The Glory Ceiling of the Full-Time Master

It still looks good

Brother, can you update it quickly?

Ye Xiu's highest hand speed is only over 700. If you write that both of them reached 1,000, it's a bit outrageous. They still maintained it for two minutes. This is superhuman. In the original book, Ye Xiu's hand speed of over 700 only lasted for a few seconds, and his hands were shaking so much after the game.

The setting problem is too big. The time traveler, who is familiar with the plot and seems to be a master of Glory, chooses to be a social animal during the prime time of Glory. The reason is that he is not the protagonist? ? ? Then, judging from the author's operation, Ye Xiu retired and joined Ye Xiu. The reason is that Ye Xiu awakened the protagonist's heart of glory😨😨😨 Author, did you not wake up when you set it like this? ? ?

I wrote it too reluctantly. I gave up glory for life. I feel like begging for a golden job, becoming a sparring partner, going to glory to get gold, becoming an assistant coach. If I want to play professionally, I can develop tactics like Yu Wenzhou and make up for my weaknesses. If it doesn't work, I can become the king of duels and only play one game at a time.

Oh, I'm working full-time again. Please support me. Come on.

Coming back to work professionally at the age of 28 is like starting a business from scratch after you are over 60. I have no desire to continue.

If the heroine Yunxiu was watched by more people,

It's really difficult. Sanren has no advanced skills and has given up on ultimate moves. After upgrading your character's weapons, it will become more and more like Sanren's style. So, do you want to change jobs? There are gains and losses. Designing a profession out of thin air without the reasonable logic of Sanren is really confusing.

Brothers, please comment, whether you have good or bad reviews, whether you want to scold me, or whether you think my book is terrible, then I know that at least someone will read this book o(╥╥)o

Brother Xiao, Brother Xiao, this title really makes me vomit.

This is the author's first time writing. Basically half of it is the original text and interspersed with his own content. However, it is really much easier to write this way. It is not bad to practice for the first time. If you have ideas later, you can go your own way.

28 Years old is too old, so it's better to reduce the number.

Chen Guo's CP in this novel always feels a little inconsistent. I wonder if it's a problem with the writing technique. After reading it, I always feel a little awkward. I wonder if other book friends feel this way? 😰😰

The plot and everything were okay, but the pace was too fast, and the heroine was not chosen well. It was Chu Yunxiu, but Tang Rou was not good. Anyway, I felt that I had no feelings for Chen Guo, so I left.

Very talented, good writing style, many parts of the plot are written with feeling and ideas. It's a pity that it's a bit immature and has been abused too much. If there is an experienced person to guide me, I might be able to write a good book. The potential is good, especially the spirit of research, similar to Ming Guang. I suggest you find a senior to teach you, or create a book club to discuss with more reliable book friends, or ask an editor for guidance. This book has too many poisonous points and that's it. I look forward to your next book.

When writing a fanfic, the author should try to figure out the character's personality. The characters in it look like they are two different people from those in the original work, and there is a strong sense of separation.

Write less bloody dramas. Mo Xing is a shitty drama, and my sister is a shitty drama, and there is something wrong with her hands. The sensory quality is really bad and it will affect the quality of the book. I originally thought that Mo Xing was just a passer-by, but when I saw Mo Xing appear again, something happened at home, and her father was gone. The male protagonist really thought that he was a tragedy in life, so he couldn't have anything good happen to him. So I don't want to read it and abandon the book. Sadness, suffering, bad luck, either 1 or 2. Not 3. Too much of it makes me feel sad, just like Korean dramas, which is annoying to watch. The writing is really good, I look forward to your new book

The proportion of love lines can be smaller. When watching Full Time, the main thing is to watch the game.

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