instantly, but in the later stage, he was reduced to a level where he had to fight with this bastard in a battle of wits and courage. He repeatedly let go of some enemies who deserved death, just in the name of not wanting to break up, so he was so cowardly that he still practiced the Law of Killing?

The failure of Wuhun Palace was due to Wuhun Palace itself. First of all, does Wuhun Palace really need a war? After all, only a few people can profit from the war, and what most people get from the war is the loss of their families and their wives. Therefore, Wuhun Palace does not need war. The seven major sects and the two empires will not go to war with Wuhun Palace, because Wuhun Palace is similar to a religious organization and does not have administrative, financial and taxation, personnel appointment and removal rights. Without these as support, Wuhun Palace cannot challenge the empire. The two empires have too much time to deal with each other, so who will care about the Wuhun Palace. Originally, everyone was doing their job in peace and harmony, but Wuhundian wanted to encroach on rights that did not belong to him, which violated other people's red lines. In addition, your plan to steal the country is to end the deadly feud. Although I sympathize with Bibi Dong's experience, the impact of Bibi Dong's revenge is too great. If you want revenge, you can just go to Qianjia's father and son. Is it necessary to involve so many people in Wuhun Palace? Later, when Bibi Dong revealed his purpose of killing the entire Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus family, I really felt a chill. Let's look at Qian Renxue again. She has no other achievements except becoming a god in the end. Qian Renxue only has the appearance of an angel, but I really don't see the inner meaning of an angel. When it comes to angels, what we should think of is sacrifice, dedication, cleansing the soul, and guiding the way forward. What I saw in the whole novel was that Qian Renxue spent more than ten years assassinating three princes. Later, the plan failed. In order to win over Tang San, she could give up the two titles of Wuhun Palace. The superior was unjust to the subordinates, but asked the subordinates to be loyal to the superior. Isn't this a contradiction? Would a normal person choose to follow a boss who abandons him at any time? It makes me feel chilled just thinking about it. Later, he had a chance to kill Tang San and reversed the defeat, but Snake Spear refused to give in. In the end, his plan failed and he escaped in embarrassment under the cover of two Douluo Dalu. They took away all the hundreds of low-level soul masters in the Spirit Hall in the palace. Later, he achieved the divine status at the cost of Qiandaoliu's sacrifice. After becoming a god, he went to flirt with Tang San. He didn't know the importance of it, and he didn't think about why his grandfather had to sacrifice himself. Apart from her face, Qian Renxue has nothing to do with angels. Why I like Wuhundian is because Bibi Dong Qian Renxue is not, but one of those countless people who dedicate themselves to others like Xixian Yuntao. We all know that the golden age of cultivation is before the age of 30, but Brother Tao chose to go to a remote village to awaken Wuhun for the children. This is the real dedication. It is also because of Wuhundian🈶that there are countless people like Yuntao that I am a fan of Wuhundian.

Most of the plot is online, that is, the Academy of Elements, Yan and the people named Liu are provoking or snooping without any thought. The protagonist said there will be no next time, but next time nothing happens. At least I gave them a serious injury or something to let them know that they should be more respectful when facing strong people, but in the end, they passed it off lightly, letting a bunch of clowns jump around on the protagonist's head, and just tolerated it. It made me sick.

It's a pity that a good book only has one heroine, and it's an original heroine. There is no concept at all. People who read fanfiction are all LSPs, and they are Douluo fans. I'm sure 99% of the people here are LSPs. Without a girl, it seems like half the fun is missing.

Joining the Spirit Hall in the first life can make the little Yakuza take off! The innate fifth-level Poseidon Island was previously higher than the third-level Xiao Ya! How did you go about writing this? Didn't the little bastard fail to break up the opportunities several times? Do you still dare to join Wuhun Palace? Didn't you expose Xiao Wu at the beginning? He also recognized Lei Zhengyang Soul Saint as his teacher! This also allowed Xiao Zha San to get the Eight Spider Spears? Is it okay to just not report it? It's not like you, Master Soul Saint, have no connections! You can kill Xiao Wu yourself! Waiting for Tang San to become a god without changing at all? Leaving the queen to die? Everyone will die when Shennong comes

Most of the plots are fine, but if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. What kind of heroine is there? There is no need for the protagonist to go to Wuhun City. Isn't it delicious to slowly cultivate to a titled Douluo?

Tmd The woman in the east made me look at her so hard that I wanted to slap her in the face.

Practice well, why not fall in love?

Hurry up and arrange Qian Renxue's death. It's disgusting.

It is indeed a bit poisonous. This is a forced intelligence. During the competition, Tang Hao used his domain to suppress it. Did he think that everyone else was blind?

Haha, a broken badge was replaced by a secret method. The protagonist really made a lot of money👍

The system's intelligence is a failure. If it hadn't fallen asleep, it would have dissuaded many people.

I feel like this is one of the more sensible Douluo fanfics I've read in recent years. Compared with other fanfics that lick Wuhundian or the protagonist group, I personally feel that it is more suitable for the author to start his own business. In the original work, Bibi Dong was influenced by Rakshasa and was, to put it bluntly, a crazy woman. In the later period, dictatorship and bloody suppression pushed many neutrals to the opposite side, not to mention the protagonist group was purely sect and imperial aristocracy. To put it bluntly, it is a war between the soul master family headed by Wuhundian and the imperial nobles (supported by a small number of soul master families).

