Starting from the Peerless Tang Sect, He Began to Dominate the World

Most readers who read the Dou Er fanfic do so because they feel that Huo Yuhao's life in the original work is too tragic, and they hope to have a different life in the fanfic. After all, as the protagonist, he was played by Tang San all his life. The woman who truly loved him had her personality disappear and be sacrificed under Tang San's secret manipulation. It was really depressing to watch. However, if the protagonist of a fanfic helps Huo Yuhao many times for no reason, it is suspected of licking the original protagonist. Some readers do not like this, so you must control the degree. Huo Yuhao, who was helped by the protagonist, must show his worth and repay the protagonist's help. This is only reasonable.

I've finished reading it, it's pretty good. Please give the author some suggestions. 1. The punctuation marks should be as funny as possible, and the sentences and pauses should be as clear as possible. There should be fewer exclamation marks. Too many exclamation marks can make you tired and feel inexplicable. 2. Also, try not to copy and paste the original work too much. Just summarize it briefly. Otherwise, it will be too confusing. Just let the protagonist show off more. One chapter is about two thousand words. 3. The author can stabilize the update time. It is best to publish it regularly, at seven o'clock or eight o'clock every day, so that readers can remember it more easily, and you can keep up with it if you follow up. Nothing else, come on, author, give me a recommendation vote to encourage me 🌹

The author makes a suggestion, if your heroine cannot be written well, then try to reduce the length of the heroine, for fear that the author cannot write the heroine well. What kind of intelligence-reducing operation will happen again?

The subject matter is very good, but what the hell is the protagonist squatting outside the Duke's Palace with Huo Yuhao for 100 days? You're at level 20 and you're wasting 100 days by not hunting for soul rings? And you, a level 20 guy, can observe Huo Yuhao without entering the Duke's Mansion. Doesn't that mean you don't take the Duke's Mansion seriously?

I just voted for two months. I hope the author will write well. There are still too few fans of Peerless Tang Sect, compared to Douluo 1 and Douluo 3. And many of them just start with the beginning. In other words, the writing is too bad. Those who write like this are not bad, please give me more support.

I hope book friends can enthusiastically vote for recommendations!

Damn, I was already stuck and wanted to put it away, but I ended up adding so many collections in two days, which scared me to death. Is the investment period over?

Ah, here, you copy the original text too much.

Moreover, the protagonist should be decisive at the critical moment. He must be decisive. Kill the woman when she needs to be killed without any hesitation.

Why is it gone after entering the God Realm? The free one just disappeared? When will it be re-listed?

I remember the protagonist has a system? The system's presence is too low. In the original work, Xiao Xiao, who has twin martial souls, is not mentioned at all.

I hope you don't think that other authors will stop updating after writing a little bit Come on!

Come on, keep an eye on you. By the way, I'm thinking, doesn't the golden dragon also have the power of destruction? There is also the creative power of the silver dragon (the Lord speaks of the gold and silver dragon king). You can also bring these two.

Let Huo Yuhao show his value. Only in this way can the protagonist offer a price for cooperation. In addition, if you don't want to be stared at by the three dogs, it's best to stay away from Wang Dong

Don't be a stallion, don't be a stallion, don't be a stallion Say important things three times! ! !

If you want Huo Yuhao to be your subordinate, you must first kill Tang San.

Open a thread and ask a question. Do you think it is necessary to write Huo Yuhao's role? The plot of San Shao is basically very tight in the early stage, and there is nothing to insert other people. I don't want to drink water every day, this is very annoying! Any reasonable suggestions?

Why is the chasing investment function temporarily closed🧐

There has been no update for seven days. Has the author entered the palace?

It's such a pity that it's gone after entering the God Realm.

Most of Dou Er's protagonists are the same as Yu Hao in the original work. They have both soul masters and soul mentors. You are going to take the route of unifying the continent anyway, so you can just grab the technicians, so you don't have to learn them yourself.

How about two strong attacks in one team?

I'm afraid I won't have a son named Xu Fengnian

Damn it, why did you delete the comment?