Shock! After the General Read His Mind, the Salty Beauty Was Forced to Pamper Him

Shennong's evaluation: non-toxic, but also tasteless. I haven't read much about Shen Nong. The reason will be discussed later. Advantages: There are no poisonous points, the plot is not bad, the emotional line is developed around the ability of mind reading, the male is a cold-faced King of Hell who has some inner drama, the female protagonist tries her best to break off the engagement in the early stage, but in the later stage it should be like a sweet pet. Disadvantages: The language description is pale, the transitions are stiff, and there is no sense of reality. It is a running account type in the composition; As far as I can see, these parts have almost no expressions or scene descriptions. They are basically all dialogues and explanations. The description of people's expressions is limited to "hey smiles", "strange questions" and "scared out" "Tears", I may not have paid attention to the description of the scene, and it did not create the corresponding atmosphere at all. After you finish the plot and I finish it, it will be gone and it will be on to the next scene; The article has many details that are problematic, such as about travel, women's chastity, and the lack of reaction from relatives after disappearance, etc. In short, it is just a fiction. Don't join the archaeological party. Suggestion: It is suitable for reading ten lines at a time, just read without thinking.

I feel that the attitude of the Jiang family towards the heroine is very unreasonable! ! In terms of identity, Jiang's father is a businessman. In ancient times, classes were divided. He was at the bottom. First of all, he shouldn't be as stupid as described in the article. He always thinks about substitute marriage and treats the male protagonist as a fool? Then there is the Jiang family's attitude towards the heroine. The heroine is still the general's fiancée and is much higher than the others in terms of status. At least everyone in the house, no matter what they think in their hearts, they should have a flattering attitude towards the heroine on the surface, not like in the article...

Um, why, I have articles about female videos in my daily recommendations for male videos 🤔🤔

Shennong's evaluation: non-toxic, but also tasteless. I haven't read much about Shen Nong. The reason will be discussed later. Advantages: There are no poisonous points, the plot is not bad, the emotional line is developed around the ability of mind reading, the male is a cold-faced King of Hell who has some inner drama, the female protagonist tries her best to break off the engagement in the early stage, but in the later stage it should be like a sweet pet. Disadvantages: The language description is pale, the transitions are stiff, and there is no sense of reality. It is a running account type in the composition; As far as I can see, these parts have almost no expressions or scene descriptions. They are basically all dialogues and explanations. The description of people's expressions is limited to "hey smiles", "strange questions" and "scared out" "Tears", I may not have paid attention to the description of the scene, and it did not create the corresponding atmosphere at all. After you finish the plot and I finish it, it will be gone and it will be on to the next scene; The article has many details that are problematic, such as about travel, women's chastity, and the lack of reaction from relatives after disappearance, etc. In short, it is just a fiction. Don't join the archaeological party. Suggestion: It is suitable for reading ten lines at a time, just read without thinking.

No one? Let me try the water 😃

The expressions, movements, and demeanor of the characters are poorly described and seem very thin. Moreover, the status of merchants in ancient times was very low. It is unreasonable how they can attend the banquet of the Marquis Mansion. Moreover, the personal maids and acquaintances can basically recognize them. It is unreasonable that the maids selling things cannot be recognized by the familiar ladies.

The heroine is stupid, and the hero is stupid. I don't know how she lived to be so old. The heroine just came here. The hero is probably because she doesn't have a husband. She has a husband, and her husband has a concubine. She died long ago, but she can still live to this day. I have never seen such a stupid person.

Please read it again before uploading and correct any typos! Many chapters are full of bugs! Too many bugs!

It's not as good as the previous book. It's obviously following the format of the previous book, but why has the writing style not improved but instead dropped a lot?

Is it missing/amnesia again? Don't. I want to see it happily.