When I first watched Douluo Dalu, I liked Bibi Dong the most. Now it seems that she is a brainless fool in the early stage, and in the later stage she is a crazy woman who goes crazy and kills people. Qian Renxue could barely accept the idea of ​​love, but Hu Liena, a white-eyed fox, almost gave herself to the little bastard. It feels like following Wuhundian is not much better. The top management are just mindless old antiques or crazy women who may die at any time as shields or nourishment. For those in Wuhun Palace, what really hurts me is Lao Ju and Lao Gui, two brothers in distress, and this group of pig-headed bosses.

What can I say, it looks good from the front, but it starts to feed poison from the back.

Are these three titled Douluo the only ones in Wuhun Palace? No one came out when Chen Xin was causing trouble. Bibi Dong was also at such a high level. If you fought with Tang Hao, you would be seriously injured. There was no one left. It was just a joke!

The protagonist group is a group of morally corrupt scum, and everyone in Wuhun Palace is inferior to them.

I found that although the author wanted to write a good emotional drama, the reading experience was really poor, and it felt like it was confusing and confusing. I thought it would be better to be rough and give them a clear answer directly. There is also the protagonist's second martial spirit. Although it was said early on that the protagonist has two martial spirits, I didn't know what the protagonist's martial spirit was until more than 100 pictures. There are also many dialogues written by the Riddler, which are written in a fog, and the reading experience is really a little bit worse. But overall, it's quite interesting. I didn't expect the protagonist Ba Dong to oust the throne. I thought the author would have to drag out the whole process for fifty or sixty pictures. Overall, it's a good review and it's worth a look.

Explain

Brother, the author, look at this The first soul skill: Shaking the Sky and the Earth (increases the strength and power of the body, the direction is that the great shaman who fights against the sky and the earth in mythology can develop physical magical powers) The second soul skill: The Furnace of Heaven and Earth (absorbs the energy of the heaven and earth, can live without oxygen in space, can absorb toxins and other things, can be matched with the first soul ring, the body and strength are getting stronger all the time, can be developed into physical magical powers) The third soul skill: Wushang (turns all attacks into the aura of heaven and earth, and can only fight with the physical body. If you want to break this upper limit of immunity, you have to go up to 2 major levels, and you can integrate it into the body and become a magical power through practice) The fourth soul skill: Gu Yuan Shouyi (the strength of the soul and body is shared, so that the state of mind is not affected, and the dbuff effects such as curse weakness and so on reach the minimum value, and it can be practiced as a magical power) The fifth soul skill: Unparalleled Madness (temporary enhancement skill, absorbs the essence and energy to enter a state without any control, and all attributes are greatly enhanced by a percentage. The duration of this state becomes longer with the total amount of essence, energy, and god. Exiting the state will be weak for half a day because there are second soul skills and fourth soul skills that can recover quickly.) The sixth soul skill: Soul Destruction (soul strength is judged. If you are stronger than the opponent, the damage will be increased by 60%; if you are weaker than the opponent, you will cause damage and can also put dbuffs such as stun, weakness, etc. On the opponent. If you are much stronger than the opponent, it depends on whether you want to kill the opponent) The seventh soul skill: Wuhun True Body (the effect is similar to the law of heaven and earth, and all attributes will be greatly enhanced by a large percentage) The eighth soul skill: Solar energy gathering (amplification skill, instantly absorbs the energy of the world and the body, causing a devastating attack to the enemy) The ninth soul skill: Indestructible Golden Body (the amplification skill greatly enhances the percentage of all attributes, is not subject to any dbuff, can be reborn after severed limbs, the body can still become stronger when it reaches the god level, and can be reborn with blood when the god king reaches the god level) The first, second, third, fourth, and sixth soul skills can all be practiced over time to become physical and soul magical powers, and they can all become stronger at all times. The life span of other soul rings can be increased through the second soul skill. The self-created soul skill Domination Fist can combine one's own will and soul impact against the enemy. The enemy not only has to resist physical damage but also bear soul damage. Field: Dou Zhan Wushuang (the enemy's all attributes are reduced by 15%, all allies' attributes are increased by 15%, if there are one enemy in the field, all allies' attributes are increased by 5% for each additional enemy) Because the main skill is difficult to think about, I have been thinking about it. Will the author seriously consider adding some to it?

It looks good, come on the author👍

Emotional drama

Author, I can write about the emotional scene with Hu Liena. After all, I have waited long enough.

The writing is very good, I hope the author can stick to it😃

Why did Bibi Dong take away Hu Liena's daughter to take care of her? She was not her own granddaughter. She was still not close to her own daughter, and she was not close to Hu Liena. She and Qian Renxue still had some grudges that could not be completely eliminated. Fortunately, Qian Renxue had a good ending now. She had relatives and a daughter again, and Bibi Dong no longer needed to deal with her. Her heart supports her. The temperament of Qian Renxue's daughter can be seen as Qian Renxue's happy childhood. If Qian Renxue had not had those bad experiences in childhood, she would probably be as naughty as her daughter. I don't want Bibi Dong to take care of Qian Renxue's daughter. She is not worthy. Once she ruins one, she can't ruin another. Maybe Qian Renxue doesn't want her to take care of her either.