I Mirror the Heavens from Douluo

The writing is messy. You can't even stop yourself from writing like this.

There is no need to watch it when you see the protagonist killing Ye Lingling. Lingling was already miserable. In the original work, her life force was absorbed by the little Yakuza, causing her foundation to be unstable. She also had to marry that disgusting guy Xue Beng. Who did her little assistant offend? You are here to kill her as a passerby. Do you really think that the reader has no temper?

When I was a kid, I watched Douluo and I said on the forum that Tang San was a villain and an aristocrat. I was scolded badly. By the way, Douluo II hadn't been released yet. Now it seems that I was right and it was not a nonsense.

It doesn't matter if Ye Lingling is killed for the soul bone, there is no need to talk about making up for regrets or other settings. There is no essential difference between Tang San and Tang San, he is an egoist with no moral bottom line.

I feel like a lot of Douluo fandoms nowadays have one goal in mind, which is to mess with Tang San. The purpose is too strong. If you become enemies with Tang San when you are growing up, just do it. This is it before the martial arts awakens. It feels like the main character appears just to mess with Tang San. Does writing like this have traffic?

Damn it, if the heroine didn't tell her earlier, mark it out, it's a waste of expression. Isn't it just to watch those popular female characters when reading fanfiction? Why do you write a fanfic about practicing martial arts? There are many books about fairy tales and fantasy that don't require writing. I was deceived, I lost my sense of belonging, my heart dropped, I gave up.

The time the system appeared was too poisonous, I felt it. The front is really good, the basic framework is also out, the golden finger is also suitable, and the protagonist's character is also lovable. It is not like the stallion of Tang San in many fans nowadays. The mirror pupil is added to the Ruyi golden cudgel, and then the self-created soul skills gradually become stronger. The gimmicks and the sense of satisfaction are enough. Follow the steps and you will not lose. For a Douluo fan, I feel the thrill of slowly becoming stronger bit by bit, instead of the sudden stop like the deus ex machina Suddenly a system came on, it was fast travel and it was a mission, and I felt constrained all of a sudden. This protagonist felt meaningless to me. I said so much before, but as soon as the system came out, Any other pig can reach the peak, and in the chapters of the system, I feel that the protagonist is just a dispensable labor force. I don't feel that the system has any benefits at this time And it is messy. It is better to go to the end of Douluo first. After the peak, you can take out the system and think about all the heavens and then all the heavens. It is also an option Instead of reacting like a fly appearing in delicious food like now, really, it's okay for your system Douluo to come out and travel to other worlds at the end. I really frowned through the chapters of the system. I know the author wanted it, but it's too hasty and too complicated. It's just what I feel. I don't really like it, and I won't write too much about it. It's really a pity.

It's all good up front, but if you don't have any grievances, you just kill Ye Lingling. The three views are touching. Tang San in Dou Yi is more human than the protagonist. He also has the title of revenge when he goes to Wuhun Palace. The protagonist created is even more disgusting than Tang San.

The author's writing is very good. As for the system, I don't think there is any problem. It can explain why the protagonist is so talented and can also pave the way for the world. However, the system is too powerful and it is really meaningless. After all, the system can be restarted directly and can resurrect you even if you die. Overall, it is very good. As for the comment area, most of them are hackers. They are just a little bit poisonous, not too big. Even if you read too much, you will ignore it (for example, I don't see how poisonous this book is). Good luck to the author.

I can only say that this protagonist is even more deficient than a deficient person.

After reading more than ten chapters, you told me that there is no heroine? Why don't you mark it out if there is no heroine?

Another Tang San. No, even more humble than Tang San, a fish that slipped through the net under modern education.

You can't write without putting poison, right? After 30 chapters, the readers will be screened directly, and all the smart ones will run away.

Damn, why is the heroine Zhu Zhuqing? Can't keep up with the protagonist's growth at all? Growth and everything depends on the protagonist. Isn't this asking for trouble? It's like raising a pet, and Zhu Zhuqing was born in Douluo Continent with congenital deficiencies, and the upper limit of his growth is obviously not high.

After Chapter 31, I have persuaded so many people to quit. It is a pity that the author of a book with a high opening is humbled. That's it for this one. Let's wait for the next book to read again! I hope that lessons can be learned, or maybe the greater the hope, the greater the disappointment?

Mirror World

It looked fine from the beginning, but when the system came out, I felt that something was wrong, and the level suddenly dropped a lot.

Killing innocent people for their soul bones is a matter of course. Even more disgusting than Tang San!

There is no problem with the system, but there is a problem with the mission... I won't talk about preventing the marriage, Dai Mubai escapes from marriage and ruins it, and I won't talk about preventing Tang San from becoming a god. The last one is to help Bibi Dong unify the continent. Is your system the protagonist's or Bibi Dong's? Does she have anything to do with the protagonist? You might as well set task three to unify yourself or help others unify.

It is worthy of being discarded by the daily guide to poisoning women.

I'm speechless. The system won't be released early. The pig's feet are finalized. The image of blazing eyes and golden hoops is then added to the system. There are also mandatory tasks. It's a disgusting batch.

I feel like the writing is not very good. They are all time travellers, souls of the second generation. The writing is more mature, just like Xiaobai Wen. It writes some retarded talk.

The front part is okay, but people who haven't read the original book shouldn't read it 😅😅😅

Author, you play the black dragon in Wu Geng Ji. I always feel that something is missing. I looked back at Wu Geng Ji today and found out that the author, what do you say about the black dragon that you play? Lacking that kind of evil spirit, killing the ancient gods of an era, and playing with the evil spirit, I feel that Heilongtian uses more colorless realms. I think the protagonist always uses dark elements. It seems that he did not use any dark elements in Wu Geng Ji in the original work. In addition to evil spirits, he also has a arrogant temperament and colorless realm. This should be called the real black dragon

I feel like the writing at the back is a bit unreadable. It's not as good as the first part. I just read the book and read about the main character. What's the clone?

The subsequent plot becomes more and more boring one after another. There is no plot coherence at all. You can just jump around at will.

Author, isn't your other book updated? 🙂🙂

Author, can you write about the movie version of Game of Life, One Punch Man.

Chapter 31 The system is activated, the system flows the novel

I think the author used the seven deadly sins to kill people like Tang San. I think it would be more interesting. He should not add the eight deadly sins of hypocrisy.